CELESTIAL LOVE - New ff Chap 8 updtd on pg 27

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Nice story. Little confusion . Kalpy is mute??? Or now she can speak?

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

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Okay. You know what I think? I think Raghav is that Celestial Being. Now that I've got that said, I will move one 😆.

Kalpi got her voice back! That answers my question of her being born mute or being a voluntary mute! But how? See..this increases my doubt that Raghav is the Celestial Being because Kalpi somehow miraculously got her voice back. He's watching out for her or something.

I have this crazy love for supernatural romances (the ones that make sense obviously) so I'm really liking this so far.

So Pakhya is there. That answers another one of my questions too. I feel like society is going to be disapproving of Kalpi now. Considering that she has gone into the forbidden forest (not the HP one) and has somehow gotten her voice back. There's bound to be judgement and I will not be surprised if the village people start to go after her and try to kill her.

I hate snakes btw 😆. He taught her to sing! Aww.. AHA! IT IS RAGHAV! Yeah baby! Ahaan.

Oooh...she's in love with him. 😳 AWWW!!!! Let me gush for a while. Awww...awww...awww...okay I'm normal again. But awww! Five year old Kalpi falling in love is beyond adorable! Aww!

So is Raghav the bad guy? Even if he is I don't care. I want him and Kalpi to get together. This is amazing! I hope they get married soon. I know you must be thinking what is up with this girl? Do update di hain aur yeh abhi se RagNa ki shaadi ke baare mein soch rahi hai. But what can I do? I'm loving the supernatural element. There is an immediate connection.

Update soon because I seriously think that if not Kamla, Vitthal will be the next big obstacle for the uniting of RagNa.

Sorry if I'm late in commenting! But update sooonnn!!!

Love ya Pri Jaan! 🤗

Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 10 years ago

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Aww... that's really scary!! The black cat and the rattle snake..But i knew that Kalpi will be heal and healthy n to an extent knew that her voice will come back mysteriously but was not expecting this to be so soon.

So kalpi has a elder brother pakya who is damn careless and doesn't care about his mute sister.. may be he is a child too that's y he made a mistake.

Who is he?? Raghav?? Does he has some magical powers?? he is there in prologue as well.. Does it mean he is immortal.. or he is some evil and Raghav will help Kalpi to get rid of him.. Though i think the former one will happen as Kalpi is already attracted towards his music..

Oh God!! m so curious to know whats gonna happen in the story.. Awesome work Priya!! n I dint reply to ur previous comment but u r as good as Fuzz, Raz n some other writers of the forum are.Though i have never commented on Raz's story but read the latest one she is writing on escorts n really she is mind blowing. So u r... N u can trust me on this as m really straight forward and doesn't hesitate in giving honest feedback. If i do not like something than I tell it directly to the person.. n this time m loving this story. If it was a novel than i would have read it in one sitting... i have done it with few novels.

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: riaka
Nice story. Little confusion . Kalpy is mute??? Or now she can speak?

Kalpi was born mute dear. And now she seems to have gained the power to speak!! It is a miracle and once I complete my update you will understand it better! Sorry for the confusion.

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

You left it on such a suspenseful nite and then say karo karo dil khol Kay comment karo 😆 mean I tell u mean 😆 but damn good update and so hooked to this ff. so us rags a angel or some other immortal being. Waiting to find out.

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

What an imagination? It's scary story though😉 And with snakes feeling and reading itself creeps me out, I kind of alergtic to those creatures😭

And please in feature updates please keep the statuary warning for snakes

Very nice update😛

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ReezaZul

@ReezaZul

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Well Done...👏

Plez update...dont make me wait so long...

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lovely

@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

So Raghav is looking after Kalpi like an angel. But why? Is it because of some prophecy about him and Kalpi? Is he waiting desperately for Kalpi to grow up? Because he is always near her. I know I am not going to get answers right now but its just that I am thinking loud 😃.

Thanks for the PM. And please don't forget this FF in between like you earlier did for LRR. Keep updating on a regular basis.