RagNa (AshNa) ff: That's called revenge #2.Last Part 14/02 completed - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wrote this much till now.. not feeling well so part b may or may not be updated today...

And.. to all my dearies..



Part 26 (a)

Kalpi was still staring at her phone when she heard the door bell ring..Placing her cell phone on the centre table in the living room she went to open the door..

"Dada??", Kalpi said surprised at her brother's early arrival.. "You came so early??", she asked Pakya while he entered ,his face clearly showing his happiness..

Hugging his little sis he said," Kalpi finally baba got justice!!!", breaking the hug he continued," I saw the news and just..", he sighed feeling at loss of words to express his feeling.. "Finally.. That murderer is in jail..", Kalpi nodded at his words clearly understanding Pakya's emotions..

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"So where should we go for dinner??", Pakya asked while eating his food making Kalpi choke on hers..

"Di.. Dinner..dada??", she asked..

"Ya dinner.. ", he said casually and continued,"Actually ...I'm thinking let's order food at home.. We can also call aai.. We have a perfect reason for family get together.. Just hopefully at least today she won't be busy with her 'other daughter and son'..", Pakya said the last line a bit dejectedly..

Kalpi placed her hand on his and said," Nope.. (Removing her hand and then Looking down at her plate) Paakhi had called me up to inform that she, prem and neetu aunty are leaving for US today..", Kalpi said unhappy that she couldn't meet her best friend ...

"You won't go to see them off??", Pakya asked sensing the obvious sadness in her tone..

Kalpi nodded her head in denial replying," She doesn't want to meet me now.. Especially after with Mr.kapoor, the case and all.. She said that she'll meet me when she'll back here which is after few months.."

"Oh.. Ok..", he said..

Pakya's mood was fairly nice so Kalpi thought it to be the perfect opportunity to initiate the topic," Rag.. *Clearing her throat* Raghav Sir has made all arrangements for them.."

Raghav's name was enough for spoiling Pakya's till-now-good-mood..

In a bitter tone he said," He thinks doing good for others is gonna reduce his guilt.. Bloody.."...

"Dada..", Kalpi almost shouted making Pakya look up at her in surprise..

"Now or never Kalpi..", she said in her mind.. "Da.. Dada.. Don't.. Don't u think that.."... "That??", Pakya asked.. Kalpi replied averting his gaze,"that now we .. We could forgive.."...

"Stop right there Kalpana ...", Pakya said hitting the dining table..

Clenching his jaws he continued ,

" You know ..you know.. I hate that man..
And what he did isn't a small mistake that could be forgiven..
Don't forget that our present is the result of his 'MISTAKE'..", Pakya said and got up pushing his plate away..

"But dada he too suffered..", Kalpi said getting off her seat..

"He lived without his mom alone for so many years.. He lived like an orphan though his mother was alive... He also felt cheated... He saw his father burning pyre and had to live with that man who was responsible for it..

He lived his life thinking that his mother never loved him..Gauri maa too had to live like a childless woman when she had her own son...", tears brimmed her eyes as she continued defending Raghav..

"And what about us Kalpi..
Didn't we live like orphans ..despite our mom being alive?? ...What about our aai who all this years lived like a childless woman when her son and daughter were there..?? What about our baba who committed no crime and yet was punished?? What about you who longed for that father's hug that mother's love?? You want me to forgive that person who ruined my family...

Never...", Pakya said with determination his eyes red in rage and hatred..

Scared and tearful Kalpi didn't utter another word while Pakya walked away..

Before entering his room he turned to face Kalpi and said," Today's the last time we discuss this.. I don't want his name uttered by you any other time..

And now you'll focus solely on your career.. We did't focus on Raghav as Kapoor was our first target..

What to do with Raghav Singhaania is my look out now.. And YOU WON'T INTERFERE..", Pakya said stressing on the last words...

Looking at Kalpi he said sternly," Am I clear Kalpi??" and Kalpi just meekly nodded and then without giving her another look Pakya walked straight in his room..

Kalpi went to the table where she placed her mobile and picking it up she too made way to her room..


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On entering the safe confines of her room she closed the door and slowly slid down on the floor with tears making way out of her eyes..

She reread Raghav's message

"Remember that day I asked you a question..
I found the answer and I want you to know it too..
Meet me at home at 5 pm.."

while her brother's words played in her mind..

" I don't want his name uttered by you any other time.."

Pulled like the rope in tug of war she could feel her heart being ripped in two pieces..

She got up and went to her bedside where she kept her father's pic in the drawer of the side table..hugging it close to her heart she cried..

"What am I supposed to do baba?? I.. I love Raghav but ...
I love dada more.. I won't ever break his trust but.. I don't even want to break Raghav's trust in me..

If I agree to what dada says then some day Raghav will know that I lied to him..

He had been once cheated by his father-like uncle and now he hates him..

I don't want Raghav to hate me too.. I don't want him to think that I never had any feelings for him.. I don't want him to think that the care I showed for him was all fake.."

Kalpi kept sobbing and questioning herself.. Her heart.. Her mind..

"Yes Kalpana Varma speaking ..", Kalpi said while answering her phone..

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And the confession cum last part is here..

I have no idea on how companies hire so just assume some things please..

And finally I get to write a total filmy RagNa scene..

Note: Flashbacks in usual italics😉

Please ignore grammatical errors

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The train had arrived... the train that would separate her from her love, her family and more than that .. from herself... from the determined young girl with a fire of revenge in her eyes Kalpi had now turned to a lost girl who first lost her family and now was losing her love..


Flashback..

"Yes Kalpana Varma speaking ..", Kalpi said ..

"Hello Ms.Varma .. Mrs.Rao this side.. I'm calling from Oberoi Group of companies.. ", Kalpi remembered the interview she gave after much persuasion by her brother..


The woman continued ,"congratulations .. You have been selected for post of Marketing Supervisor.."

Trying to sound as normal as she could Kalpi replied," thank you.."

"But Ms.Varma you would be working from Kolkata.. "...the woman said..

She continued explaining," As you might recall that the position you applied for required at least 2 years job experience... but because of your excellent grades and impressive interview you have been chosen for the job at our Belgaum office..

Actually our branch there has constantlyy faced losses and we are looking for ambitious individuals like you.. Your form here states that you have no problem in going out of mumbai for work..(Pakya had filled the form)

So if you are interested in our job offer then you're requested to reach Oberoi head office at 5 pm. After a short briefing you'll get your train ticket to belgaum as all the flights were full.."


"This is it Kalpi... this is what you have to do..", Kalpi thought looking at the train which had just arrived inside the station ...

This was her answer...

Kalpana Jadhav was always a fighter but now destiny had put her in a situation where she had to choose between her family and her love..

So she chose to be away from..

both..


This was her destiny.. her destiny she chose..

"I'm sorry Raghav.. falling in love with you was the biggest and the most beautiful mistake I committed.

But it was just a mistake..

Knowingly or unknowingly you were responsible for my family's sorrows ... if I leave now maybe you'll forget me but.. if you get to know my truth.. my lies... about how I hid my identity from you... you'll hate me .. you'll think that like others I also cheated you and used you..and I can't bear that.. I can't see that love in your eyes being replaced by hatred for me.."


The horn of the train after it halted brought her out of her thoughts.. wiping the tears that rolled down her cheeks and picking up her bag Kalpi got up from the bench and walked towards her allotted coach...

She was checking the list that was put up but stopped suddenly...

"Ms.Jadhav..", a voice came from behind her.. Kalpi felt her heart-beat stop for a moment as her fears just came true.. "Ms.Kalpana Vithal Jadhav", the voice said again..

Kalpi slowly turned around to look into those familiar dark chocolate brown eyes...

Raghav slowly began to walk towards her and Kalpi gulped nervously..

"Going somewhere??...", He said while walking towards her..

On not getting any answer he continued ,"Wow Kalpana .. really you are praiseworthy.. All the while I kept thinking that everything was going according to my plan.. punishing Sahil Kapoor , getting his company and destroying him completely.. all was just going the way I planned .. and few few days ago I just got to know it was all you.. it was all going according to your plan.."

Kalpi lowered her eyes and with a smirk Raghav started clapping his hands mockingly , "You really deserve an applause.. such a planned and perfect revenge game you played..

Sahil Kapoor took away whom you loved the most .. your dad... and you... you took away what he loved the most.. his money.. his power .. his family..", Raghav came more close to her and now stood just few inches away from Kalpi.. the smirk on his face slowly fading away while Kalpi's face had turned pale right from the moment she heard 'Ms.Jadhav' from his mouth...

"And now you're gonna do the same with your second enemy aren't you??.. hmm??", Raghav stepped more closer to her.. tears were biting his eyes as he was so close to lose the one person whom he truly loved..

Framing her face with his hands while slowly lifting them he said," Right na Kalpana.. you're gonna take away from me the one person whom I love and will always love..."

While holding her both hands in his and lifting them such that they are in front of him he said," I don't know why .. when .. how.. but I fell in love with you..

Yes Kalpana I Love You... The only thing I wish for now is to spend each day.. every moment of my life henceforth with you being by my side..

I want my each day to end with your smiling face and start with your beautiful eyes.. and the day I close my eyes forever I want your face to be the last thing I ever saw..", Kalpi looked up at his eyes which were shining due to the unspilled tears.. just like hers...

Holding her hands he continued, "Even if you leave me today I would never ever stop loving you.. I won't force you to stay here with me.. it's totally your decision but if you expect me to forget you after you leave then that would never happen.. till my last breath you'll be the only one in my heart.. It will always be just you.."

The warning horn rang.. just few more minutes and the train will start.. and Kalpi moved away.. she quickly turned around to hide the tears flowing down from her eyes.. she reached the door of the coach and was about to go inside but then moved her neck to see Raghav still standing there looking at her.. his sparkling eyes showing immense love for her.. the love she knew was just meant for her...

The train started moving and Raghav's heart leaped in happiness as Kalpi was still standing outside.. and before he could know it he felt a soft body collide with his hard one while his arms protectively held her slender waist bringing her more close to him.. they stood just like that feeling warmth of each other's body..

It wasn't an easy decision for Kalpi .. to choose Raghav over the one goal she had harbored for ten long years ... but more than that being with Raghav mattered to her.. for some revenge she just couldn't break the heart of the one person whom she had fell for.. for once she decided to follow her heart...

Moments later Kalpi opened her eyes .. breaking the hug she looked at Raghav.. his cheeks had trails of tears... tears of happiness.. those tears felt like thousand daggers pierce her heart.. she leaned forward and kissed away those tears and then whispered while hugging him," I love you.."..

Raghav just couldn't express his happiness in words .. those three words fulfilled all the wishes he ever had.. it was everything he ever wanted... Kalpi moved away breaking the hug but Raghav still held onto her waist while her hands rested on his chest...

"I love you too..", Raghav said huskily while pushing her close to him... Kalpi blushed and looked away .. and then the sight behind Raghav made her freeze in shock as she saw Pakya walking towards them..

Her love made her forgive Raghav but Pakya.. would he forgive him??

Doubts kept increasing and before she would even know it Pakya came to stand near them.. Raghav and Kalpi moved apart and in moments Pakya engulfed Kalpi in a hug..

Kissing her forehead he said ,"Don't you ever dare to scare us like this.. Kalpu do you hate your brother so much that you want to leave him", Kalpi was confused with the sudden change in her behaviour and sensing that Pakya narrated her the whole incident..


Flashback

It was 8 pm and Raghav was waiting for Kalpi while leaning on the terrace railing.. He knew Kalpi too loved him but still there was fear that she won't come..

"Sir..", Ramu kaka said bringing Raghav out of his thoughts.. "Hmm??", Raghav looked at him questioningly.. "Someone has come to see you sir..", Ramu kaka said..

"Kalpi??", Raghav asked and Ramu kaka nodded in denial.. "Tell him that I'm busy..", Raghav said moving back to the railing..

"Umm.. Sir its Mr.Prakash ,Kalpana ma'am's brother..", Ramu kaka said and in a swift move Raghav walked past him to the living room..

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"Hello..", Raghav said making Pakya turn to face him..

"Raghav Singhaania??", Pakya said..

"Yes.."

"I'm Prakash.. Kalpana's brother.."

Pakya with great effort was trying to keep his cool as the worry of Kalpi being missing took over him but the rudeness in his tone stayed intact..

"Ka.. Kalpana isn't at home..", on noticing Raghav's confused expression he continued," She is missing since afternoon.. I contacted every friend and also asked Ga.. your mom.. no one knows where is she.. And..", Raghav immeditely went in his room and picking up his cell phone he dialed few nos.

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After about half an hour he came back and said," She's boarding train to Belgaum..", Raghav said and was walking to the main door when Pakya harshly held his hand.. "And where do you think you are going..??"

"To stop her.. to stop her from leaving ME..", the sincerity in Raghav's voice rendered Pakya speechless..

"Leave my hand..", Raghav said keeping his anger in check as he knew it was his kalpi's brother..

"She is my sister.. And I want you to stay away from her..", he said sternly...

"And I won't..", Raghav replied rudely..," Sure she is your sister but for me she's just the girl I love..", he shrugged Pakya's arm and took long steps towards the main door but Pakya's voice stopped him from taking another step..

"Your love who lied to you..", Pakya knew that he was not doing the right thing but right now he just wanted Raghav and Kalpi apart from each other.. "She isn't whom she claims to be.. she is..".."Kalpana VITHAL JADHAV", Raghav completed Pakya's sentence..

"I know.. I know who she is .. who you are.. And I don't care..

Her name won't change my feelings towards her..Because I know I love her and SHE LOVES ME..", Raghav walked to Pakya and continued," She's your sister and still.. still you want to seperate her from her happiness and that too when you know that it would hurt her.. You came here searching for her coz you thought that she might be here.. WITH ME..

I don't know why you hate me so much but remember.. your hatred for me won't affect my love for Kalpi..", Raghav said..

"Coz you were responsible for my father's death.. your lie killed him..", Pakya replied turning away as the emotional son in him..

Raghav's eyes moistened a bit feeling the same pain he felt as he too had lost his father.. Placing his hand on Pakya's shoulder he said," I know.. In your eyes I've committed a crime but it was a mistake.. my dad's sudden death came as shock for me and I was so lost in my grief that I was taken advantage of..

Your sister once told me that If a person commits a mistake unknowingly he could be forgiven

And if you still think that I have to be punished then fine.. punish me by taking away Kalpi from me.. but I don't want her to suffer because of it.. I don't want her to stay away from her family.. Go stop her..", Raghav said and was now going back to his room but before he could climb up the stairs," I forgive you..", he heard Pakya say..

With a sweet smile on his face Raghav neared her..

"Ouch", Raghav said as he felt Kalpi's light punch on his chest..

"Now what did I do??", Raghav asked..

Narrowing her eyes Kalpi asked. "Why didn't you tell me??"...

"What didn't I tell you??", Raghav said innocently.. "The truth.. why didn't you tell me that it wasn't your mistake.. whatever happened in the past.. that you knew everything about me..??", Kalpi asked...

Pulling her by waist Raghav replied... "Otherwise I would've never known that you love me so much that you forgot your goal for me ."..

"Ahem.. ahem..", they heard Pakya clear his throat and quickly parted apart..

"Love birds.. do you both plan to stay here ya ghar jaake shaadi ki planning shuru karni hai?? (or you wanna go home and start marriage plans..)"

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This is for all those who had once upon a time mentioned that Kalpi should at the end choose Raghav over her revenge..

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Ok so my .. I mean this ff ka farewell speech..😉

First of all thank you to all those who liked, commented, read and jhelofyed my story🤗.. ignored the bloopers and showered this ff with immense love..❤️

thank you so much for liking it .. and now time to say good bye to this story..🤗

My hand is paining warna bahut bada speech likhti😆

P.S Next one to be updated.. And it happened ..after which there'll be alternate updates of broken heart's love and 'and it happened..
Not a prince charming on a hold till may or june..
I'll try to finish the TSs somewhere in between..😊

Please read:
Oh and yes.. After finishing the two ffs I was planning to write season two of my first ff 'Love".. only if atleast few are interested ..thought of it coz that ff was wrapped in a hurry and still much things could be written..

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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See multiname i m super fuper late in unresing my comment...ohk sorry dear.

coming to update.
fabulous, fabulous fabulous. I could not imagined of such ending. Its was full of love emotional update..😳
kalpi defending raghav nd pakya's angry behaviour. It was obvious from both sides coz both r fighting with their different emotions. Kalpi was fighting with her love emotions for raghav in front of her revenge nd pakya was fighting with his unforgetable revenge which ruined his whole family. And thus kalpi decided to leave her both love..her brother nd her raghav.😭

i was very emotional at that scene where raghav was holding kalpi's hand with teary eyes and kalpi also.😭

nd then their union...loved it. I was praying that train should leave from there asap.. otherwise raghav will cry phutt phutt ke...😆
but thanks to u..u didn't let kalpi board the train...😳

nd thereafter their confession was superb...five star on sky.
⭐️


song for ragna:
ishq hua, kaise hua
acha hua jo hua
na main januuu, na tu jaanee
kyu ho gaye Hum deewaane..
na main jaanuuu na tu jaaneee
kyu ho gaye hum deewaneee
Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy valentine day appy
Edited by charvi3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update appy really lovely pakya full mode anger on kalpi on taking rag name😭 n poor her torn in between her love n family
she thought best will be she leave both than choosing one of them
n finally kalpi chose rag for her immense love n pakya finally realise that mistake that sahil took advantage of really awesome
plz update as u said n love as well desr would love t read it
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful, so glad that Pakhaya finally agreeing to Kalpi's and Raghav's relationship, looking forward to the wedding
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update. Waiting for epilogue. Nice ff dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update apply
Pakhya was first angry but later he forgive raghav for his mistake
Update was awesome dear...really loved it how kalpi confess her love..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yess!! Kalpi chose Raghav over her revenge!! 😃 And Pakya also forgave him!!
Nice ending...

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