A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

commenting Very late on this story after 7 updates

but this story seems so unique something out of the box wala,story line is so different i have never heard of something like this, an angle turning in to mortal to gain his love and live with her what a love 👏

The way u r describing this story is wonderful, especially Raghav's pov like every minute details of how he texted her and how he wrote his emotions in words saying he was smiling n all was cute and innocent. its its just so pure he is 😃

can i ask u something what is an angle doing during kalpi's treatment and u said that no one can see them how come kalpi and that little boy saw himm😛 i think i always have questions for u 😆

n when ever u describe Raghav innocent smile or actions it feels so pure but at the same time i feel like oh god how will he face this cruel world i mean he know how people are but how will he face those problems in personal and deal with them worries me 😳 Involving in Raghav's character a little to much 😆 coz i loved it so very much

I completely loved this story 😃 n enjoy reading its update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: sweet1308
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awesome update viyda
god i want this raghav for me he is sooo sweeet😳
juat a cute boyfriend girl dream t have
he teased her make her happy
ooohhh😳 they share the meal
they kissed 😳😳😳
rag feel the feeling of sharing n the gift
rag explanation 😳😳 yaar he is so cute
hmm kalpi buy it n explain t rag her delimma n rag laugh n he treasure her giftds
hmm kalpi want his lips hmm 😳😳😳
rag possessive about the kiss n the sincerity he declared his feeling was fabulous
ohh for heaven sake bas***d get ur life😡
he taunt kalpi coward n good kalpi slap him
hmm raghav came in nick time
update soon

Thanks Sweetu. Kalpi can't resist him eh 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ssna
Loved d update dear

Thanks 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: rachufan
👏 superb perfectly written dear lovely cute rommantic
i love their bonding their care for each other
raghav is soo innocent i m madly love with him 😳
Finally they confessed their feelings 😛
Kalpi teasing rAghav 😆
And /n end that jerk 😡 came
and rag also
curious how will raghav react
Waiting for next dose

Thanks Rachu. Yes Raghav is very innocent here. 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: niru04
Beautiful update

Thanks Niru 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Nandinisai
Awesome update

Thanks Nandini 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: kalbhavs
Hi vidz sry I m calling u vidz but felt it will b apt one if u don't like do tell ok
N coming to this chappy masallah mar dala aapne
Awww beautiful moments of ragna n awww gift to each other without know they brought paired rings simply superb as if those. Rings r only made for them only omg armaan is back hope doesn't harm ragna my jaan is soo innocent n yet romantic
Plzzz vidz don't stressout more v can wait for u
Ur health is imp for ur loved oNES n us to
Love n huggg
Get well soon n tc

Vidz. I love it 😃 A few others already call me that. 😉 Glad you liked the update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: lolor
lovely update

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: nikkiarora093
Wowww dear. Such a beautiful update... amazing ragna romance...feel like heaven..Such a beautiful feeling... raghav is sooo cute...but what dis armaan ba*****d doing here. I hope raghav beats him black n blue..

😆 Thanks Nikki