16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#761

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
No Mariee the update is not confusing at all but Raghav's behaviour is Specially after the genuine camaraderie he seemed to share with Kalpi . To me it appeared like that . And I am sure that as a writer you would welcome honest views . Btw it does not by any means entail that I am not in favour of the update . I always respect a writers perspective come what may .

Ooo, so it was Raghav's behavior... Yeah , I get what u r saying ! Had kept so on purpose ...if that's the thing that confused u ...then I'm actually happy coz it was meant to be that way. 😊

Really appreciated ur honesty ...though it freaked me out initially, but now I'm OK ! 😆😆

Hehehe... I hope my perspective keeps u glued to the story till the end 😉

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#762

Mariee I will always read all your stories and that's a promise . You are a remarkably gifted writer , I have said that time and again through my posts so keep rocking chiquitita !!!!!!!!👍🏼

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#763

Marieee Awesum update yaar!

Loved how you incorporated the ragging and its effects waala thingy in here!

Goodness gracious, My Raghav is a big fat BULLY!!!!!! Shame shame!!!!

Poor Kalpi a moment ago she was so proud and now this!

Mari you have not lost your charm...sorry I have not been commenting on ur previous updates due to lack of time however trust me I read them with full interest! and love them all and also eagerly await them.

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#764

Finally shots update after so long

Prem went through so much 😲 Ragging and neetu n sahil wanted to admit him in mental hospital so sad to now that, kalpi is really his hero 😆 that is the reason y he always wanted to make her proud 😛 am I miss interpreting or does prem really ha e feelings for kalpi till now I thought he treated her as sister but now I don't now y I got this feeling that he might have romantic feelings for her 😛

Does Raghav know about prem's this past did he did it on purpose, he wanted to hurt kalpi so much that he can go to this extent, is he hero or villan in this story 😛

wonderful update Marie 😃

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#765

Wonderful Update !! :) :D

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#766

Prem is so happy that he will succeed
This Raghav and his ego will ruin his peace if it already didn't
I like that he was looking for Kalpi
Oh no! Raghav asking Prem to dance was awful
Prem dreadful memory of ragging came rushing back and cause his attack
Raghav succeed in breaking Kalpi 😭
Awesome update

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ssna

@ssna

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#767

Lovely update
Well i can read d next chap right now itself if u update
So when r u updating d next chap ?

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#768

awesome chappy Maru..

Raggng is crime.. Poor Prem.. Now m waiting for Kalpi's reaction on this..

Maru plz plz plz update nxt chappy soon..
Plzz...
Waiting..

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#769

Originally posted by: sweet1308
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opps prem is suffering
awesome update
hmm prem surprise backfired
rag did this aww how kalpi will forgive him now
actually feel sad for prem
update soon

Glad to hear that u liked the update ...

Shall try ma best to update soon 😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#770

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg u come back after a long break and unleash this 😲 poor Prem with a butter past became a bakra once again 😡 rags baby u deserve a huge kick the ass for being a jack ass 😡 really what is rags getting back at kalpi for... Sticking up for herself!!!! 😡 well I m glad ge feels guilty and now I eoukd like to see how he apologused 😉 I hope kalpi kicks him out of her house now. I m looking forward to his half assed behaviours redemption.

Its only part one of Raghav's jackassness ... Bakra no 2 is yet to come !! But will he let it happen ? Or stop it all ... But then what ?? Lemme tell u honestly ...these are the very questions in my mind as well 😆😆

The post redemption part will be more adorable...so decide what do u wanna see !! 😉