A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37

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Katty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

I am guessing that freak is none other than ex of Kalpana. .. :x

He is back already?

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Another story by you, I am so excited. you're on a roll. 😃 So it is inspired from City of Angels. I have come to love Raghavs of your stories so much. They have a cute innocence, honesty and loads of love in their heart. This Raghav is just too adorable and innocent. He gave up his immortality, just to be with his love. He is slowly learning ways of life and appreciates every moment as a reason & blessing by God. Some lesson also along the way in story. Love this story and looking forward to Ragna love story.

P.s.: I would really love to see Raghav as an angel again, maybe even if it is quite late. Is it possible?

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IronThor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Another story by you, I am so excited. you're on a roll. 😃 So it is inspired from City of Angels. I have come to love Raghavs of your stories so much. They have a cute innocence, honesty and loads of love in their heart. This Raghav is just too adorable and innocent. He gave up his immortality, just to be with his love. He is slowly learning ways of life and appreciates every moment as a reason & blessing by God. Some lesson also along the way in story. Love this story and looking forward to Ragna love story.
P.s.: I would really love to see Raghav as an angel again, maybe even if it is quite late. Is it possible?

No he can't be an angel again. The way it works in my story is the mortals can't see Angels and the Angels can't be with mortals. Those are the "rules" so to speak. If Raghav has chosen to remain an angel then he would never have met Kalpana. He would just be able to watch her without her actually knowing he exists. He would have only been able to meet her if she died and he was the Angel who helped her on her journey to heaven.

An angel can show themselves to an angel who has become a mortal though but only in dire circumstances when given permission to do so by the Creator. If an angel wants to live a mortal life then the sacrifice they make is they give up on immortality forever. And that is what Raghav did. He can't go back on that now so he can't be an angel anymore. If he could become an angel again then that would just make the sacrifice of giving up immortality insignificant and not a sacrifice at all. With his mortal life he has gotten a sixth sense though. It's one of the attributes that lingered with him. He could sense when evil is close by.

Edited by Asgard_Nim - 10 years ago

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wow! Another masterpiece in the making :)
It's a unique concept as always
Raghav is a angel watching over Kalpi
I like that angel Raghav let go of Kalpi hand and give her a chance to live her life again even though he didn't want to. Kalpi feeling Raghav presence was awesome
It make me wonder if Angels really exists 😊
Raghav giving up immortality to live a normal human being is amazing
I love that Raghav is so in love with Kalpi that he is ready to face all consequences and hardship that comes his way...
RagNa having coffee together and getting to know each other is nice
Oh no! Who is that idiot that's following Kalpi??
Superb updates. I enjoy reading both chapters so far :)

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

sry for lateness

awesome update

god it so lovely

rag feel the mortal take for granted till not threatened true

hmm there shopping n rag ask for coffee

rag sincere answer

the fist envy feeling

rag has no mobile

yaar i want this rag for me

hmm whose following kalpi now

update soon

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riaka

@riaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Lovely update. Ragna meeting was nice. Is that drunken guy in the car is kalpi's ex boyfriend. .?

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abxetz

@abxetz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Lovely update dear.vo car mai khon dha? 😲

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smriti dubey

@dragonok

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Beautiful ss 👏 perfectly written nd with such a perfection 👏
Wooohhh
I love you 😳 😛

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Sweet update. Rags is innocent like a 'new born' ! It reminds of an old English movie where the Angel gives up his 'life' as an Angel for his Love on Earth. But sad when he comes to Earth ,she meets an accident and is dead. Sad story. Hope it will not end up tragic. Lovely concept.

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Heyyllooo VI..😉
Yet again.. I'm unresng my previous one, here itself 😛
After reading this, I was like WOW!!!
The plot seems like a pace going in a gentle manner giving a kindda peaceful mind to the readers(surely for me😳)!! and no doubt that I'm already loving this story!❤️😳
Jus after reading the first para.. I thought raghav will be a doctor! And with that I continued reading it, confusing myself for the wrong assumption I've made.. But as i caught the hints u gave, then I got it that raghav is an angel.. Dats the reason that kalpi couldn't able to reach him, though she saw his eyes and lso she could feel him, but couldn't see him.. And lso the part where raghav thought she stared at him while reading a novel.. How beautiful is that!!😳
So he gave up his immorality to get her company and feel what the mortals feel like..
VI.. u strtd their intro with chocolate involved in it!❤️😉 and kalpi remembered those eyes, which she searched for while to see them again.. And she did it!! I loved the humour u put up in this one.. It was innocently cute one!!! Not only that he is working so hard, with a strong belief that he have to be with his love and to take care of her, with his angel like brother's blessings!! 😃
VI.. U thought dat there's a poet in me😆 but the real poet is in u!! And now a days I'm finding them in ur updates, like I found one in this one.. "You gave me fear in her absence so that I would appreciate her presence even more" this is the proof 😉 and raghav is like full of surprises for kalpi.. For his liking of classic novel winne pooh 😆 and his favorite Indiana Jones 😛 or it maybe the matter that he doesn't have any cellphone!! and there he felt the human's most annoying feeling.. "Jealousy" that too of a fictitious character! Same time he felt the pain she mentioned abt her accident.. 😊 VI.. Loved it a lot!! ❤️
And there's something fishy with the end part.. 😆 and I'm waiting eagerly fr it!!😉

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