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Chapter 1
Kalpana

Some eight years later...

"Raghav baba, come look what has happened to sahab!" Screamed the terrified maid.

Raghav rushed to the study to see his father drunk and throwing things in the air breaking whatever came in the way! He was raging mad. Fury, frustration, disappointment, embarrassment were just a few emotions he was going thru. On the table was the note Gauri had left that morning. A one liner. "I am leaving"
Raghav was terrified to see this side of his father. He had no clue his father could have this side too. His fun loving dad who never raised his voice was yelling and screaming! He moved closer to his dad in hopes that he will be able to calm his father. But his father paid no heed to the teary eyed child that came to support, for support. In his rage, he pushed Raghav and Raghav stumbled off and grabbed the table for Balance. And that is when he noticed the note! The note that broke the bubble their family lived in. The note that took his childhood away. The note that changed the course of his life!

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The community hospital was bustling with activity. It was more like a bazaar than a hospital. But this is all Vitthal could afford with a growing family for the birth of their second child. His mother was sitting on a bench with his son, Pakya, outside the labor room. He was pacing the floor in anxiety. Will he finally get a princess? Will their dreams come true?

He was lost in his thoughts thinking about the past few years of their life. The last eight years were a roller coaster for their family. His married life was a bliss and his job was great at the beginning. But after two years of their marriage, their troubles started when Kamala started getting worried about not being able to get pregnant. Then they found that if they get the treatment done, she would be able to get pregnant. That meant money. Money that they did not have. Vitthal made enough for them to live without starving, but that left them with no savings for a rainy day. He went to his boss, Mr. Singhania who was kind enough to give him a loan to get his wife treated, but that needed to be paid back. Kamala had to start working as a bai to slowly pay off the debt while getting treated. All their effort paid off when Pakya was born. And now their happiness was going to get doubled with the birth of their second child!

Vitthal was brought out of his deep thoughts when the nurse came and told him that he was yet again a father. A father of a little girl. His princess.

He held the hand of four year old Pakya and took him into the ward to meet his little princess. She was prettier than any imagination! They named her Kalpana! Their Kalpana who was now their reality!!

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And such was the day when Kalpana came into the world. Making their family complete. Unaware were they that in a house not too far, a family was being broken and shattered into pieces that would no longer fit together...till she will make it a whole again!


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Chapter 2
The Cry


One month has passed. Both Raghav and Kalpi are crying in their own world unaware of each other's existence.

Kalpi, because she is hungry and her mother is busy feeding the "other child". Memsahab's baby. Paakhi. This is where Kamla had been working for the last six years. She was hired to be a nanny to Prem, their son and now their daughter Paakhi. Coincidently Paakhi and Kalpi were born on the same day. Vitthal and Kamala had paid off their debts but now with a growing family, it had become necessary for her to keep working and bring in the second income. And thankfully Neetu memsahab had agreed that she could bring Kalpi with her to work as she was still too small to be left alone with the ailing mother-in-law.

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Raghav, because his mother has been gone a month and his father is hardly sober anymore. His mother's disappearance has shattered their world. Raghav was no longer an innocent boy of eight. In this past month he has matured way beyond his age. In this past month, he had physically lost his mother and emotionally his father! Could life get any worse? Little did he know, it could...and it would!

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The door bell rang and the maid opened the door for Mr. Kapoor. Raghav is sitting on the couch doing his homework. He watches as Kapoor uncle goes into the study. He hopes that maybe papa will listen to his best friend and come back out of his depression. The Kapoor family had been so helpful this past month. Little did he know that it was all a farce. A very well staged drama.

It was the gunshot that shook him. He ran to the door and found Kapoor uncle running out screaming my friend took his own life! What he saw in there was pure horror. His father was lying in a pool of blood with the gun in his hand and a gaping hole on his head. His father not only took his life, he killed the child that was Raghav Singhania.

The next couple of weeks went in a haze as Raghav saw his home, his heaven become a haunted house. A child so small with no idea what was happening suddenly found his maids helping him pack. The lawyers declared that according to the will Mr. Kapoor will be the caretaker of the Singhania Empire and Raghav's guardian. He will be leaving his house tomorrow. Forever.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnk love it so much n dare u t discontinued it again
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Thnk love it so much n dare u t discontinued it again


Won't my dear! Promise!
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Would love to read your comments soon! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update all part dear. 😛
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Originally posted by: poo29

Please update all part dear. 😛


Doing it slowly! Need to find the parts as I deleted them from the forum and now have to go back among my zillion files to find each part! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice updates...waiting for all updates
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Originally posted by: lolor

nice updates...waiting for all updates


See the message above, trying to find them! Lol

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