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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Great start very fresh very different ... But u had to use annoying ashas pic 😡 😆 interesting so rags is going after suhana first but what makes him go with Kalpi. 😛

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deepu_kutty

@deepu_kutty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Nice intro but wired prologue continue soon

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prishna_fan

@prishna_fan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

It's a very nice start torture queen

I feel I t's like a American show lol... Well by reading the prologue then I don't know the development

Looking forward this one 👍🏼

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome start dear.. Sorry for late comnt.. Got busy wth work.. Waiting for ur update.. Plz update soon..

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swara2504
Congrats aria..
New story...love it
Update soon

Aww Thanks Swara 😃 Glad you Liked it

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Wow another story [:D/]
Thanks Aria 🤗
Prologue is super excited
Raghav and Prem fighting like two little kids lol
CS is awesome and very interesting
I can't wait to read more :)

😳 Thank You Natasha 😳 🤗 Prologue Is Weird😕 Raghav and Prem Aren't best Friends 😆 Thanks Again sweetie 😃

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Vsapras
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...🥳...🥳
Hey ..Aria ..I forgot to congratulate ..you ...
For the new story ...sorry ..😆
Bunnies ..are multiplying ..fast ...😲.😆

Thank You Madeline 😃 😃 Yes Your Love for Bunnies will grow 😆 Suck it up 😆

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: rachufan
Neew story wow aria darling
thanku for pm 😊
Prologue and cs seems interesting
eager to read

Thank You Antara 😃 😃 Glad you Liked it sweetie

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: farhana04
Thank u aria. Very interesting concept. I would love to read it.
Both raghav and Kalpi were best friends and are married now. I want to know
Their past.
Raghav is a playboy in most of our stories and kalpi never gets someone fresh in her life, always second hand husband. Not fair yaar😆

Aww Thanks Faru 😳 LOL yes They Were 😳 😆 Well The Playboy we Write is Something different From the Playboy I want to show 😉