A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37 - Page 7

Originally posted by: kalbhavs

Wah wah kya update diya hai aapne vidya ji n seriously I was blushing too with innocense raghav was saying ufff killed me n winnie the pooh ahaha vidya poor my raghav was imagining my jaan ( ashish) I call him jaan
I was laughin blushing totally imagining it
Loved it

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

😆 Made you blush 😆

Wow vid...😳
awsm,fabulas update...Hats off to you for d unique concept. 👏

I'm deeply in love wid dis raghav...
he is so innocnt..😳,in mostly stories kalpi is inncnt bt here raghav innocnc took my heart...

Raghav sacrifc his power jst for kalpi,want to be in her arms,to feel her n most imprtnty dt lips on his...😳 naughty😳

So kalpi is also atrctv 2wards him...dis is going good way.raghav get embrsd for nt hving cel phn and made kalpi blushd by his cmnt😳

i think dt drunkn guy in car is defintly her boyfrnd. 😡 i hope angels take care of raghav frm him.
pls update nxt chpter soon

Omg, it's a lovely story. Raghav is such a lovely person. You are good in supernatural stories.

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

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awesome updateee

I am soo loving this story speciallyy raghav he is adorable and innocent. The concept is amazing. He gave up his immortality to be with the women he love. Raghav experiencing the struggles and eveythng that mortal goes throw and he getting to knw the difficult and that mortal take there life's for granted and him learning eveythng was nice.he going through all the struggles still think that his life is a blessing nice.he likes going through them so that he could hav the company of women who he loves and give her a comfortable enivorment . They met at the shopping mall and then the machine not working to give him more time to spend with kalpana and he knew it all the angels work. There convo at the coffee shop awesome. For raghav its too hard to lie since the angel him in still linger and for him its a sin. Raghav felt pain seeing sorrow in kalpi eyes.who was following kalpi? Was it her creppy ex?

You wrote it soo beautifully . I just fell in love with this story again.

Originally posted by: sweet1308

sry for lateness

awesome update

god it so lovely

rag feel the mortal take for granted till not threatened true

hmm there shopping n rag ask for coffee

rag sincere answer

the fist envy feeling

rag has no mobile

yaar i want this rag for me

hmm whose following kalpi now

update soon

Originally posted by: gargdia

Wow vid...😳
awsm,fabulas update...Hats off to you for d unique concept. 👏

I'm deeply in love wid dis raghav...
he is so innocnt..😳,in mostly stories kalpi is inncnt bt here raghav innocnc took my heart...

Raghav sacrifc his power jst for kalpi,want to be in her arms,to feel her n most imprtnty dt lips on his...😳 naughty😳

So kalpi is also atrctv 2wards him...dis is going good way.raghav get embrsd for nt hving cel phn and made kalpi blushd by his cmnt😳

i think dt drunkn guy in car is defintly her boyfrnd. 😡 i hope angels take care of raghav frm him.
pls update nxt chpter soon

Originally posted by: redpetal

Omg, it's a lovely story. Raghav is such a lovely person. You are good in supernatural stories.

Oh no! Look like Raghav life is in danger. Those evil man smell his scent but don't know it's him...
Hope they don't find Raghav anytime soon
Raghav is not only the most handsome and kindhearted man but he is also hardworking and humble
Raghav boss promoting him was awesome. I just love Raghav innocent in this story
His boss giving him some tips for his date was nice
Aww Raghav take flowers and chocolate for Kalpi :)
I love how RagNa faces light up seeing each other
They are so cute...
Beautiful update. I love it

Awesome update really lovely