Ragna ss- broken belief- Part 11 is updated on page 37 - NO PM - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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😭😭how long ragna will be like that .how long raghv wii givw apin to poor klapi .always raghva do mistake then he will have to regret.nice update .please bring some happinesss and love in ragnas life
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Posted: 10 years ago
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saanjh pls update na...any story of urs 😭
i m waiting bahut sara😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz update nxt chappy... Waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 6:

If someone trusts you, he/she will not need any prove to believe you. His/her trust will be enough for them to believe you. But when there is no trust left in a relation, you can't make them believe on you. Kalpana thinks lying on the bed - How can I make you believe that I love you when you don't trust me, Raghav. You did not give me this chance to prove myself but to torture me. But I will accept your every wish. If my destruction is your happiness, then I will destroy myself in your love. If my pain is balm of your pain then I will go through every pain. I hope my love will be enough for your hatred. If your hatred becomes more powerful than my love, I am afraid I will be shattered. Losing your trust, I am afraid to trust myself.'

You want to prove your love for me today. Where was your love when Policemen dragged me into the police van? Where was your love when you accused me wrongly? Where was your love when you told Sam lies about my disappearance? Where was your love then? I will destroy you like you destroyed me 8 years back. I will torture you to the extent that you will fear to announce your fake love for me. Wait for tomorrow, Kalpana and be ready to lose one thing dear to you. I have humiliated you in private till now. But tomorrow whole world will see your humiliation. This house will witness your destruction in bits. You love this house but I will make sure that you will hate this house as much as you will hate yourself after I have done with you. You are too proudy kalpana and I am going to break your pride tomorrow.'- Raghav continues boxing ignoring his wounded hands.

Next day, Kalpana comes for work making up her mind to accept his challenge. Raghav is waiting for her in the drawing room.

Raghav - So, Maid 9 are you ready for the challenge'

Kalpana - I am ready , Raghav

Raghav - It is sir for you and it will be always Sir for you, maid 9'

Kalpana - I am sorry sir'

Raghav - Great, you are learning etiquette to talk to your boss. And now about my challenge, Today is a party in this house and my guests wanted entertainment and I had promised them it. So, be ready in the outfit which Mrs. Sharma will give you, to dance in my party.'

Kalpana - I will never dance in front of your guests'

Raghav - You had said that you will do anything to prove your love for me'

Kalpana - And I will do anything but not this. I am a classical dancer, not a show girl. You know I can't dance in front of your guests'

Raghav - I know you can and you will . You will not dance to prove your love for me but to save your mother and sister, Kalpana. I knew you will not be able to fulfil my challenge but I will fulfil my promise to my guests. You will dance in my party.'

Kalpana - Don't do this to me, Raghav. Not for my sake but for baba's sake, please don't force me'

Raghav - You can perform classical dance in my ultra modern party to humiliate yourself. I am allowing you this concession to you for vital yadav's sake only.'

Kalpana - Please Raghav, Don't do this to me. Please'

Raghav comes near to Kalpana and holds her hair tightly - You look good when you beg in front of me but right now I am not feeling very kind. I have just remembered the final verdict of my case. I begged in front of you like this Kalpana but you continued you lies. You remembered it right. But if you can't remember then don't worry I will make you remember everything. The guards pushed me like this' , Saying so Raghav pushes Kalpana roughly on the ground.

Tears are threatening to spill from her eyes but she manages herself to face him once again. Anger overpowers her sorrow. Pride overpowers her love.

Kalpana - I will dance in front of your guests to humiliate myself. And you are right I will not dance to prove my love for you. Because you don't deserve my love.'

Kalpana's words angers Raghav. She has the audacity to talk back to him. she has guts to tell him that he does not deserve her love. He throws the vase which is kept on the glass table in front of him. His anger calms down and a dangerous crooked smile appears on his lips and he comes close to Kalpana who is standing proudly against him.

Still so proud of yourself, Maid 9. Don't worry. It will not last long.' He moves his finger from her forehead to her cheeks and then it touches her lips - I will break you and your pride bit by bit and this house will witness your destruction'

I will wait for the day eagerly, sir'- She challenges him openly distancing herself from him. She does not know what she is saying but she is hurt by him immensely. She is bearing his torture and she would have borne his torture in private but he wants to humiliate her publically. She knows that she can't stop him but now she is not going to bear it silently. She is not going to beg in front of him again . She will let him destroy her completely so that she can be able to forget to love him. She wants pain to feel his pain which made him so heartless. She wants to be heartless like him.

His anger rises again. She dares to challenge him. Now her destruction will be more slow and more painful. Again he smiles - Don't worry, the day is not far away. But now I am going to enjoy your destruction more. Be ready for the night.'

He leaves from their not glancing back to her and she breaks down.

At evening, Kalpana gets ready in her katthak dress and she puts ghungroo on her legs. Party has been started already and she knows that it is time for her performance. She makes her way to the party and looks at Raghav sipping his drink and chatting with Maya. Suddenly something pricks in her heart. She does not want this heart anymore. Raghav looks at her and gestures DJ to play the song and looks at Kalpana smilingly. It was her mother's favourite song. She had seen her mother performing on this song when she was small. She never danced on it. It reminded her about her mother's loss. She closes her eyes and starts dancing. Song is fast and so her steps. Everyone stops at their place to see her performance. Her legs are moving so fast that her anklet breaks and ghungroos scatters on the ground. Her feet press the ghungroos so many times that her feet starts bleeding. She does not care. Her legs and body is still moving in fast rhythm. Raghav notices her feet and gestures RJ to stop the song. Song stops but Kalpana's legs do not. She is dancing like she is not in her senses. Her feet are bleeding but she could not sense it. Raghav panics seeing her like this and comes near to her and he holds her hand tightly to stop her and she stops. She frees her hand from him and runs out of the house to cry alone.

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Sorry for late update and I hope it is not bad as I have wrote it in 2 hours as I promised you guys.

Thanks for your appreciation.

Do comment and hit like button if you want me to continue.

Sorry for spelling and grammatical mistakes.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome update
Wow kalpi want t feel rag pain
Rag being heartless yet can't see her in pain
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Awesome update dear. How much she have to take. Raghav behaving like a jerk.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
😭 aawww my heart is crying as i seen kalpi in pain .i cant see non of them one is in pain and other is heartless .o god .i am crying to our ragna like that .hope soon dark cloud goes and new sunshine comes .nice update dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Awesome updatee
kalpi loves raghav soo much and ready to do anythng for him
raghav is soo heartless he cnt see her pain
kalpi want raghav to give her pain so she can feel his pain and become heartless like him

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
nice chappy dear... Poor kalpi ... Nd Raghav aaahhh... Atleast let her say why she did that to hi but no... Dear update nxt chappy plzz waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Kalpi is so hurt raghav atleast give a chance a to her:)

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