The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED - Page 84

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Update!! Slap for Pakhi.. Yayay!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg!!! Once again I'm stumped...
I just can't pin point the moments I love because if I do then I will rewrote the entire chapter in my comment. Every moment, every gesture was just spectacularly marvelous written and portrait
All twenty two chapters was outstanding and I love them all but this particular chapter is my favorite 😊
I can't explain the feelings I got when I read this chapter... It's unbelievable
Kalpi slapping that filthy bitch in the end is cherry on the already delicious double chocolate cake lol

Vidya I can't say this enough but you are one talented writer
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome😊. I just love Raghav's VOW. The Lord has his eyes only for his lady wife. The way the Lord and the men of the North bowed their head as a gratitude and appreciation to their lady of North was awesome. Pakhi I am just feeling pity her because she was in love with the Lord of North even before his marriage to kalpi. Pakhi has the guts to kiss the Lord who is giving her all cold replies. The strong slap was very much needed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh dear I had missed the last update! But as u told me you were updating last night I was like ...its ok to miss a chappy if you get to read another one!!! And what dhamakedar chapters bith back to back...
But yikes Pakhi infected Raghav...ewww!!!! Yikes yikes yikes!!!!! Please can you see to it that Kalpi does not kiss Raghav for like another 24 hours??? LOL pls pls pls! Even if Raghav suffers Kalpi shouldnt let him kiss her🤢😆

And Pakhi got what she deserved! Sataaack!!! yay!!!! Guess Prem is next in line of her attack! I think Raghav managed to control thinking of war and all that political issues! However I want to see Prem's end not at the hands of Raghav but at the hands of a woman instead. Could be Kalpi pakhi or his own mom! After all the atrocities he has done on women of the East he should suffer at the hands of a woman and beg her for his life!

Hmmm Wonder where are Kalpi's powers gonna be used. lol pakhi or Prem
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updattee
you totally nailed it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Already missing ur update! 😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sukchandu

I'm so glad for the update vidya... I haven't read it but the last slap part caught my eye and i'm literally dancing [:D/] . I soo wanted to see the slap and hope prem or pakhi doesn't create any major trouble to our sweet and hot Ragna

Ofcourse, i believe in you so i know you'll rock this story ahead

No words are ever enough to justify your work dear. You are a marvellous writer. Thanks a ton dear 👏

Ok, now i have to read it completely 😆

Thankuuu... Muahhh 🤗

OMGGG... I just read it, did she really kiss him 🤢. I wonder how disgusting raghav would feel because of the kiss 🤢. Mummyyy 😭

I'm so relieved to see kalpi slapping her inspite of misunderstanding the whole thing 😳, mann... Please tell me where can i get a man like "The Lord". I'm soo soo in love with him 😆, ofcourse i'm in love with "The Lady" too but being a girl The lord attracts me more 😛 😆. I adore the way she stand up for the right thing 👏

I was like 🤪 when i visualised the slap part 😆

As i said earlier nothing justifies your work dear... U deserve an oscar if allowed to give 🤗 🥳

Thank you thank you ❤️


Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks Niruuu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Resss!!! 😃
Mee... 3rd 😳😆

unres!

vidya.. im not getting proper words to compliment ur work, i gotta learn more new words fr it! 😳😆

but still I'll continue in it my routine way!!! it was..

wow⭐️

wow!⭐️⭐️

wow!⭐️⭐️⭐️ so on and on and on..

you wouldnt believe if i say, i read thrice at a time.. i totally loved, enjoyed reading it!!! ❤️😃 like raghav, even i ignored prem totally in this update LOL😆 all those ragna moments were so beautiful! you describe it so well, whatever the situation maybe! 😳 kalpi talking in her native lang and raghav's reaction fr that was soo cute!! he can read her like an open book! 😳 and they are so content in each other's company! Raghav's gesture, that he wouldnt look fr another women other than her by making a blood vow, was a heart-touching one! ❤️ it felt so good reading in it!

And here comes another awesome scene, where raghav was yet again spell bound by his lady wife's talent and his n his men's gesture towards her! AWESOME!⭐️ i liked the way, that northerns wouldnt hesitate to praise their lady's charm in open! 😃

Then comes the devil here.. pakhi is totally a bitch🤢 i thought maybe pakhi will be matured than prem.. but no.. both are same! its just that prem is dngs things which will be unnoticed while pakhi is dng evrythng openly! 🤢 but raghav gave her the exact answer and how dare she kiss him?! 😡🤢 i hate her!😡🥱 im happiee that kalpi understood the situation and slapped pakhi! but yet i am not pleased, as she stooped so low that she kissed him w/o his consent n even after hearing the hatred fr her!🤢 now i dunno what these evils will do to break ragna..

I'll be waiting for the next chappy! 😳



😆 Pakhi annoying everyone here. Awww you liked the blood vow 😃 Yeah I was staring at my computer for like half an hour until I decided to include it. 😆Glad you enjoyed the update Vyyy 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

God rag stuned the king by giving him his cloth
hmm prem want t eliminate rag
hmm poor kalpi feel sad seeing rag in pain n apologiosed
she release the tension from rag shoulder
hmm kalpi want t confirm her doubt n rag
vow was awesome
kalpi dance for his lord n try t keep her from crying seeing the gift her husband offer t her
hmm kalpi want t take her husband platter n not the maid
hmm makhi another insect t suck the life of others
hmm did she do that complaining n the fit answer rag give her was awesome
great am dancing kalpi slap makhi
god rag should wash his lips with javel
update soon
mind blowing update my awesome writer


Thank you Sweetyyy. You enjoyed the slap too! 😆

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