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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
I'm late I know but CONGRATULATIONS on your second thread! May you open lots of threads by writing lots more exciting stories for us with daily updates 😃
Vidya the last two chapters were so emotional. Reading them I felt I was right there in the midst feeling their pain and anguish. Whew! The details you include in your story and with your characters 👏. Loved how Raghav being in a half dead state still can't get enough of Kalpi's lips 😳. Passion rules!
Waiting on the next chapter. Prem is a dead man.

Thanks!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
VI!!
Im still hanging onto the cliff!😒 (😆)
When u updating dear..? 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
RES!!!😎

Unres!!😃

Heyyllooo VI!! 😉

Yippeee!!! Its me first this tym!

VI.. a fantastic update again!! finally an update w/o prem's name being mentioned!😛 err.. it was mentioned once!🤔 and it was totally ragnalicious!!😳😉

From the start to till the end it was superr.. now I understood why the lord of the south's words were so rude.. it was all becuz of his past, which was no doubt it was a dreadful one for him and lso scary.. but his rudeness is limited only for the women, as he kindness was showed when he ordered his men to cremate the bodies of kalpi's parents, not only that but his loyalty as a friend towards raghav!! It was a good one😊 and then the bro-sis bondng.. I was happie that pakhya was able to hold himself back and kalpi's words to him gave more strength to him! 😊

VI.. im falling in love with this ragna again and again..❤️ 😳 its jus few mins that kalpi left to him rest, but soon he missed her warmth and came out to search for her!!😳 not only that, he even accompanied her to the bath!!☺️to ensure his wife will be safe n in her privacy!! But lol.. his whole attention was on the warriors instead of his wife..😆 and the convo u wrote in a teasing manner was superr good one!! He noticed her only then, when she mentioned him that he was interested more on the warriors than her!!

The next scene was indeed surprising!! Where kalpi mistook their convo and got annoyed at the men!!😆 I was sure that it wasn't about a lady.. instead I thought it maybe about clothing and other thing.. so then it was about swords!😆 this side of jealous kalpi was cute one😉, which I asked u before and I got to read one!😛and kalpi's murmurings seems too cute and fun at his actions.. 😆

And no matter what may happen, its proved that they couldn't get enough of each other!!☺️ also that it's a way to show their undying love, need and their possessiveness towards each other!!😳 now im curious to know what lies ahead for them.. war is gonna be for sure! But still I wonder, is there will be any other track that u'll add surprising us.. 😛

Hope I'll get the next update soon..😳

Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Me 2nd Res 😛Unres 😉
I missed commenting on the last one so now both dozes at a tym.. bear it 😆
Prem is such a b****** 🤬 😡 He imprisoned her wrists with ironic shackles 😡 n he claim to love her n wat he did hurting her!!! He's only after her for lust n obsessed with her just want to use her!! He don't the meaning f love n how can he love!! He's a coward like kalpana said!! N the way he's talking to her cheee he's disgusting cheapo stupid idiot 😡 😡 His face would have fully burnt he deserves it n calling her witch he's a devil who don't respct women 😡 n he should b punished so brutally after wat he did!!! Knowing the man who he s how can any parents give their daughters hand to this lustful king!! Raghav was also imprisoned n his concern n love towards her 😭 kalpi's heart sank looking at her lord husband condition!!! Raghav was fighting to get out f that binds but he couldn't !!He cannot see her in this condition she's being named as a witch!!! People started to protest but due to fear f king they couldn't utter a word more n silently watching the whole scenario as thy are helpless
Kalpi's confession that Raghav s 100 times better than prem n her each n every words which she spoke with lots f love n affection towards her husband made Raghav beaming with pride at her confession 😃 Prem told his guards to lash his skin 😡 but he's not even feeling any pain bcx his kalpi s infront f him n at the last 40th one God someone has come to rescue them!! Red hair, black eyes 😳 arsenio wow n Raghav my hero caught the sword correctly even he's not a good condition bt ran to Kalpi!! N on his way he sliced off the man who kept sword at kalpi's neck n he took the head n showed it to Prem n Prem already in fear 😆 OH MY MY HERE I GOT GOOSEBUMPS WHEN RAGHAV SAID "THIS IS WAR!! THE NORTH WELCOMES YOU "" totally fida with this lord of the NORTH at that moment 😳 After reaching to their camp their passionate kiss n Raghav has been bandaged to his wounds n him introducing to his friend n lord of the south Arsenio 😳
Kalpi was grateful to him fr cremating his parents bodies!! N when Arsenio enquired about the war his harsh words which made Kalpi hurt but she understood n explained him the whole thing ...Raghav explained y he has changed into cold well the person whom v loves most betrays us it's the most unforgettable n he had seen his wife in such a position that husband cannot take it easily n he killed so brutally n Raghav now understood that y he took such a harsh step... n Raghav understood wat Kalpi s about to say n he don't want her to prove herself as he trust her !!!their kiss n Raghav want her bt she denied bcx he's ill 😳 kalpi n pakhya's convos was lovely!! It's really unpredictable wat happens in our lifes the day before they were so happy bt now n kalpi comforted him n pakhya teasing her looking at Raghav who came out fr his wife 😆 he can't stay a sec without her 😳

Raghav joining her to the stream n instead f admiring her he's busy in watching those southern men's 😛 n then later his eyes on kalpi who's naked making him totally mad!!! N they returned back to the tent!! Lol this was epic kalpi misunderstanding 😆 n Vids seriously they described this sword in such a way that as if they r talking about women n kalpi totally misunderstood n full f jealous 🤣 She never expected this Lol raghav's expression when she said about watching some other girl I could imagine clearly 😉 Hahaha n kalpi embarrassed aftr knowing that thy r talking about sword 😆 😆 n she covered it so well by telling pregnancy mood swings 😳 n Raghav telling her that she's the only one woman who have his eyes on her n he's madly in love with her!! These are two are made fr each other

Their passionate love making which made them to forget the painful days which they Had spent far from each other!! Now they are solace n content in each others embrace!! Their love grows each n every day n ready to fight all the obstacles which come towards them!!They both are always supportive to each other!!! Strength to one another!!

Vidsss u always amaze me with ur updates!!!Now I'm looking forward to see how u going to plot this war!! !Yaar it's very interesting!! Waiting fr next update 😉
Edited by Appuu_AshLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
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Awesome update
It is really awesome
Hmmm arsenio give feneral t kalpi parents n she is obliged😳
He explained rag the delay happened due t bad weather
Hmm aesenio questioned kalpi about the king n this angry rag
Hmm poor him had such a bad past
Kalpi telling rag her faithfulness n rag stopping her was lovely
Caveman in need he he
Kalpi talk t her brother was awesome
Rag want his wife only
The bath hmmm rag
Wat kalpi misunderstood tag for sword haha her anger was cute
Hmm rag get his dose of kalpi
Update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
👏 👏 IT IS A MASTERPIECE
HOW EXTRAORDINARY U R!

THE LORD OF SOUTH HAS A DARK PAST BECAUSE OF THIS HE DID NOT BDLIEVE ANY WOMAN
RAGHAV BABA OH MY GOD IN THIS STATE HE WANT HIS WIFE 😆 😳
The symbol of south is fox and fox is also known for cunningness i m confused
he is really a good man 😕
and lady of north feeling jealousy towards a sword oh my god i was laughing that time i was reading it
😆 😆
Bro sis convo was emotional
In short i enjoyed everybit of this story i m crazy about it
superb dear YOU SHOULD BE PROUD
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wow ! How nice to 'behead' all men/women who cheat on their spouses ! What a 'befitting' punishment ! Wish it happens in present times and more than 9/10 of the population will be erased from the 'face of the Earth ' !!! LOL ! Wonderful update !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Awesome update dear
Red hair past is realy painfull n buc of his past he think all womens r dengiours creature
Aww kalpi feel bad that his lord husband staring southern soldier not her when his wife having bath in front of him
Omg kalpi think raghav ,summar n his solider r talkin about red hair women n she is angry on her lord husband n after knowing truth that raghav is talking about sword she feel embarrass
Love bro n sis convo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Awww So Romantic 😳
Raghav and kalpi love for each other is so deep just love they way they understand and respect eachother 😃


lord of south had a bitter past humm fox is his symbol does that mean he is cunning his cold behavior towards kalpi said that but i'm confused if it only because of his past or any hidden reason behind it and how Raghav said that he was cheerful and suddenly after his wife's betrail he turned rude and also the way he killed them 😕 as Raghav also mentioned south people aren't ruthless and all I have doubt on him 😛😆

Raghav he is so possessive for kalpi that he didn't allow her to go bath alone and was constantly checking south gaurds he didn't belive the men who saved his wife and him 😆

🤣 it was funny when kalpi misunderstood their discussion and then said it was her mood swings 😆 n then Raghav teasing say u r blaming my heir 😆 n their love for each other 😳 they just need each other nothing else they are so much in love

wonderful update a dreamily love couple they are 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Thank u dear for keeping ur promise...
Loved it...
Ragna,they nvr get enough frm each othr 😆
the story of lord of south was vry painful...😭
raghav is realy vry possesv abt his lady,cnt let her go alone for bath even...kalpi teasing him,his smiling ,staring her wid desire,her blushing...all was so romantic
kalpi is so cute,get jealous wid sword😆
finally raghav got his doze...😳

Awesome update vidhya...update soon pls...and giv us more ragna pls, i'm greedy bt cnt help...sorry...

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