My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: angelpureness
Chapter 12 complete.
Sorry for short chappy.

it's k dear. Pls next update long one pls pls.

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

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I was wondering how you will make it a sensitive, deep story without delving into Paakhi and Raghav's story and they not able to have kids and then Rags falling for another girl while being married to another...

Coz I think initially that is what you wanted to really look at.

But you are doing an awesome job... you did bring back the emotions although from a different stand point. This is nice.

Just one thing... bit longer updates... its ends just too soon.

Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

So Angel u had to realize I was going to say something I can't resist. So rags thought kalpi was using his stud services... Y would he think that has he been renting out his wee wee services to other buns. ... so the stud has a famous wee wee. 😆 😉

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Lovely update... So RagNa did it 😳 omg... Blush blush.. But raghav think that kalpi is a liar... Nooo... That's not true... Dear plzz make shure Raghav ko kalpi ke pregncy ka sach jald se jald pata chale

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Update Nxt chappy soon.. Angl.. But plzz this tym a long update

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: sunyy
So Angel u had to realize I was going to say something I can't resist. So rags thought kalpi was using his stud services... Y would he think that has he been renting out his wee wee services to other buns. ... so the stud has a famous wee wee. 😆 😉

🤣 Famous Wee Wee... 🤣 Really sunny si... Wht so spcl in Rags Wee Wee... 😆 U kno wht when it cums to Gandi baat u and Guycan are just OMG no words...

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Well bricka what to do when Angel mentioned rags stud services!?!?! 😆 I had to say something my gutter mind wouldn't let me stay quiet 😆 gandi baat gandi baat ha main karo gandi baat 😆

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Skyfalls

@Skyfalls

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#328

lol ...I was wondering what 's Bricka saying? 😕

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Guycan bricka is saying u and I talk dirty 😆 😉 blame it on me and catching Angels line about rags stud services in chapter 12 😆

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Skyfalls

@Skyfalls

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: sunyy
Guycan bricka is saying u and I talk dirty 😆 😉 blame it on me and catching Angels line about rags stud services in chapter 12 😆

🤣🤣

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