RagNa(AshNa) ff: Broken heart's love Part 12 22/07/16

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Prologue

The beautifully decorated balcony looked even more beautiful with the background of the dark sky which unlike everyday was adorned with some stars...

"Happy b'day to you.. Happy b'day to you... Happy b'day dear Ashutosh .. happy b'day to you.. (Raising an eyebrow) Bhool gaye na apnaa hi b'day.. mera toh kabhi nahi bhoolte par khud ka hamesha bhul jaate ho.. ha ha pataa hai mujhe ab tum kya kahoge.. (In a flirtatious tone) Jab meri sweetheart yaha hai toh mujhe mera b'day yaad rahne ki kya zaroorat hai.. right na.. (Raising an eyebrow)You forgot your b'day na.. You never forget mine but you always forget yours.. Ya ya I know what you wanna say.. (In a flirtatious tone) When my sweetheart is hear why do I need to remember my b'day.. Right na.."

While cutting the cake tears began to roll down her cheek.. She could no more keep them at bay.. While wiping each tear that rolled down she cut the cake "Look I'm keeping my promise", saying so she fed herself the cake and in not more than seconds the tears gushed down her eyes as she started crying uncontrollably...

But alas there was noone.. noone to console her.. noone to say,''I'm there.."..The only person who said that was no longer with her...

"Sorry Ms.Jadhav he's no more..", those words that had broken her heart into million pieces echoed in her ears..

"She betrayed me... SHE BETRAYED ME!!!!", he yelled while throwing off the bottles kept on the bar table.. he then moved towards the table in front of him and threw the vase on the floor breaking it into pieces.. just like his heart was broken into pieces by her...

The one girl who made place in his heart.. the girl who was his true love.. the girl whom he loved more than his own life had cheated on him.. used him.. betrayed him..

"I never loved you.. never had.. never will..", her words piercing his heart...

He crashed down on the ground screaming,yelling and crying as his love broke his heart..

Two broken hearts..
One because of love and the other by love...
What is it that fate has decided for them??
Can true love happen twice??
Can someone have faith in love after being betrayed??

Its a story of two broken hearts healing each other.. loving each other... mending to form one heart..

P.S Sorry but I really can't stop myself from writing RagNa stories.













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Add arpitak to buddy list for pms.. No pms from my ID..
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Awesome appy waiting for ur update. Prologue was very😭
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So interesting pls update soon
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Interesting
continue soon and do PM once update
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👏beautyful prolog appy...plz pm me... Thnx...
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Awesome prologue Arpi! Loved it. Of course life offers a second chance in everything, even love. So its true that love can happen twice. Wonderful idea dear. Keep writing. Don't forget to pm me, I know you won't 😉. I love that you keep writing ragna stories. I'm sucker for them.
Love you 🤗
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Intresting concept arpi
continue soon🤗
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Interesting prologue.cntnu soon and pm me
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jaldi likho aage ki story cant wait.

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