Originally posted by: vyshuu..
Heyyllooo VI..😉
Yet again.. I'm unresng my previous one, here itself 😛
After reading this, I was like WOW!!!
The plot seems like a pace going in a gentle manner giving a kindda peaceful mind to the readers(surely for me😳)!! and no doubt that I'm already loving this story!❤️😳
Jus after reading the first para.. I thought raghav will be a doctor! And with that I continued reading it, confusing myself for the wrong assumption I've made.. But as i caught the hints u gave, then I got it that raghav is an angel.. Dats the reason that kalpi couldn't able to reach him, though she saw his eyes and lso she could feel him, but couldn't see him.. And lso the part where raghav thought she stared at him while reading a novel.. How beautiful is that!!😳
So he gave up his immorality to get her company and feel what the mortals feel like..
VI.. u strtd their intro with chocolate involved in it!❤️😉 and kalpi remembered those eyes, which she searched for while to see them again.. And she did it!! I loved the humour u put up in this one.. It was innocently cute one!!! Not only that he is working so hard, with a strong belief that he have to be with his love and to take care of her, with his angel like brother's blessings!! 😃
VI.. U thought dat there's a poet in me😆 but the real poet is in u!! And now a days I'm finding them in ur updates, like I found one in this one.. "You gave me fear in her absence so that I would appreciate her presence even more" this is the proof 😉 and raghav is like full of surprises for kalpi.. For his liking of classic novel winne pooh 😆 and his favorite Indiana Jones 😛 or it maybe the matter that he doesn't have any cellphone!! and there he felt the human's most annoying feeling.. "Jealousy" that too of a fictitious character! Same time he felt the pain she mentioned abt her accident.. 😊 VI.. Loved it a lot!! ❤️
And there's something fishy with the end part.. 😆 and I'm waiting eagerly fr it!!😉
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