16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Omg u come back after a long break and unleash this 😲 poor Prem with a butter past became a bakra once again 😡 rags baby u deserve a huge kick the ass for being a jack ass 😡 really what is rags getting back at kalpi for... Sticking up for herself!!!! 😡 well I m glad ge feels guilty and now I eoukd like to see how he apologused 😉 I hope kalpi kicks him out of her house now. I m looking forward to his half assed behaviours redemption.

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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premap

@premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Fab update ! You have described Prem's ' mental status in a gradual , indirect manner ! Superbly written ! Rags is a 'sadistic' monster !!!! Gosh, Wish Kalpi had given a 'fiver' on his smirking face ! Thanks 4 update. Sorry I had forgotten this story for a long while.

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Mallika

@mallika90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Awesomee

Raghav z such a cruel jus to break kalpi he z usng prem

God bechara prem had a attack

Hope evry thng goes well

Waitng 4r nxt part

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swati

@Ragna1302

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Omg poor prem...

Awesome update. ..raghav felt guilty. ...

Now what kalpi do...

Update soon

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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

well it's wonderfull update marri...raghav has done all this to show sammy that he has no soft corner for her but he himself feeling guilty seeing her in pain...nice update...well if u can i want next update today it's self...😉 lol...

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nikkiarora093

@nikkiarora093

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

nice update dear... plzzz keep updating asap...

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Well well well didn't expect this from you Mariee !!!!! Can' t say I like it as of now am unable to fathom the reason behind this but , as you are the writer of this story it's your call . Soo------ a bit uneasy but what the heck , it's early days yet for any opinion !!!!!!!!!!

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
Well well well didn't expect this from you Mariee !!!!! Can' t say I like it as of now am unable to fathom the reason behind this but , as you are the writer of this story it's your call . Soo------ a bit uneasy but what the heck , it's early days yet for any opinion !!!!!!!!!!

To be honest. ..ur comment confused me !!!

What are u confused about exactly ...Hehehe... I know the update would be illogical for some ...but was it so confusing ???? 😕

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Omg so dis was dat monsters plan to show sammy he doesnt care for kalpi by insultimg prem unknown abt prem's condition...rags is such a jerk...isko to sahi sabak sikhana chayiye kalpi ko 😡

Hope prem recovers soon from dis shock n his comatic state

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#760

No Mariee the update is not confusing at all but Raghav's behaviour is Specially after the genuine camaraderie he seemed to share with Kalpi . To me it appeared like that . And I am sure that as a writer you would welcome honest views . Btw it does not by any means entail that I am not in favour of the update . I always respect a writers perspective come what may .

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