An OS : Yes I Do !! (R POV 3) 9/12 - Pg 19

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niranjana

@niru04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Lovely os dr.really loved it

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

First of all sowiieee .. Comment nahi kiya iss liye...

Ok now for the updates.. The only thing I was thinking on R Pov 1 was that.. RAGHAV SINGHAANIA IS USELESS!!! 😆

I mean seriously.. Yeh kalpi ko tadpao idea Sammy ka.. Preparations kiye Sammy aur Kalpi ne.. Iss gadhe ko kuch karna hai bhi ki nahi??😆

But yeah Rammy is really awesome... After Kalpi rags par sirf sammy ka haq hai..😉

But then finally the gadha got some idea of his own.. Kuch toh khudh kiya 😆

And what were you saying?? Cheesy?? Girl saare cheesy lines RagNa ke saath beautiful ban jaate hai.. And they were not cheesy but cute...😃

And study ka effect dikh raha hai.. Platinum group.. Reminded me of d&f block waala chapter ... The one I hated the most..

Fabulous updates.. 😃And congo on completing atleast one of your works..

Lol u made me realise how much time I spend here.. I joined just 16 days before u and already have finished two ffs and am about to finish three more and bahut saare chaalu hai..😲.. Mein kuch aur nahi karti sivaay writing ke aisa lag raha hai..😕

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abxetz

@abxetz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Mariee darling great update 👏 aur vo atom+platinum=ragna vo theory bhi superb tha 🤣

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

nice Maru... I luv it... Thnx 4 this beautiful update sweetooo

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Haaye I never wanted this OS to end Mariee!!!! I love Raghav Singhania!!! And apna Rammmy toh hai hi hit!!!!!

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

RESSS 😃 😃

unress!!!

heyyylooo mariee dear.. hw many tyms u wanna give me shocked surprises ah..??😛 frst.. by RPOV2 i was lyk on a dreamland thinkng abt it (throwng my books aside instead of studyng) and tadaa.. an update again!! dat too at 5:30..?!! really u r gng mad, due these exams, lyk me lol.😆😆. and at d same process u r givng me a sweet torture by updatng at my exam tym.. conc on exmas or update..??!!!😕 ahahhaah..!!! im managng both..😃 and ppl who r waitng fr tables update ll be silently scoldng me lol😛.. bt dats fyn.. im njyng my update nw.. and im glad dat my comment made u update this part and fr continuing it in a cheeky way.. :P😉

"He knew he was acting like a lovestruck college teen ...but she was worth that change !Observing minutest of expression changes on her face ...the way she widened her eyes while shouting , her small nose crunching a bit whenever she frowned with her forehead lines being visible at the same time. Her graceful hand movements during her convo...as if swaying to some extra melodious music audible only to her. & then ... his eyes landed on her lips as he slightly pursed his own as he gulped."

hayeee hayeee.. (i knw u might got bored to listen the same thing again n again.. i have no choice as im lack of words nw!!) watchng ur love lyk dat.. observing all her cute expressns.. at dat moment it ll be the most sweetest moment fr him.. by taking in her beauty.!!😳😳

" Raghav then managed to shoo away all of them when he aimed a cold deadly stare to the salespeople around clearly indicating "She is my woman !" Every single eye which was looking at 'his' Kalpana in an inappropriate way lowered as they started faking a pretence of work the very next second."

and this part was too good!! cuz of the diff u showed btw jealousy-ness n possesive-ness. he doesnt need to be jealous nw.. he has evrythng includng his love.. so wats d point of being jealous..? bt yes!! fr possesive-ness.. seeng his possesiveness n that deadly glare no one ll dare to look at his love.. and i lykd it!!😆👏

"Today the carnation person seems more lucky than me who is getting her undivided attention.I am gonna hide tha phone of hers once we are home. Warna Pata chale ...main yaha par usse baat karne mein laga rahu aur wo Waha uss fulwale ko daatne mein magn Ho...Raghav from when did u start cracking such Sammy types jokes ?"

this line really cracked me up and i was laughng lyk stupid.😆. the changed raghav singhania.. who actng lyk crazy in love! which was good to read. and dat line.. the moment he saw the ring "blinded fr a split second" though it was funny bt it was kind off apt to dat situatn.. then the platinum thing.. well i can undrstand engineerng ka affect, which wont go easily.. 😉😛

and the most needed push fr kalpi has finally done, by slidng d ring to her, fr which the happiness she felt was vanished within seconds.. which was lyk a hint to raghav dat she is ready nw.. (as u explained) totally perfectt and superbbb!!!!👏😊

"Then grazing his huge hands down her long arms he finally got hold of her waist as he pulled her towards him. Spinning her around he again noticed tears in her eyes as he brushed them off. He had finally accepted his love as also answered her questions. He knew she loved him too.. Uski aakhein ...bataati thi ki vo use chahti hai ...par vo Yeh baat sirf ek baar Uski zubaan se sunana chahta tha" nw i really do wonder hw cum our likes match..??! seriouslyy hw..??😲 cuz im damn sure dat i watched dat scene (in ema) lyk fr almost a 50 tyms and even the rain scene too.. and here it goes again.. im glad u used those dialogues..😃😆 and last ended with a mischievous n beautifull kiss!!!😳😳 hayyeee marieee.. wat an os.. and honestly.. more than os im lovng RPOV's more.. thnx fr an awesumm os dear.. love u..!!❤️🤗

PS: i knw most of the comment is full of the update nlyy.. bt i jus wanna mention few scenes which i loved it.. as result my comment became lengthy hope dats fyn..😛 waitng fr 15th dec nw..coincidences u see.. 😎

Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago

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-Maggi-

@-Maggi-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Finally the Confession part is here

I LOVED IT I LOVED N I LOVED IT

I was reading d update n when my eyes suddenly fell not that red highlighted part of urs which has my name i was like what is it doing here 😆

Thanq for considering my request n writing Raghav's POV on confession part also n that too in your exam time very sweet of you n i loved it alot 😃

Ok a BIG HUG for that 🤗 MARUSHKAA(when ever i read your name Rj marushkaa face flash in my mind 😆 so i always call u mariee but today it is special so MARUSHKAA 😛)

Raghav took that as an opportunity to gape at her undisturbed as he rested his chin on his arms which lay cross on the steering wheel in front of him

Loosing his entire Singhaniya empire won't be as painful if he lost her today Don't know y but i like this side of Raghav who don't hesitate to express his feelings for his kalpi

Raghav then managed to shoo away all of them when he aimed a cold deadly stare to the salespeople around clearly indicating "She is my woman !" Possessive 😆

Iss baar baat uske kalpi hai ...he wanted nothing less than best 😃😃

She is indeed 1 of ur most awesomest creations... that she truely is

Raghav didnt forget to thank sammy even in that time😆

ok I just listed the parts which i liked the most as i know very less words in English which i have already used to praise you 😆 so only one word its wonderful story n u r an awesome writer another lovely n happily Ever After wala ending for RagNa 👏

u r a chemical engineer ufff! how r u reading those equations 😲😲 i mean i almost died reading that 1 chapter on organic chemistry in my 2nd inter🤣

Edited by santhisreem - 10 years ago

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: santhisreem
Finally the Confession part is here

I LOVED IT I LOVED N I LOVED IT

I was reading d update n when my eyes suddenly fell not that red highlighted part of urs which has my name i was like what is it doing here 😆

Thanq for considering my request n writing Raghav's POV on confession part also n that too in your exam time very sweet of you n i loved it alot 😃

Ok a BIG HUG for that 🤗 MARUSHKAA(when ever i read your name Rj marushkaa face flash in my mind 😆 so i always call u mariee but today it is special so MARUSHKAA 😛)

Raghav took that as an opportunity to gape at her undisturbed as he rested his chin on his arms which lay cross on the steering wheel in front of him

Loosing his entire Singhaniya empire won't be as painful if he lost her today Don't know y but i like this side of Raghav who don't hesitate to express his feelings for his kalpi

Raghav then managed to shoo away all of them when he aimed a cold deadly stare to the salespeople around clearly indicating "She is my woman !" Possessive 😆

Iss baar baat uske kalpi hai ...he wanted nothing less than best 😃😃

She is indeed 1 of ur most awesomest creations... that she truely is

Raghav didnt forget to thank sammy even in that time😆

ok I just listed the parts which i liked the most as i know very less words in English which i have already used to praise you 😆 so only one word its wonderful story n u r an awesome writer another lovely n happily Ever After wala ending for RagNa 👏

u r a chemical engineer ufff! how r u reading those equations 😲😲 i mean i almost died reading that 1 chapter on organic chemistry in my 2nd inter🤣

hahahah...tysm !!!

i accept the hug ...😳😳😳

Marushkaa...naaa...my name's a unique 1😉😉

She's RJ malishkaa which means something else whereas my names an like another term for the name mariya !!

Sadly i couldnt put in spme punch lines like the last time ...but fir bhi i am glad that u liked d update😃😃

I am an 'aspiring' chemical engineer...first year & dare u speak anything abt my subject ...LOL !!😆😆 Heeheh..I know many find chemistry tough & boring ...but in my ccase it exact ulta. Chalo finally u found a dissimilarity b/w us as i just love organic chemistry amongst the 3 😉😉 But our Shinchan wali similarity yet remains 😆😆

Edited by mariee - 10 years ago