My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness


Am so glad ur reading the story... Thank you for commenting... I thought you had stopped reading... Was actually missing your comments.

Thank you for the compliment... Mwah

oh god..i gave my comment reading incomplete update😆
situations are not leaving ragna alone. Kalpi was saying truth nd raghav thought she was lying but it was not completely his fault. He was told earlier by someone that kalpi may have her boyfriend (if i m not wrong). So can't blame raghav alone. But feeling bad for kalpi. She is hurt seen raghav's rude behaviour towards her.😭


fuzz..u know i never leave a story in mid provided it is ragna story. U will be surprised to know that i had read all ur stories but never commented on them except "hate me today" Coz i m addicted to it and always waits for it to get updated...

really fuzz..u were missing my comment.😲 I m on cloud seven reading it😳 muah muah.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update angel
Omg sometimes misunderstanding create so much problems.
Clear this misunderstanding soon from ragna life
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Posted: 10 years ago
Angel when r u updating chapter 13 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh Fuzzz!
Where I was being so happy that they finally broke all the barriers and now this!!!! Ufff!!!

It must have been so difficult for Raghav!!! But then this matter has to come up and Raghav needs to raise it! because unless the matter goes out of hand Neetu will never reveal it to him that she had tricked Kalpi into donating her own eggs rather than just her womb!!!

Oh my goodness! High drama ready to unfold!!!

And my love hate relation with you continues!

Love you and hate you for the same reason! Mindblowing updates!

Mashallah such amazing updates!!!! My sleep has gone for a toss now!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Farzana,
What an update !!!!!!!!!!!!! Muah!!!!!!!!!!
Though out of selflishness and greediness,Neetu had done a favour by getting Ragna married
and had secured the future of the new born!!!!!!!!!!.
Like the saying ,Blessing in disguise,Pakhi had learnt the truth that Kalpi is carrying Rags own child
and she has no future in this loveless marriage ,and that so soon.
But the real parent's life is so messy and complicated.One is thinking abt Pakhi's stand and the other abt his wife's boyfriend.Aren't the EIGHTH WONDER OF THE WORLD!!!!!!
Is Neetu waiting for an auspicious time and date,to reveal this secret to her son atleast.
beautiful unfolding of the mystery in a classy and funny way.Muahs and lol.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely, I think should hear Kalpi out instead of getting angry with, for how long will Kalpi be thinking that she is betraying Paakhi, hope Kalpi doesn't put her life on hold waiting for Paakhi to return
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear... Angl... Update Plzzz... Waiting... Plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
RagNa made love I'm so happy for them
Raghav and his over thinking unknowly hurt Kalpi
I hope he realized that Kalpi is telling the truth and make up for his stupidity
Fabulous update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful updates, but rather short , for our satisfaction.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello peeps... What joy it is to read your comments... 😳 Thank you for the love... Mwah

Chapter 13


Ragav stares at the digital clock on the car dashboard... The clock reading 1:00 am... Looking at the dark house he wonders if she is awake... "Nah I doubt it...," he says softly. He enters the house and heads for the kitchen, a glimmer of hope that thinks would be just like before... Kalpi heating his dinner.


Looking at the empty kitchen, he mutters in disappointment, "I am a husband now... Why would she bother to stay up!" No longer hungry, he heads to their bedroom... Confused by the emotions pouring into him... He had never felt nor reacted so strongly, and he could not understand why this time was different. His heart mutters bitterly, "because you expected her to be awake." Stopping outside the door... He tells himself to calm down. He enters the room... Frowns as he stares at the empty bed. "How dare she...," he thinks angrily... He storms towards the balcony staring at the outhouse... Just because we had a small arguemnet this morning and I didn't take her calls during the day... She decides not to sleep in our room... How dare she go and complain about me to her mother... He thinks furiously.


He races down the stares... Mindless with anger... Heading for the outhouse... He does not know what he will do... He only knows that his wife sleeps where he sleeps...He stops stares at His wife... Relief flooding him as he watches her... Fast asleep on the couch... His heart soaring... She waited up for me... She is upset with me and she still waited up... Tried to wait up... He amends happily.


His gaze softening Ragav walks up to Kalpi slowly... Savouring the moment... Reaching her... He falls to his knees... His gaze not wavering from her face... Slowly he raises his hand... Caressing her cheek with his fingers... Softly...slowly... Lost in her peacefulness.


Feeling someone or something graze her cheek, Kalpi wakes up with a start... Panic residing when she recognises her husband. "I am sorry to have startled you," Ragav says softly, "come lets go to bed." Kalpi sits up and asks, "have you had dinner?" Ragav shakes his head... No. "Hungry?" He nods... Yes. She smiles and says, "freshen up while I reheat dinner."

While having his dinner, he says, "Kalpi, why are you quiet? You have not said a word." Kalpi looks at him, fighting with herself to keep her sadness at bay, she replies softly, "I was not aware you wanted to to hear what I have to say." Flushing for being chastised... For not having recieved her calls during the day... He says, "I am sorry about..." Using her hand, Kalpi gestures for him to stop... She says, "I would prefer an explanation... Not an apology." Seeing a glimmer of anger in his eyes... Kalpi waits for the fireworks. Instead Ragav gets up and walks away... Kalpi stares at him and says aloud, "don't shut me out Ragav." He stops, but does not turn. Taking it as a positive sign, Kalpi walks up... Takes his hand in hers, looks into his troubles eyes and says, "talk to me." He stares at her... His eyes speaking of his battle within... He releases her hold on him and says gruffily, "I have nothing to say." And walks away.


Kalpi stands at the foot of the stairs... Watching him walk to their room... Without a backwards glance... Tears falling silently... Her heart aching... Filled with regret over her selfishness... For wanting to have some cherished memories with him to remember him by when she would no longer be his side... When he be with his real... Complete... Family... Her forgotten. Filled with guilt her heart cries out, "Had i known you would hurt this much, I would never have put myself before you."


She stands there... Wondering whether she should go upstairs or not. Ragav comes out of the room... Leans over the banister... Looking down and asks, "are you coming to bed?" Relieved for not having to make the decision, Kalpi nods... Yes. Ragav stands there watching her climb up... Well aware that she was crying... Feeling like a heel... He watches on with worry.


Di where are you... Missing you babes... You have disappeared!

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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