An OS : Yes I Do !! (R POV 3) 9/12 - Pg 19 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

amazing..plez cntinue.😃



Ty 😃
Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bas ...enough of torcher !' as he held her by the shoulder. Then pulling her to the centre of the room as they now stood facing a curtained wall as he finally revealed the truth. (The dialogue format of this scene is in K POV if Ull have forgotten) He chuckled at her innocence when she questioned whether he liked Paakhi. Oh ! Silly girl... He decided it to be the time to actually make her realize as to who the girl is as he placed his chin on one of her shoulders & gently entwined his fingers with hers. Then snuggling his head in the notch of her neck he lightly brushed his lips on the smooth skin over there. He had resisted that urge for ages infinite ...it felt so atleast for him. He felt her soft cheek caress his bearded 1 as she had actually moved closer to him. Could this day get better ...his reserved-natured kalpi was no longer shy towards him. As he then snapped his fingers. That's when the curtain uncovered the wall & Raghav pointed in its direaction as he whispered in her ear"I have always been in love with this woman" ahhhummm i don't think i need to write anything else.

it was a nice os! i like such kinda short stories! next story kabhi?? 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Mariee,What have u done to us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

First of all,I have missed out this OS.


Secondly,I have started reading from Raghav's POV 2 and the pain and the confusion of Kalpi made me to scratch my mind ,also,yelling my memory to first read the prologue.


Then,my Ragna Soul shaant huva!!!!!!!!!!!!!.


Too beautiful and worth reading more than once.PAISA WASOOL WALA OS,


CAN ONE MORE PART BE INCUDED???


U didn't read this ??? Bad...
Anyways better late Dan never ...
Tysm for dat Paisa vasool comment 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

what a fantastic pov 2 👏
love the entire pov...beautifully written...
how much control he has to do to stop his budding feeling for kalpi seen her like an angel...
sammy's lan won't fail ever😆

lovely update MARSH...its niether cheeky nor mushily ewww...rather its wow👍🏼


thank u zindgi ...
glad to know dat u didnt find it cheeky or extra mushy
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: santhisreem

Firstly list of my favorites in this part 😆😆


Man ! He's gonna need a map to get outta there...

Ufff!! even i feel the same yar definitely one needs a map to get out of those deep n Beautiful eyes i realized it when she started working in MP as in EMA i was busy staring at Raghav 😉

R : Kuch kaam bhi kar liya kar kabhi kabaar. Aur kitni phds karega inn saari chizo mein !!
S : (raising an eyebrow) Oh Really ??

Raghav Singhania n his sense of humor🤣🤣 this one is a new side 😆

'his' Kalpana. Aur abhi uss Kalpana ke baad Raghav Singhaniya ye naam jodne ke liye agar baat bigaadni bhi padi toh Koi baat Nahi (er...I am sorry ...I am super obsessed with non-majboor Raghav's dialogues in the original series)

You find perfect place in time to fix in those (i didn't find a perfect word to describe them so giving my own name as) Signature dialogues in The Raghav Singhania's Estyle 😆😆 I'm in love with them Madly

R POV : Vitthal uncle has got enough of privilege to have his name after u. Its now high time that I get it.

This one gonna be my all time favorite i will never ever forget it 👏👏 this definitely proofs much he loves her
Love ?? will be a small word should in say Worship her or she is his life oxygen 😃

Can you give me tips of how u write these emotions n feelings, seriously think im going to be addicted to them if you continue like this😉

Desperately waiting of the last one🤣


I just dont know why i love ur comments ...& i kindda wait for em
u r a philosophically romantic person ...thts what i can say from ur fav parts dat u mentioned😳😳
hahahha...oxygen ...lol !!
u need tips ?? tu kabhi meko online mil ...tujhe pure ke pure classes de dungi 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lolor

kudos to u baby... 👏 👏 👏
beautifully written
rags is so sweet...& Sammy shud become professionally loveguru... 😆
pls after rags pov give some lovely ragna moment also...pls...


ty
hahah..sammy's already a professional & works only for RS ...we shud suggest him that as a career ..shudnt we ??😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abxetz

Nice update mariee 👏


awww..thank u my malu reader😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

its beautiful Maru... I luv it plz update nxt part


ty bricka 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Love Raghav pov
Poor guy is equally hurting by hurting his Kalpi. All thanks to Sammy ;)
Love the effect Kalpi has on Raghav without her even realizing it
Beautiful update


thank u natasha
indeed u r right ...thats the main thing i wished to highlight of he being equally hurt while seeing kalpi in pain

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Cheeky??? It was awesome!!! Haay mera studdd Raghav!!!!! Love him so much and your OS makes me fall in love with all over again and again and again and again and again...oops I got stuck in the loop mode...and again and again and again and again...Sigh!!!!


hahahha..priya on a loop
& ty

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