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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

maru darling when are u updating nxt chappy swthrt... Waiting dear... Update plzzz

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
maru darling when are u updating nxt chappy swthrt... Waiting dear... Update plzzz

aaa gayi tuu 😆😆😆

chal ...sirf aur sirf tere liye i will pakka update tomorrow ..the 4th shot. I am starting it asap ... 😃😃

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

😕 bola toh sahi tujhe ...usse pehle not possible re

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: mariee

aaa gayi tuu😆😆😆
chal ...sirf aur sirf tere liye i will pakka update tomorrow ..the 4th shot. I am starting it asap ...😃😃

yup.. Aa gayi mei update mangne... And thnx will wait for tomorrow... Update plzz my pet line 😉

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: mariee

Are u suggesting me a title or just comparing the stories

Title 😛
Comparing it also!! this is one of my favorite movie!! My all time favorite!!

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Title 😛
Comparing it also!! this is one of my favorite movie!! My all time favorite!!

title ...na...pride & prejudice is a classic well established ...if i name my work as that ...somewhere or the other readers' wud definitely go into comparison (unknowingly...human mind u see) ...& then my work wud b a mega flop ...so...

besides ..arent u d 1 alwyas complimenting me for my originality ..what made u think i wud curb that ability of mine over here ?? The story as it is gonna move ahead ...ull realize that its nothing like P&P (though i wish it becomes as awesome as P&P...)

Edited by mariee - 10 years ago

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: mariee

hehehe ...u shud have told me b4 na that u found loopholes n the chartacters ...a tubelight like me took 15 days to understand the same 😆😆
U r cent percent correct ...the reason u gave abv is the 1 that struck my mind as well coz of which i changed the update totally

do u always have to be right santhi ...am i so predictable & transparent ??😆😆 As the raghav & his misbehavior towards his mom was also well interpreted by u 😊😊

1stly i like everything u write 😉 so there is noway im pointing flaws in it 😛

See i understand ur characters so well n i know how u give hint about ur future track 😆

Me Right ? may be in ur case do u remember i said i felt connected to u coz I feel our way of thinking is similar 😃

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: mariee

Nahiii Darlingsss...u cannot be happy ...mera coincidence ka comment is still pending😉
& the lol moment ...tu sahi hai yaar...vo mouse ka thing I hadn't noticed...but u ?? Zindgi...tu nahi hoti toh mera kya hota😉

Arre yar tune sabka reply b kar diya at coincidental couple thread. Kya ab b comment karu ? I mean its to late.😕

nd the last line of ur reply 😳

Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Arre yar tune sabka reply b kar diya at coincidental couple thread. Kya ab b comment karu ? I mean its to late.😕
nd the last line of ur reply 😳

Hehee.. Comments of my fav readers can never be late😉

But it's upto u ...but have u read it ?? Cz if u don't you will not b able to connect with the last update