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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Oh god Raghav gives so much pain to kalpi and she too want to feel that pain to become heartless like him...to hate him like this...poor girl but what happened when raghav come to know truth I'm sure he surely regret for his all deeds...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I cannot wait for Raghav to know the truth!

And Realize all the destruction, which has lead to complete fall down for the one whom he loves ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Beautiful update
Raghav is breaking Kalpi bits by bits where there is no return
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous update! If in 2 hrs you can turn out such a superb story , you can give us an update s a daily dose' of 'mood elevator' for all of us ! BTW, Kalpi has a strong personality, not giving in to Rags torture ! Hope she will not loose her self-respect, whatever pain or 'moral blackmail ' she undergoes !. Are you by any chance giving an update WSOON ? Looking forward . Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
OMG Now this torture is getting too much
i got a ruff idea when he said prove like basanti proved to veeru dancing on broken glasses

but this is stupidest thing he wanted to humiliate her infront of the world and make her dance on song which she has so many emotions attached to 😭

she hurt her foot and now after all he had done he is concern for her

one thing that good in this update is kalpi decided that she will not keep quite like before hope she clear this misunderstanding in this process

i know it will take time but this torture is to much to bare😭
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Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😭 aawww my heart is crying as i seen kalpi in pain .i cant see non of them one is in pain and other is heartless .o god .i am crying to our ragna like that .hope soon dark cloud goes and new sunshine comes .nice update dear.


same here... this story always make me cry..
hope truth comes out fast and their love blossoms
pls update next part also...

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Chap 7:

She runs out of Singhania mansion weeping her tears and leaving behind Ragahv's business associates rude comment. She is not wearing her slipper and her feet are bleeding so she could not run to a far distance. She falls on the ground crying her heart out - I was helpless but you are doing all these to me deliberately. I am ready to bear every pain you give. But why did you do this to me Raghav? You did not think about my dead parents once. You made mockery of my art, my baba's home and my mother's love. How can you lower yourself to this level? You forbid listening my side of story. You turned deaf ears to my apologies. You are not ready to believe in my love. And from now on, I am not going to try to make you believe in anything. You want to destroy me in pieces. I will let u destroy me completely. It will be token of my love for you. I hope this gift of mine will not become burden on you one day. One day you are going to regret knowing the truth and I know that day will come. But I am afraid you will not find me but the stone which you are creating'

It started raining weeping her tears and blood. She looks at the sky thanking god for the rain as it hides her tears.

Her feet are bleeding. She could not run into this condition. Her condition could worsen on the road. - He is looking here and there to search her. He does not care about getting wet in the run. He has to find her. Heart is the most complicated part of human life. Sometimes it becomes a stone and sometimes it melts in a moment. Her destruction is his motto and her pain is his necessity but still his heart skips a beat seeing her in pain. Her pain does not lessen his pain and his heart aches more but still it gives him a sadistic satisfaction. He knows nothing can lessen his pain now but he craves that satisfaction. This pain is his life and she also has to live with this pain. She deserves this pain. Suddenly he spots her sitting on the ground. Then he sees her standing slowly and she starts walking slowly wincing in pain.

Kalpana is trying to walk slowly when she feels someone's hands around her waist and the next moment, she finds herself in Raghav's arm. He is carrying her toward his house.

Leave me, I want to go to home.' - Kalpana said angrily.

Driver will drop you' - Raghav informed her.

I can go my own' - Kalpana retorts .

Your feet are bleeding' - he says.

Why do you care?' - She asks. Her eyes are shining in hope.

Only I have the right to hurt you.' - He says seeing into her eyes.

Kalpana smiles sadly hearing this. He puts her down in the car and whispers into her ear -Don't be in illusion that I felt sympathy for you. This pain will be nothing in front of the pain I am going to inflict in your life Kalpana. You have dared to challenge me today and you should know what I do to the people who challenge me. Do you remember Mr. Mehra, owner of the restaurant, you used to work in. He got to know that you were framed in stealing charges and he wanted to help you. You know what happened to him. He had to sell his restaurant in very low price to me. I had destroyed him as he had challenged me by going against me. Now imagine what I will do with you.

Kalpana - Do whatever you want to do with me, I don't care anymore. I am never going to beg in front of you for the mercy. I am not going to expect any act of kindness from you. You want to see in me pain. Don't worry I will not snatch this pleasure from you. I will refuse to shed tears if it will lessen my pain. I want you to see my pain so one day you can regret more.'

She had again challenged her that she is not going to beg in front of him. She does not have any regret for what she had done to him 8 years back. But soon she will beg in front of him and regret for the betrayal. His eyes become red in anger. Kalpana gets frightened for a moment seeing him like this and then prepares herself to bear his anger but Raghav smiles - You don't have to worry about me. I am not going to regret anything'

Raghav orders driver to drop kalpana at her chawl. Kalpana whispers in low tone - I am forgiving you Raghav but don't do something that you would not be able to forgive yourself. I hope you can see my love before your hatred destroys it.'

Raghav enters into house and instructs servants not to disturb him. He goes to bar and starts drinking. She dared to challenge him. Raghav calls Sammy - Do anything but make Kamla Yadav agree for your and Naina's marriage in two days and don't worry I will take care of your marriage with sam on the same day'

Sammy answers - Raghav still you have time to stop this game. It will not bring you any peace'

Who said I want Peace, Sammy. I want her destruction ' - Raghav cuts the call.

Kalpana is on her way to chawl and suddenly she asks driver to stop in front of the hospital. She needs to bandage her wound. She enters into the hospital and asks the nurse to bandage her wounds. Nurse is bandaging her wounds when a familiar voice asks- How are you, Kalpi?'

I am fine doctor uncle' - she responded to a fatherly looking face.

Fine people don't come to hospital' - He jokes.

It is just a small injury, doctor uncle and I thought to meet you' - Kalpana smiles.

Nurse cuts their conversation - This is not small injury Dr. Bakshi. Her feet had deep wounds and It is not bleeding very much right now but I am sure she had lost lot of bloods'.

Dr. Bakshi looks at Kalpana questioningly.

It is nothing Dr. Uncle. I have just stepped on something sharp.'

Be careful. How are your mother, pari and sam'

They are alright. NGO you suggested had helped a lot for aai's medication'

Have Sam stopped blabbering in sleep'

Yes uncle. I think now her unconscious mind is also forgetting that day'

Sub conscious mind never forgets anything. Her memory will resurface one day but we don't know when'

I hope it will not hamper her life'

I hope this too. Okay, now I have to take a leave. Bye Kalpana'

Bye Dr Uncle. Good night'

Kalpana comes home and goes to sleep without Kamla giving a chance to question her. She has dared to challenge Raghav today so she has to prepare herself for the worst.

Next day, Kalpana comes to Singhania mansion expecting something drastic but she finds a drunk Raghav waiting impatiently for her and before she can understand anything, he wraps up her in his arms - I love you , Kalpi. I can't imagine my life without you. I am sorry for hurting you but I will not hurt you. I promise.' Kalpana could not believe her luck. He is professing his love forgetting hatred. She hugs her back saying - I love you, Raghav. Don't be sorry. Your anger is justified but I knew you will listen to me one day and look my belief is not wrong. I want to tell you all the truth'. I don't want to know what happened then, Kalpi. I just know I love you and the things that happened 8 yrs back did not matter to me. Actually It never mattered. I was just angry but I know one thing I love you' - he whispered in her ear. Kalpana hugs him more tightly - Raghav, I can explain'. I love you and that is only thing that matters' - he whispers again in her ears but again a dangerous smirk played on his lips and he self thinks-I loved you and you betrayed me, Kalpana and Now you are going to know what is betrayal. I promised you that I will break you and believe me I will fulfil my promise'. Tears of happiness are streaming down from her face. He cups her face and wipes her tears promising himself that he is going to make her life real hell in some days and Kalpana just hugs him again not knowing his real motive.

Kalpana does not know how two days passes talking with Raghav, telling him about herself, sam, Naina and aai. He does not want to remember the past and she does not want to hurt him with the past. They all had suffered a lot but his sufferings are worst. She does not want to black clouds of their past to hover on their present and future.

And today she is in Marriage registrar office with Raghav to become witness of Sam and samar raizada's marriage. Raghav has agreed to let sam marry Mr. raizada and said he believes her. Sam is so happy to meet her brother. Everything seems like a dream to her. Now she can tell her aai everything and she gets a call on her mobile from her aai. Her aai asked her to meet her in temple. Raghav , Sam and Sammy accompanies her to temple.

In temple, Kamla is looking at naina who is looking beautiful in her wedding dress. Kamla looks at her lovingly and prays for her all the three daughters and also asks forgiveness for being selfish. Kalpana is the eldest and she should get married first but she knows her daughter will not marry anyone but Raghav and Naina's marriage with Sammy is going to put off some burden from Kalpana's shoulder. Naina is impatiently waiting for her Sammy and she sees her Kalpana di coming.

Kalpana gets shocked seeing Naina as a bride and before she can ask anything Naina witnesses Sammy and runs to him saying - Kalpanadi , meet my would be husband Samar Raizada' . Kalpana is at loss of words and her mind has stopped working. And Naina notices Sam's hands in Sammy's hands.

Raghav intervenes - Kalpana , are you not going to tell your sister that You had given her love to Sam so that you can marry me. Make her understand that her would be husband is already someone's husband'

Kalpana stands there in shock and disbelief. Her mind is not registering anything and her heart is denying accepting the things that are happening in front of her.

Raghav turns to Kamla Yadav - Your elder daughter had bargained you and your daughter's happiness in exchange of her own happiness. She gave your daughter's love to my sister for her own selfish reasons. She helped me to blackmail Samar raizada to marry my sister as Sam loves him'

Kalpana hears his accusation silently. Her mind started analyzing everything. Everything happened to her in last month is a platform for this betrayal. He betrayed her and looking at Sam and Samar Raizada's face, she is sure that they are his partners in his plan. But what is Ni's fault in all this? Why did he play with her heart?

Samar looks at Naina with apologetic eyes and then tells the biggest lie of his life - Your Di and her boyfriend trapped me in doing this. I am sorry, Naina but I am married now and I can't back off from my responsibility.'

Naina's heart gets shattered into pieces. Sam, her so called best friend had snatched her love and her own di had helped her.

Kalpana runs to her sister when she sees her falling on the ground and holds her protectively. Kamla also rushes to aid her daughter. Naina looks at Kalpana fiercely and asks her to stay away from her.

Kalpana pleads - Just listen to me once , Ni. I can explain everything.'

Naina says angrily - I don't want to hear anything, Di.'

Kamla asks her daughter to listen Kalpana once as Naina had not informed Kalpana that she is in love with Sammy.

Before Kalpana can explain herself, Raghav plays a recording and Kalpana is shocked to hear her voice But she did not say those words - I care about you more than my step sister and if sam wants Sammy, she will get him. I can do anything for you, Raghav.'

Step sister , this information is new to Naina and she looks at her mother for confirmation and Kamla closes her eyes . Kalpana pleads again - Ni, aai that is not my voice. I love Naina like my own child. I will never hurt her knowingly. Raghav had done this to take revenge from us. Believe me, aai. He is torturing me from last whole month but I never thought he will hurt ni.'

Kalpna looks at Kamla and naina with hopes in her eyes and Raghav throws some photographs of their moments of last two days and announces - Kamla maa, I don't think I am torturing Kalpana in these photographs, Yes, I wanted to hurt her but then she told me that she lied in the court because of you and she will help me to get revenge on you and your daughter.'

I hate you Kalpana di, You are a selfish girl' and Naina runs from there with tears in her eyes. Kalpana tries to follow her when Kamla stops her - She needs to be alone. Give her some time and she will be fine'

Then she turns to Raghav - I know my daughter and I trust her. I don't need any proof to know that my Kalpana is innocent' and She turns to Sam and Sammy - Wish you both a happy married life'

Let's go, kalpana and Kamla Yadav drags her elder daughter from there. Kalpana asks her mother to leave her for a moment and she goes to Sam - why did you do this to ni, sam? She was your best friend.'

You snatched my brother from me and see your sister hate you know. I hate you Kalpana Yadav' - Sam threw a look of hatred to her and then leaves with her newlywed husband.

Raghav smirks at mother daughter duo and then leaves to drop Sam and Sammy to the airport. He had gifted them their honeymoon trip and he wants them out of country as soon as possible as he is sure that they will not approve his final plan.

Sam and Sammy leave to Mauritius for their honeymoon and Raghav bids them good bye. He receives a call and he leaves to meet Naina who is followed by his detectives and he found her in a park. Naina is crying inconsolably. She got betrayed by the persons whom she loves and trusts.

Kalpana is like this only. She can betray anyone for her own selfish reasons' - His voice breaks her trance and Naina looks at Raghav and said angrily - She helped you and You are saying her selfish'

Raghav - she helped me for my money but I know she is a traitor. When she can backstab you, she will not think twice before stabbing me'

Naina - I hate you , I hate Sam, I hate Sammy but I hate Kalpana di more.

Raghav - I have a proposition for you so that you can take your revenge from her'

Naina - I am not interested in your plan . just get lost'

Raghav - Your mother trusts her more than you and she is with her when she should be here with you. Don't you want to show Kalpana's real face to your mother?'

Naina - You hate my mother'

Raghav - I don't hate your mother. I respect her. kalpana manipulates everyone. I was her victim and she had betrayed you also. One day she will betray your mother also. Don't you want to protect your mother from her?'

Naina wipes her tears and asks - What do I have to do?'

Raghav - Marry me'

Naina - what?'

Raghav - It will be a fake marriage, Naina and I will show your mother that Kalpana is a traitor and she can go to any length for her own selfish reason'

Naina - Ok, I will play along you. I want my mother back from her'

Raghav smirks on his plan. His final plan will destroy her completely.

Precap :

In india

Kalpana is sitting on the ground of a room in disheveled state. She is all alone in this world. There is no one to call her own. She is an orphan now. And she can hear his laughter and she stands up - I have lost everything, Raghav and I have nothing to lose but I know one day you will regret what you had done to me. I am forgiving you but you will not be able to forgive yourself. '

In Mauritius,

Sam gets consciousness - I have to go to India right now, sammy. We have destroyed everything. I hope still there is a chance for our redemption'

Note:

Such a long chapter. I wanted to complete Raghav's Revenge in this part only but I could not. so I had given a precap for next chapter. Next chapter is going to be more heart breaking. Don't curse me please. This story will take a complete different turn after next chapter. Please don't expect something romantic but Drama will be there for sure.

Please comment and hit like button if you want me to continue.

Sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
what can be more heart wrenching from this update😭
a full heart broken update it was...so much pain..😭
but i m eagerly waiting for next one...
Edited by zindgidilse - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
How much more pain and betrayal can Kalpi take 😭
Raghav is a cold hearted bas***d who don't deserve Kalpi
He succeed in turning Naina against Kalpi
But what I don't get is Naina. How can she doubt the only person who sacrifice everything for her and Sam happiness. Kalpi work so hard just to take care of her family. I am glad that at least Kamla believe Kalpi. Superb update
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Posted: 10 years ago
raghav is heartless...
fir revenge he has broke all levels doing down...
kalpi shud never forgive him ...he don't deserve kalpi...
& I don't think Raghav would have ever loved kalpi...because if he truly loved her once he would have never give her such pain & insult... 😡

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