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maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: Nandinisai
Wonderful update

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: premap
Fab update ! You have described Prem's ' mental status in a gradual , indirect manner ! Superbly written ! Rags is a 'sadistic' monster !!!! Gosh, Wish Kalpi had given a 'fiver' on his smirking face ! Thanks 4 update. Sorry I had forgotten this story for a long while.

Tysm prema .. I'm absolutely flattered by this comment !! Makes me feel good when effort pays off 😃

Hmmm...a slap ...ull understand it in the upcoming epis as to why I didn't write about kalpi slapping Raghav 😊

Hehehe ...its OK , even I had forgotten the story a bit ..so same pinch ! 😆😆

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Princess1398

@Princess1398

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Posted: 10 years ago

#773

maru I hate u as well as love u ok love u coz u have updated Ur stories and pm'd me without fail and hate u coz well I dint tell me how my story was response he nahi aya tho mera bhi likhnay ka maan nahi tha... but anyway what the hell is rag upto ku kalpi ko taklif de raha hai when at the end thodi taklif ussay khud honay vali hai all in all awesome update soon...

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: mallika90
Awesomee
Raghav z such a cruel jus to break kalpi he z usng prem
God bechara prem had a attack
Hope evry thng goes well
Waitng 4r nxt part

Glad to hear that u liked the update ...

Hahahaha ..Raghav's soon gonna repent ..so chill & enjoy the ride !! 😉

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: switymango

Omg poor prem...
Awesome update. ..raghav felt guilty. ...
Now what kalpi do...
Update soon

Glad to hear that u liked the update ...

What will kalpi do ... Get ur answers soonish !! 😉

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY
well it's wonderfull update marri...raghav has done all this to show sammy that he has no soft corner for her but he himself feeling guilty seeing her in pain...nice update...well if u can i want next update today it's self...😉 lol...

Tysm Falak ..

I wish I could have updated that day itself ...😛

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: nikkiarora093
nice update dear... plzzz keep updating asap...

Ty...😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: rani214
Omg so dis was dat monsters plan to show sammy he doesnt care for kalpi by insultimg prem unknown abt prem's condition...rags is such a jerk...isko to sahi sabak sikhana chayiye kalpi ko 😡
Hope prem recovers soon from dis shock n his comatic state

Yep ...the indirect way of hurting ppl ...especially for a female like kalpi who keeps her family above her ownself ..

Sabak toh hoyega Hi ...aakhir I'm the one writing it 😆

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: ReezaZul
plez update soon...

Sure sure ..

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#780

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Marieee Awesum update yaar!
Loved how you incorporated the ragging and its effects waala thingy in here!

Goodness gracious, My Raghav is a big fat BULLY!!!!!! Shame shame!!!!

Poor Kalpi a moment ago she was so proud and now this!

Mari you have not lost your charm...sorry I have not been commenting on ur previous updates due to lack of time however trust me I read them with full interest! and love them all and also eagerly await them.

Priyeee ... Happy to hear that u liked the update.

I missed tere comments ... And u know what do I miss even more ...tere updates ! Pehle I used to demand pp ...par ab aisi haalat ho gayi hai ke koi bhi update chalega ...kab karegi yaar tu update ??

Charm losing ... I've come way ahead from that stage of mine !! Abhi toh logo ko mera writing torcher bhi laga na ...toh bhi ill continue 😆😆