16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 74

Originally posted by: riaka

Awesome update dear. Congratulations for the century

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Its really perfect

Kalpi is herself today smiling than the girl lost in responsibility

She is smiling due t rag

Hmm she get her brother text n happy n prem of a good news

She slept till late n found it weird rag silent

She thought she is happy of the silence but it weird for her

Update soon

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I'm so glad that Kalpi smile and laugh wholeheartedly without any care in the world
For a few minutes she was tension free
Kalpi brother and Prem texting her was awesome
Finally her brother is not mad at Kalpi anymore
Hmm... There is the mighty Raghav Singhania???
I'm actually feeling scared for Kalpi
What is RS up to???
Wonderful update Marie 😊 I love it

Originally posted by: abxetz

Nice update mariee kutty 😊

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL

Read all the parts in one go... Honestly, it is an awesome story... The character of Kdalpana is always my loved one, but the way u portray her here, is fab.. My most loved person is her.. U know, i find it natural about every person's reaction in here, for each situation.. Sometimes, we are so into ourself, that we decide to neglect that what will be the reaction to our actions.

Originally posted by: niru04

Nice update

Originally posted by: premap

With a short update, you have left us in suspense. Why is the house in silence, without Rags 'irritating' music ? What news is Prem talking about and finally What caused Roshish's excitement ??? After reading my mind is full of Y Y Y ?????

Originally posted by: rani214

Mariee superb update

It was nice to see kalpi smiling after long time

Finally rohish cuming home n Prem is also having good news for her was nice ...now now is his good news sumwhr connected with rags

Has RS finally decided to end kalpi's torchure or planning sumthing worst to hurt her ...as kalpi m also feeling weird for dis silence

Eager to knw wat is dis mighty RS up to...cont soon 😛

Originally posted by: vermameenakshi

nice update but soo chotu...

next time big one plsss

storm... hmmm..

will wait to see what happens next😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Wow has raghav left already...hmmm will kalpi miss him? Silence before the
storm