A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37 - Page 22

Originally posted by: lolor

awesome update
raghav was attacked & is lying in pool of blood... 😭
hope kalpi will take him to dr right time

Originally posted by: rani214

Firstly srry for super late cmmnt...read all missed parts...wonderful updates👏

Awww m so in love wit this rags...,..he is so innocent pure Kindhearted person ...jus wanna a give a tight hug to him🤗...he is so so adorable n d way u wrote in details abt his character is jus beautiful...d way he is adapting to dis mortal life n his cute reaction wen he knws abt new thing n his desire to learn dem...every little cute thing he do is so so adorable n Makes m fall in love wit dis angel more n more 😳😳

Wow loved dat rags hardwrk paid off n he got promoted n lik how his boss was teasing him

Awww ragna were so eagerly w8ng for der meeting...rags bringing her fav chocolates n flowers was lovely

Lik how he asked her to b his date n she wanted to accept but coz of her awful past she was not ready but aftr his sincere declaration n finding truth in his wrds she accepted him😳

Also loved d scene wen dat four yr boy recognised him as angel n saying thanks for being wit him😃

Ragna mess convo was funny😆...loved how u wrote abt rags adding details abt emoticons...it was super cute 😃😃

Loved all ragna scenes ...dem teasing each other , him purchasing tickets for her at very high price , dem enjoying concert, der first dance , first kiss ...n dat little drizzling indicating angels were happy for der brothr, dem sharing companion band everything was beautifully written...hatts of to u n ur imagination👏

Both mortal demon have killed other mortal angel n his wife was horrible ...n dey r in search of rags...hope he b able to save himself n kalpi too...eager to knw d reason why dos evil monsters r killing mortal angels

Armaan selfish bas**** insulted kalpi...first time we got to see a furious rags but lik how he handled d situation

Loved der cute moment ...dem watching d movie n him innocently asking kalpi abt all charcters was lovely

Omg rags lying in pool of blood 😭

Eagerly waiting to knw wat happ nxt ...cont soon

Originally posted by: peggysue

A brilliant update. An ending with a suspense that keeps me eagerly waiting for another update.

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

The last two chapters were incredible
RagNa having their date in the park was so romantic
I love how they both were teasing each other
RagNa purchasing the ring set for each other separately was amazing
Raghav confessing his love for Kalpi was awesome and when Kalpi said those exact words to Raghav was magical. Raghav is truly a angel...
That disgusting pig came back for a file 🤢
His words to Kalpi was hurtful and down right cruel
I like that Kalpi stand her grounds and give it back to him
I wish Kalpi destroy the file in his face lol
Raghav can keep his calm even though he wanted to kill that idiot
RagNa watching Star Wars was nice
It's funny how every minute Raghav asking Kalpi one of the characters name lol
Aww Raghav remembering the delivery guy and how hard he work to take provide family was beautiful
I like that he give him a generous tips :)
Oh no! Again this idiot name and action cause Kalpi to get upset
Omg! Raghav got shot

Originally posted by: redpetal

So nice. Kalpana is a clever girl indeed. It is a great exam for a writer to maintain the fact that the lead character is an angel turned mortal and YOU are indeed doing a great job there. When he was asking Sammy whether he has angered the thief by any way was so very nice. Thanks for the update.