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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: riaka

Awesome update dear. Congratulations for the century


Tysm !!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awesome update

Its really perfect
Kalpi is herself today smiling than the girl lost in responsibility
She is smiling due t rag
Hmm she get her brother text n happy n prem of a good news
She slept till late n found it weird rag silent
She thought she is happy of the silence but it weird for her
Update soon


Tysm for the comment humaira ...😃
Kalpi is smiling than the girl lost in responsibility --> U have indeed put up the entire update in a single line ... 😃
Shall try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

I'm so glad that Kalpi smile and laugh wholeheartedly without any care in the world
For a few minutes she was tension free
Kalpi brother and Prem texting her was awesome
Finally her brother is not mad at Kalpi anymore
Hmm... There is the mighty Raghav Singhania???
I'm actually feeling scared for Kalpi
What is RS up to???
Wonderful update Marie 😊 I love it


Ty for the comment Natasha ... 😃
What is Raghav upto ... Find ur answrs in the next update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abxetz

Nice update mariee kutty 😊


Tysm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL

Read all the parts in one go... Honestly, it is an awesome story... The character of Kdalpana is always my loved one, but the way u portray her here, is fab.. My most loved person is her.. U know, i find it natural about every person's reaction in here, for each situation.. Sometimes, we are so into ourself, that we decide to neglect that what will be the reaction to our actions.


Glad to hear that u liked the updates 😃
Kalpi's character has been my fav as well ... I modify her as per my will to make her look more appealing & justifiable !
Indeed happy to know that u actually figured my hidden motives correctly😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Ty 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

With a short update, you have left us in suspense. Why is the house in silence, without Rags 'irritating' music ? What news is Prem talking about and finally What caused Roshish's excitement ??? After reading my mind is full of Y Y Y ?????


Get answers to all ur Y Y & Ys in the next shot ..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Mariee superb update

It was nice to see kalpi smiling after long time
Finally rohish cuming home n Prem is also having good news for her was nice ...now now is his good news sumwhr connected with rags
Has RS finally decided to end kalpi's torchure or planning sumthing worst to hurt her ...as kalpi m also feeling weird for dis silence
Eager to knw wat is dis mighty RS up to...cont soon 😛


Tysm rani ...
Hehehe...ur comment has less of statements & more questions 😆😆
Hoping that the next update answers all ur qs
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vermameenakshi

nice update but soo chotu...

next time big one plsss

storm... hmmm..
will wait to see what happens next😊


Next time the update wud be longer ... Pakka !!!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Wow has raghav left already...hmmm will kalpi miss him? Silence before the
storm


Priyyeee ...yeh mere story ka hero hai ..do u think he'd leave this easily ?? 😉😛

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