16th Shot - Had he finally left ? Pg 130 30/10/16 - Page 20

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

suprb update maru... Thnks atleast u cumpltd 3rd short... Dear ab 4th short jaldi update kerna nahi to teri peetai pakki hai.. Update nxt chappy soon... Waiting..

Originally posted by: sunyy

Superb and that rags arrogant bas***d needs a swift kick in the balls and I hope kalpi has the honours. 😛 please update soon and don't take as long this time please 😛

Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome update mariee

how kalpi want to stay away from him but destiny and mariee have other plans..😆

so what u plan for them??

Originally posted by: shrutu

Ohhh wow...mariee superb again 😃

Originally posted by: switymango

Awesome update dear. ...

How raghav talk 2 his mom ...kalpi raghav one more fight. ..

Waiting 4 further update. ..

Update soon. ...

Originally posted by: lolor

superb...raghav is so arrogant ...waiting kalpi to win...

Originally posted by: shahsb_26

Yeh toh Incomplete wala update ka complete make over tha...!! and too small..!!! :P
But Lovely update..

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Aapki mahatwapurna soochana se soochit hamaara mann prafullit ho utha hai!

Humein is Raghav aur Kalpi ki khitpit mein badaa aanand jo mil raha hai!!! haaye!!!!

4-5 ya phir 10-12 hi shot lagaalo, humein koi aapatti nahi hogi!!

Parantu kripaya isey niyamit roop se adyatneekaran(update) karte rahen aur humein manoranjit karte rahen!!!

LOL !...aur haan agla adhyaay agar lamba ho toh humein aur aanand praapt karne milega, aisi aasha karte huye hum aapse abhi aagya lete hain!

Namashkar! Shubh Ratri!

Originally posted by: santhisreem

I thought U finally named this story but YOU sounds ajeeb then it just for this chappy

When i read your incomplete update i felt it abit offbeat 😛coz the way u described kalpi she is kinda perfectionist as she checked every microorganism 😆 how she will not listen to Prem n agree with gauri, didn't she get idea that Raghav is the one who is gonna stay with them n then u changed the update completely now it makes sense it exactly suits ur characters 😃

Raghav n his attitude , him being rude with his mother is going to play a vital role in story it seems..

After a long wait for this chappy to get completed its worth wait its really is nice😊

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Oh gosh this Raghav need to learn how to speak to this mother and I know just the right person to teach him that 😉 Kalpi...
So the mighty RS found Kalpi house nice and his taste too
Oh wow! Another heated conversation between RagNa and I love every minute of it lol
Superb update