A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: rani214
Wow yet another mindlowing story...beautiful concept
Rags gave up his immortality to b wit his love kalpi n facing all hardship to make a living ...Awww m already in love wit dis rags he is soo adorable
Wow ragna first meeting n coffee shop convo was amazing😳
Guess d freak watching ragna is her ex
Eager to read further...cont soon😛

Thank Rani!! The angel thing is inspired from City of Angels. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepu90
Awesome update

Thanks! 😊

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Originally posted by: riaka
Lovely update. Ragna meeting was nice. Is that drunken guy in the car is kalpi's ex boyfriend. .?

Thank you! 😆 You and Kate thought the same thing about the ex.

Wait and see who it is?😛

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Originally posted by: abxetz
Lovely update dear.vo car mai khon dha? 😲

Thank youuu 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lolor
lovely beautiful update

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice chappy Vidu di..

Thank you Brickyyy 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: dragonok
Beautiful ss 👏 perfectly written nd with such a perfection 👏
Wooohhh
I love you 😳 😛

😲 You actually commented! 😲 Thank you dragon. 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

Thank you! 😆 You and Kate thought the same thing about the ex.

Wait and see who it is?😛

Okay waiting 😛

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Originally posted by: premap
Sweet update. Rags is innocent like a 'new born' ! It reminds of an old English movie where the Angel gives up his 'life' as an Angel for his Love on Earth. But sad when he comes to Earth ,she meets an accident and is dead. Sad story. Hope it will not end up tragic. Lovely concept.

Thank you! And yes! That movie is City of Angels. That's what inspired me. 😃 I also hated the ending of that movie. He became mortal for her and after they spent a FEW DAYS together, she died in the accident. I mean I understand the message they were trying to convey in the ending about fate, destiny, the fact that just because he gave up immortality to live with her does not mean it was actually going to happen. But I still hated that she died. It was so cruel. 😭

So nooo as my plot stands now it doesn't involve a tragedy. It is more on the supernatural and thriller side. I took the angel inspiration from city of angels but my plot has its owns twists. You will see 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wah wah kya update diya hai aapne vidya ji n seriously I was blushing too with innocense raghav was saying ufff killed me n winnie the pooh ahaha vidya poor my raghav was imagining my jaan ( ashish) I call him jaan
I was laughin blushing totally imagining it
Loved it

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