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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm so glad for the update vidya... I haven't read it but the last slap part caught my eye and i'm literally dancing [:D/] . I soo wanted to see the slap and hope prem or pakhi doesn't create any major trouble to our sweet and hot Ragna

Ofcourse, i believe in you so i know you'll rock this story ahead

No words are ever enough to justify your work dear. You are a marvellous writer. Thanks a ton dear 👏

Ok, now i have to read it completely 😆

Thankuuu... Muahhh 🤗
OMGGG... I just read it, did she really kiss him 🤢. I wonder how disgusting raghav would feel because of the kiss 🤢. Mummyyy 😭

I'm so relieved to see kalpi slapping her inspite of misunderstanding the whole thing 😳, mann... Please tell me where can i get a man like "The Lord". I'm soo soo in love with him 😆, ofcourse i'm in love with "The Lady" too but being a girl The lord attracts me more 😛 😆. I adore the way she stand up for the right thing 👏

I was like 🤪 when i visualised the slap part 😆

As i said earlier nothing justifies your work dear... U deserve an oscar if allowed to give 🤗 🥳

Thank you thank you ❤️
Edited by Sukchandu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Resss!!! 😃
Mee... 3rd 😳😆

unres!

vidya.. im not getting proper words to compliment ur work, i gotta learn more new words fr it! 😳😆

but still I'll continue in it my routine way!!! it was..

wow⭐️

wow!⭐️⭐️

wow!⭐️⭐️⭐️ so on and on and on..

you wouldnt believe if i say, i read thrice at a time.. i totally loved, enjoyed reading it!!! ❤️😃 like raghav, even i ignored prem totally in this update LOL😆 all those ragna moments were so beautiful! you describe it so well, whatever the situation maybe! 😳 kalpi talking in her native lang and raghav's reaction fr that was soo cute!! he can read her like an open book! 😳 and they are so content in each other's company! Raghav's gesture, that he wouldnt look fr another women other than her by making a blood vow, was a heart-touching one! ❤️ it felt so good reading in it!

And here comes another awesome scene, where raghav was yet again spell bound by his lady wife's talent and his n his men's gesture towards her! AWESOME!⭐️ i liked the way, that northerns wouldnt hesitate to praise their lady's charm in open! 😃

Then comes the devil here.. pakhi is totally a bitch🤢 i thought maybe pakhi will be matured than prem.. but no.. both are same! its just that prem is dngs things which will be unnoticed while pakhi is dng evrythng openly! 🤢 but raghav gave her the exact answer and how dare she kiss him?! 😡🤢 i hate her!😡🥱 im happiee that kalpi understood the situation and slapped pakhi! but yet i am not pleased, as she stooped so low that she kissed him w/o his consent n even after hearing the hatred fr her!🤢 now i dunno what these evils will do to break ragna..

I'll be waiting for the next chappy! 😳


Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
God rag stuned the king by giving him his cloth
hmm prem want t eliminate rag
hmm poor kalpi feel sad seeing rag in pain n apologiosed
she release the tension from rag shoulder
hmm kalpi want t confirm her doubt n rag
vow was awesome
kalpi dance for his lord n try t keep her from crying seeing the gift her husband offer t her
hmm kalpi want t take her husband platter n not the maid
hmm makhi another insect t suck the life of others
hmm did she do that complaining n the fit answer rag give her was awesome
great am dancing kalpi slap makhi
god rag should wash his lips with javel
update soon
mind blowing update my awesome writer
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow dear what a slap. Pakhi deserves this... I hope prem will get what he deserves after doing all dis bakwaas things. Nice update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh My My what an update 😃 I enjoyed every bit of it! Stupid Prem told some stry about That wounded cloth 😡 arey Prem already knew ur cheap intentions 🤢 kalpi observing him that something is bothering him n that to related to prem! She's feeling bad that bcz f her ...n she went to him n the way she's helping him Raghav was already incaptivated with her touch Aww he can't resist at all 😛 kalpi massaging his shoulder relieving his tension Hahaha kalpi word's in her mother tongue Awesome sach yaar they r testing the lord f the North!! Raghav's confusion face how cute he's he don't understand a word but the words She said I love you more than my life n his reply fr that shocked her!! It was stunning seriously He can easily know by looking at her eyes wat she conveyed to him!! N his words ["These are some things which these... his hand travelled up to the side of her eye as he held her gaze -"say more clearly than words " 👏 ]loved this scene 😃 n they both are missing their home want to go back ASAP n Raghav want to make love in their home in their own room 😳 😛 n their conversation leading to remarrying n Raghav's anger raised at wat she was thinking!!Raghav knew her so well!! Ofcours They Are soul mates no need f words to speak out there every action can depict wats going in others mind 😃
Oh My this was the best his vow to her that he'll never marry anyone regarding circumstances!! N his words "Before My God's n as ur lord husband ,I declare those words to be my solemn vow " 👍🏼 His blood vow to her which s sacred to the northern realm!! I didn't expect this to come u left me speechless at this moment!!
Raghav saw her beautiful wife came infront f him to perform her dance he's held by her beauty n surroundings seem all blur fr him ..As if he n his wife only exists in this world!!! He's so captivated by her dance n he was very proud!! Lol pakhi he didn't even know she exist until Prem said her name 🤣 n Raghav's gesture u made me speechless again Vids 👏 Both are controlling themselves going to each other arms n kissing passionately 😳 kalpi said she'll bring food f his taste n told him to go to the garden !!
Ye pakhi 😲 Huh she's not leaving him despo kahiki!!! OMG she want him n she's insulting kalpi about her beauty n color how dare she 😡 😡 how stupidly she's behaving n Raghav's each n every word telling her that he hate her bt still this despo s not leaving any chance!! I loved it when he said "You Are nothing but a piece f filth next to my ravishing and Angelic beauty that is my WIFE " Omg she's pleading him n she forceful kissed him cheee 🤬 🤢 Raghav go n wash ur mouth man yaak 😆 kalpi saw this hmm she definitely didn't misunderstand her husband she trusts him!! But Raghav was in fear that she might had misunderstood the scenario!!! Awwieee pakhi got a tight slap 🤪 I want kalpana to make pakhi face which s sooo fair into tomato red by slapping her continuously left n right 🤣 God u stopped at that moment 😲 Hmmm have to wait fr the next update n I'm desperate to know 😉 Huhh over commenting Hope I didn't bored u 😛
Edited by Appuu_AshLover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
K 👏 My dear aWord's MAGICIAN I have no words to explain my feelings towards u ur writing
The update is chik chik boom fire

Wow i enjoyed every bit of this story feel like i m in medival period
Prem 😡 lied raghav he knew very well raghav knows about his evil intentions
but hasnot any proof against him

Kalpi felt bad she thought raghav feel uncomfortable because for her past
wow shoulder massage and their convo loved that part sooo much
And his blood vow awesome 👏 dear u r truely magician
raghv lost in kalpi's damcing and the way he showed his gesture
Was fabulous
and in last most happiest part when kalpi slapped that so called priencess my heart said more n more finally she got what she deserved

Thanku thanku sooo much again and again
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wonderful update😃 enjoyed reading it 😆
Paki, she is heights of shamelessness 😡

hope kalpana's power are not gonna trigger soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidya you are truly a master story teller , completely bewitching the readers with the subtly smooth flow of the unfolding saga of honour , bravery and romance in all it's glory . BRAVO my girl !!!! I am totally smitten with your RAghav !!!!! And you have a reader for lifetime in me of all your stories to come and that's a promise !! Atta girl May the force be with you always !!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Marvellous as always. Wow ,I did not an update so soon, thought will have to control my patience. Geee! Thanks. Love the strong love of RagNa , ! Its trust , faith loyalty and absolute absorption in each other , forgetting the evil, ugly situation in Prem's palace ! The 'juicy cherry on the cake ' was the slap ! Ugly Pooki deserved that ! BTW , From all of us , we do no need your reply to our comments BUT instead give us a lovely update as a bonus ! THANKS !
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb chappy Vidu di.. Nice... Slap!!! Wow that was nice.. Plzz update nxt chappy di.. Di its a requst plz PM me.. I'll be on leave from today...will try to come online... Plzz PM me... Plzz update nxt chappy soon..

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