16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

wow
dis is 1st word left frm my lips aftr finish reading.
Its totaly diferent n just lovable story.

Superb update maaru๐Ÿ˜ƒ
starting is just amazing, kalpi cme hme while talking with prem n signaling rohish to put shoes on place and other hand she is straightening sofa cover, shows hw independent and multitasking she is.
Phone convo is amazing. Prem pleading her and kalpi speaking with sarscaticaly, and later prem's try best weapon, emotional blackmailing, and yes its work, kalpi ready 4 it.

Mumbai's best event manager 'Ms
Kalpana Vitthal Jadhav, kalpi said it by luking in mirror, pure pride reflected in it.

Finaly the day arrieve, kalpi get nervous as her frnds career is depen on it as well as her talent is going to watch by international ppl. She is making last minutes preparations and rohish msg come wich made her happy in dis nervous state as well. Lovely bro sis jodi.

Here akdu entry done, n prem got nervous coz he knw kalpi hate egostic ppl and it may going to tough for him.raghav got mother's cld n he get more iritate to ans her plus to live in small flat. Wow its going to be full ok dhamakedar to see iritate ragna with each other living in same roof.
Kalpi hurriedly walk into elivator and bump on sum1 n he must be raghav only coz it is maaru's story๐Ÿ˜†
superb update dear.


ty shonaliii ...i know u dont like ur entire name being taken ..but i like to say that 'eee' at the end of ur name !! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
yup ..all those things like yelling at Rohish etc indicated that she's independent but also a cleanliness freak ... ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ (yeh evil look mera nahi raghav ka hai when he'll get to know this ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)
& the rest of ur comment ...indeed true ... every single word of it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
haahah...ab maru ki story ho aur aisa hero-heoine takraana scene na ho ...aisa kabhi ho sakta hai ??๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
ty again
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Aru18

its really nice..continue soon


thank u aru
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: artiodedra2007

Wow it was just superb '



thank u soo much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: swaralohakare

wow its awsm dear๐Ÿ‘
nice start ๐Ÿ˜‰
update soon pls



thank u so much
shall try to give the next update asap ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65


thank u soo very much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Hi Marushkaa, so excited for this story. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ n yes, I love Roshish more than Pakhya!! More than happy to see him in this. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Loved, loved and loved the first part. What an entry of hero, superb! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ‘ Please update next part soon.



glad to here dat u r excited abt this 1 & so also that u liked...no no ...loved loved loved the update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
hehehh...even i like ROhish more than Pakhya
next part shall be put up 1ce my exams are done

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Maruskhaa when u r planning to give us next shot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: santhisreem

Is Kalpi suffering from OCD ๐Ÿ˜›

Shoe rack, sofa cover n she is checking every microorganism of the hall so i though there is a possibility n then when Prem laughed that it can be vice-versa ๐Ÿ˜‰

If that is true then Mr.Singhania is gonna have a tough time staying in that down market house of kalpi๐Ÿ˜†

Chopper entry aww i love it๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

n her Nikamma bhai is so sweet, Roshish naam sunthe he RRVSMI ke yaadh agaye

1st shot i will be waiting for next part n expecting Marushkaa style nokh-jokh ๐Ÿ˜†
i like 2nd title ๐Ÿ˜Š


Yep ..KAlpana & her cleanliness syndrome has a major part to play in d upcoming parts ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
M. SInghaniya will now be all set to make Kalpi's life as bad as hell ...with she revolting with equal persistence
The entry was inspired from th real series
The next part will be put up soon btw ...shall try writing it tomorrow itself ...i myself am enjoying this story ...aisa lag raha hai ki RRVSMI ke din wapas aa gaye hai !! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: appyK

Yeh comment unres nahi hoga ๐Ÿ˜†

Just commenting to tell u that I'm reading it.. And ya ... Was missing Rohish so thanks for bringing him instead of pakya.. Btw i read just half of it and I already love it.. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Glad to know that u liked it !!
U like Rohish more than PAkya ?? Now thats some news ..as i have not provided a face to him ..its just a name ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Awesome Marie!! This is gonna be aweosme ;) Kalpi and raghav's attitude, I can only imagine how they're gonna get along at first!! For one, time is money and the other, she is dedicated to her work and she ain't taking no shit from anyone ;) awesome!! Got some time now that's how I'm reading ;)


yeah ..they are gonna have a tough time settling undr 1 roof ...even if they dont ..i will make it for them ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
hope u keep getting time ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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