RagNa(AshNa) ff: Broken heart's love Part 12 22/07/16 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61


Sorry to keep u guys waiting .. pls check the note..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

What the... You started a new ff n I'm coming to know now? 😲

Nice idea... Kalpi's lover died n Raghav's betrayed him, now they'll find their true love again in each other...
Chapter 1 was emotional... The way kalpi still misses ashu...
Update soon


Ok that's not my fault.. you were busy holidaying😉
Glad u liked the idea😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its ok multiname...
but give us a update of that's called revenge soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plzzz chotu sa hi update bt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note:
Sorry for delaying the update.. I have my exams approaching very soon followed by a family function so I'm not quite sure when I'll be updating.. I know I have delayed update of this ff but not giving any updates till 4th jan .. After that I'll be little more regular with updates of ffs..
I am really really sorry for keeping you guys wait and if at all I get some time I'll try to give one update of this ff..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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4 jan???? huhuhu, never mind..im waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okayyy dear.. take ur tym.. and do well in exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's okay dear take your time
will be waiting for your update
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Study ka heavy dose ho gaya so thought of typing an update.. and ya this ff will not have frequent updates.. i have a pretty valid reason .. need to do a lot of thinking before typing up the update as I have to write mostly emotional parts.. i'm not really good at it so will be taking time...

And the english translation may differ coz I wanna give the same underlying meaning..

And no proof reading so expect tons of mistakes as I'm typing from phone..

This one is for you bricka🤗

"Ladkewaale aa gaye (The groom's family has arrived)", One of the over excited relative said after entering Paakhi's room.. Kalpi who was adjusting the garland on Paakhi's hair looked at the mirror and smiled at the blushing Paakhi..

She covered Paakhi's forehead with the ghuungat and helped her get up as the heavy lehenga along with the jewelleries made it quite difficult for Paakhi to stand properly on her own..

Downstairs the loud dhol music informed arrival of the baaraat.. Gauri along with Mr.Hrishikesh Raichand and some other relatives stood at the door way waiting for the groom Samar Singhaania and his family... Dressed up in a cream-coloured sherwaani and accompanied by his parents and elder brother Sammy came and stood in front of his would-be in-laws..

Gauri who's face gleamed with happiness on seeing her daughter's in-laws and her son-in-law arrive asked for the aarti thaali from her sister standing right behind her.. Gauri did the aarti and everyone was welcomed with garlands..

Sammy was then to the beautifully decorated mandap .. he left his shoes outside the mandap and sat in front of the bonfire and soon the wedding rituals began.. While the panditji was reciting the mantras Sammy saw his brother who was sitting on a front row chair working on his phone..

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"And when you'll be doing tge rituals I'll add chilli powder to the fire lets see then how peacefully you'll perform your wedding rituals..", Raghav said to Sammy who was busy dressing up for his roka (one of pre-wedding rituals)... "I see you came up with another plan to trouble your sibling during his wedding Raghav", Neetu Singhaania smilingly said while entering her son's room.. Nodding his head disapprovingly Sammy said," Mom he's just gonna keep doing that coz Mr.Unlucky Singhaania's wedding's muhurat is one wek after mine.."... Getting up from the sofa Raghav got up and side-hugged his mom and while jeeping his head on her shoulder said," Mom.. I will .. coz thanks to this champu's brilliant idea of asking panditji to find a muhurat for my wedding differently otherwise I would've got married on same day.. Ab dekh bacchu mein kaise teri shaadi ka band bajaata hu.. (Now see what I do at your wedding??) ..", Raghav said earning laughter from his mom and Sammy..

Sammy's heart pained on seeing his brother who kept teasing and pulling his leg sitting alone lost in his world of work.. though he was happy that he was getting married to his love but the sadness on seeing his brother's hidden pain just couldn't leave Sammy mind...

On the other hand his better-half was experiencing similar emotions for the girl who was helping her descend the steps as they walked towards the mandap downstairs.. Kalpi's smile for any outsider would appear like the most genuine and beautiful smile they would've ever scene but only Paakhi and Gauri could see that though she was smiling the glimmer in her big black eyes was missing...

Kalpi helped Paakhi sit in the mandap and then stood back observing the rituals while almost successfully controlling her emotions.. Just then she felt a hand on her head.. she turned her neck expecting Gauri but much to her surprise it was Hrishikesh..

Flashback

Two days left and then the only daughter of the house was going to get married and eceryone was busy in the preparations for the same.. while happiness showed its presence in every corner of the house there was tension filled in one of the rooms..

"I just don't get it what's the problem is Kalpi's company doing all the preparations??", Gauri angrily said to her husband.. From about half an hour they were arguing on why Kalpi's Wedding palnning company doing all the preparations for Paakhi's wedding.. "The problem is .. that girl's presence reminds me of my son's death..", Hrishikesh spatted out while on the verge of crying.

Placing her hand on his shoulder and while rubbing it slightly to calm his temper Gauri said," Rishi there's no use dwelling on the past.. Its not her but you who's scratching those old dried wounds.. Ashu's death was an accident and blaming Kalpi for it would do nothing but heart Ashu's soul.. (kneeling in front him and holding his hands) and Kalpi is the reason for this wedding.. if she wouldn't have managed your business while you were ill after Ashu's death then all of this wouldn't have been there... we do not have the slightest idea of her pain and we never would understand it but atleast we can help get back to her normal .. atleast we can reduce her pain.."

Gauri was in tears.. she got up and left the room leaving Mr.Raichand to think about his wife's words.. She was right.. He knew how much Ashutosh and Kalpi loved each otger and his death had hurt Kalpi more than anyone else as the girl who came alone in this world lived alone all her life was again left alone..

He remembered how after his son's death he got a heart ailment and his recovery took six long months.. back then his company was already facing losses and if Kalpi wouldn't have taken things in her hands leaving behind her own company his business wouldn't have existed..

Moving towards the window he looked out to see Kalpi who was instructing the assistants about their work ... Everything had a proper time and this was the time when he had actually forgiven Kalpi ...

Hrishikesh smiled at Kalpi and so did Kalpi as happy tears left her eyes... Time did prove its worth as it has slowly started healing the wounds..

P.S RagNa meet agle saal.. now that they are so close they surely are meeting..

And if i haven't replied to any comment then I'll do it later on...

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Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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