A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Awesome update

Wow rag so calmed yet show arman his way out

Hmm kalpi teased rag for the movie n his cheek

Rag annoy kalpi unknowingly

Rag in pool of blood

Update soon

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kalbhavs

@kalbhavs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

hi vidz good mornin/ good noon/ good eve dont knw where r u frm so this wishes for u darlin amazin update like always

so raghav anger face was shown but in a well mannered way

love teaches all colors of life

aww loved kalpi leg pullin of raghav regardin orderin of pizzz skittles naughty kalpi

raghav askin abt the characters name from the movie to kalpi n she corrected it smilin at hi innocent nature which really made raghav different n thats wat made kalpi fall for him love him unconditionally

raghav feelin guilty that he unintentionally made her sad by talkin abt her past but i found that he was possessive n concerned abt her n even kalpi knew that he dint mean intentionally

omggg my jaan in pool blood vidzzz u made my heart skip a beat

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nikkiarora093

@nikkiarora093

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Wowww very nice update. Hope raghav ko kuch na hua ho.but very sweet part. That ba****d armaan. Raghav shld have be a teed him. Keep uupdating.

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Katty

@Cute_Kate

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Omg.. Hope Raghav will be fine.. They had sucha cute moments in Apartment while watching star wars..

I loved how Raghav gave that teenager extra buck.. for he knew his past anf hard work...

Beautiful Update. .

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Raghav my innocent baby 😭 he got shoot stupid can't he just give that ring and be safe so that he can spend his life with kalpi its just a token of love he had give up so much to be with her and when he got a chance he is putting his life for risk 😭

this is what a fear will happen when ever u mentioned of his cute sweet innocent actions towards kalpi

yesterday I read plot of city of angles and heroine died just after their confession and love that was so sad hope this story is not a sad ending 😛

wonderful update especially the way Raghav handled situation when Armaan use foul language I tho thought he will beat hell out of armaan and also how he changed kalpi mood 😆

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Lovely. A soft hearted Rags seems to be a change from the usual arrogant one. He is a cutie , alright.

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Antara

@rachufan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Vidya dear u r awesome god bless u
What an update our shy boy change into angry young man
He first calm down himself then he changed kalp'si mood
they enjoyed their time together
robber wants money chain
how can raghav give his chain its kalpi's first gift
the gift of love
i m bitting my nails wht happened raghav
God save him
update next part soon

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#198

awesome update
raghav was attacked & is lying in pool of blood... 😭
hope kalpi will take him to dr right time

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Darktruth5

@Darktruth5

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Im happy lion and panter end. Nw end this stupid stry 2 plez. I reqest this.

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Firstly srry for super late cmmnt...read all missed parts...wonderful updates👏

Awww m so in love wit this rags...,..he is so innocent pure Kindhearted person ...jus wanna a give a tight hug to him🤗...he is so so adorable n d way u wrote in details abt his character is jus beautiful...d way he is adapting to dis mortal life n his cute reaction wen he knws abt new thing n his desire to learn dem...every little cute thing he do is so so adorable n Makes m fall in love wit dis angel more n more 😳😳

Wow loved dat rags hardwrk paid off n he got promoted n lik how his boss was teasing him

Awww ragna were so eagerly w8ng for der meeting...rags bringing her fav chocolates n flowers was lovely

Lik how he asked her to b his date n she wanted to accept but coz of her awful past she was not ready but aftr his sincere declaration n finding truth in his wrds she accepted him😳

Also loved d scene wen dat four yr boy recognised him as angel n saying thanks for being wit him😃

Ragna mess convo was funny😆...loved how u wrote abt rags adding details abt emoticons...it was super cute 😃😃

Loved all ragna scenes ...dem teasing each other , him purchasing tickets for her at very high price , dem enjoying concert, der first dance , first kiss ...n dat little drizzling indicating angels were happy for der brothr, dem sharing companion band everything was beautifully written...hatts of to u n ur imagination👏

Both mortal demon have killed other mortal angel n his wife was horrible ...n dey r in search of rags...hope he b able to save himself n kalpi too...eager to knw d reason why dos evil monsters r killing mortal angels

Armaan selfish bas**** insulted kalpi...first time we got to see a furious rags but lik how he handled d situation

Loved der cute moment ...dem watching d movie n him innocently asking kalpi abt all charcters was lovely

Omg rags lying in pool of blood 😭

Eagerly waiting to knw wat happ nxt ...cont soon