The Lion and the Panther (RagNa ff) 2nd Thread REMOVED - Page 8

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyyllooo VI..

As I was out for two days I thought I would miss 3 long updates! But u posted only two

And Im gonna unres my previous RES here itself 😛 hope u dnt mind! 😛 so this comment goes for the both the updates..

And even this time(thank god!😆).. I reduced my stress as I read the two parts in one go!! else I dunno I'll be gng on spamming ur thread to update soon and with waiting comments! 😛 No doubt that both are totally amazng n incredible!! ⭐️⭐️ and ofcourse I loved it!!

The previous update was too good and emotional one! U showed raghav's pain very well that if it goes on for some more time, then even I'll start crying.. it was picture perfect!! And the liked that the way the eastern priests sacrificed their to save kalpana.. and their dialogue was awesome!! 😳 and As far as I remember(dunno whether Im correct or no😛), raghav has cried only twice, once when kalpi avoided him when he hid the truth and now for performing the ritual!! not only him but lso Sammy!!!😳 That was something rare and good to read!! And ur imaginations are so wonderful VI!!!⭐️ I thought these ritual things were in the film or something! When I read that its ur imagination.. I was like AWE for u!! 😳

And VI.. seriously u so love to hang us onto the cliff ryt!! As I was njyng that kalpi is back to normal, then suddenly u brought this attack!!! Then what.. im back to the tension mode.. 😆 And I had so many doubts regarding this and thought of putting them in this, but ur rply to santi's comment, made my q's to vanish in the air.. 😆 Attack was a bit scary and obviously unexpected one!!! prem is indeed planning every possible way to bring them down!!!😡🤢 and when they kidnapped kalpana,, I was thinking.. god! Even kalpana's power is sealed to burn that prem.. and there is no way to escape in an easy way, what will happen.. and here u updated the next one! 😃

And this update was mind-blowing!! At the end I was literally dancing LOL!!😆 I really really hate this stupid prem!!! 😡 im really waitng for the day, where he ll be tortured very severely!!!😈 😈 hope it ll cum soon!😛 and this update was more emotional than the previous one! Seeing ur loved ones getting hurt damn badly!! 😭our ragna.. 😒 it was superr good, when kalpi told the truth in front off everyone, shouting.. her dialogues were awesome!!! it gave some strength to the ppl to talk back.. but that stupid prem threatened him again 🤢😡

I was expecting the lord of the west to save our ragna, when u mentioned the attack strtd with arrows n all.. but here I got the "unexpected surprise" again, when it was revealed that , he's lord of the south!!! 😆 but I expected that pakka raghav had to bear atleast 45 whips before he gets the help.. and u gave him the help at perfect timing!! 😉 here I was feelng damn happie u know.. 😳😆

Raghav looked at Prem and held out the neck as a warning to him, Prem's eyes widening in fear and anger as Raghav dropped the head to the floor

this challenging scene was superrr!!! ⭐️😈 I loved it!!😉 and the little ragna romance, even in that state.. it was cute showing much they had to go thru to be together and how much they missed each other in that span of time!

so now the war is gonna start, with all three realms at raghav's side!!😃 I jus hope no one betrays him..

VI.. do update the next part soon.. plsss!!!😳 and hope I dint bore u with this comment! 😛😆

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

VY YOU DO NOT BOTHER ME WITH YOUR COMMENTS MAN! I MISSED THEM! WHERE IS MY BLASTED HAMMER. THE NEXT TIME YOU EVEN MENTION BORING ME I WILL WHACK YOU OVER THE HEAD!!!! -deep breath-

But awww welcome back- hugs- 😆 And yeah Raghav did cry twice but this was FIRST time SAMMY saw him. When he cried the first time after Kalpana was avoiding him, he did it in the privacy of his room .😉 But yeahhh I love that you made the connection there with Sammy AND Raghav sharing their SECOND cry together even though neither knew it. 😆 It was a subtle thing I fit in there like to show how close their friendship is and you picked it up. BRAVO 👏

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

VI... no!!! u cant harm ur thunderbrats!! its against ur rules.. 😆

im gonna keep ur words in my mind and lock it! 😛 and hugs to u too!🤗

yes! whenever there ll be an emotional scene, my focus will be on raghav😆 cuz he is totally different in ur story, ruthless and soo cold, that he cried only twice till now, that too only for his loved one, but not for his physical pain! I kindda counting them in 😛

So VI.. when are u gng to post the next update..??? 😳

"Is the king a past lover of yours, Lady Grimmir?" - Arsenio questioned severely and Kalpana looked up at him, stunned at his blatant words to her.

"Arsenio!" - Raghav reprimanded, his hand balling into a fist by his side while he stared at his friend in silent anger- "You are addressing my /wife/.."

"I am asking her a question. The four realms are witnessing another war after all these years and I think we deserve to know why." - Arsenio replied without apology.

Originally posted by: ayesha.khan

Res

unres

awesome updatee

prem is such a coward

he wanted to rape.kalpi and kalpi stood up for herself and spat on prem face

raghav being wiped that was so heartbreaking

northern men are truely the strongest

kalpi was in soo much pain when she heard abt her parents

prem trying to influence the ppl but ppl knew better but couldn't do anythng against the king

aresino the lord of south came to ragna rescue thankgod

Ragna is save

the northern gaurds smiling seeing the love btw there lord and lady of north

I seriously cnt get enough of this ff

marvellous updateee

Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim

I am writing it now. There is so much more I still need to write though Hoping to update it by tonight. But here is teaser for you.

Is the king a past lover of yours, Lady Grimmir?" - Arsenio questioned severely and Kalpana looked up at him, stunned at his blatant words to her.
"Arsenio!" - Raghav reprimanded, his hand balling into a fist by his side while he stared at his friend in silent anger- "You are addressing my /wife/.."
"I am asking her a question. The four realms are witnessing another war after all these years and I think we deserve to know why." - Arsenio replied without apology.

Originally posted by: redpetal

I just wonder how you writers bring out a beautiful update, like do you take short notes and then create a story or you just sit and it flows in your mind?

Originally posted by: _Santhi_

Prem is such a 🤬

He loved kalpi right how can he even think of killing her disgusting he called her witch 😭

Raghav i fell in love with this characters after this update the respect and love he had for his wife is too much to express in words 😛

kalpi her speech or say revolt against king was mind-blowing at one point i thought when people started talking about king n get to know true face of Prem they will fight against king and save RagNa 😆😆

but the lord of south entry and Raghav heroic challenge to king was fantastic👍🏼 I felt i as if i was watching a film i saw all of it, ur description to the scene just made it come alive 😃

wonderful update 👏