Originally posted by: vyshuu..
Hahhahah.. mariee..
Sach main tu darr gayi.. sryyy Bt its okay.. I got my update..😃 😃 thnxx dear..
RESSS!!! 😆
unress!!
heyylloo mariee.. guess im already late n credits goes to my exams.. no blamng me dis tym..😆😛
and hayyee hayeee mariee.. honeslty i dint expect dat u ll make raghav's pov so romantic and a wonderfull one!!!😳 (jus lyk our taste, marushkaa-vyshuu.. wali)😉 it was simplyy superbbb yaar.. i really read lyk almost three tyms to satisfy myself lol.😃. at frst wen u mentioned dat kalpi is cryng.. i thought it ll be a bit kind off emtional n raghav, strugglng with his in inner battle.. bt im totally wrong and yes im happy dat u made me wrong by giving an awesum update..!!😉😃
"Time stopped as his eyes were fixed on God's extreme fursat wali creation advancing towards him. It was none other than Kalpana ...'his' Kalpana. Aur abhi uss Kalpana ke baad Raghav Singhaniya ye naam jodne ke liye agar baat bigaadni bhi padi toh Koi baat Nahi (er...I am sorry ...I am super obsessed with non-majboor Raghav's dialogues in the original series) as his subconscious mind strengthened its resolve."
@bold well.. after joining his name with her he can be able to manafy her easily lol.. i really lykd those lines..😉
"Every bit of her exposed skin was glittering like gold as his hands ached to touch it. The man in him was finding it really tough to not walk to her & pull her in his arms & have his head nuzzled in the crook of her neck & drop a kiss over there. (okkk...did I really write that ? Ummm..I stop over here b4 my thoughts go all ahem ahem) Though he liked her hair let loose ...today the bun was actually beautifying her feminity. & then was her face ...is it a mention ever ?? He had always loved the smile on it ...but today the slight frown which pertained on it as she adjusted her dress was also cute"
really mariee.. though i could picturize evrythng easily, i wish i could see these scenes onscreen. and dear.. yes!! u did write dat!! (which i loved it) guess u r becumng romantic nw-a-days lol😉.. well dats good anyways.. then we can get more n more of these updates lol. though they dint share much of physical intimate scenes.. bt the way u wrote n explained was too romantic.. dats the reason i wanted to read again n again!! 😳😳
"R POV : Vitthal uncle has got enough of privilege to have his name after u. Its now high time that I get it"
and this line.. i wonder frm where u ll get lines. so simple, apt n yet funny!! it was lyk kind off a last punch to the update (in a good way)lol..😆😛
and sryy kis baat ki yaar.. fr giving us a beautifull n a romantic..??😕 and apologies fr makng dis os drag..??!!😕 mariee.. i guess studies made ur brain type this instead of-"chalooo nw do hit the like button n encourage me with ur valuable comments as i gave u all such a wonderfull update..!! - MARUSHKAA" hehheehe🤣😆.. nw its tym fr another update. okay update it wenever u r free.. love u dear.🤗❤️
PS: looks lyk i surrounded ur update lol..😆 before n after ur update der s nlyy my post.. fr which im happy😃😃. okay nw this is becumng too lengthy. 😛 do update soon😉
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