CELESTIAL LOVE - New ff Chap 8 updtd on pg 27

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: priya_remix

😊Aww Kiara! Luv ur summaries however I see now you are also trying to predict the track!

Dont worry the villagers love Vitthal's family too much to say things about Kalpi! Kalpi will be the jaan of the village soon! So not to worry! And yes our Kalpi who is all of 5 years (a big girl now!) has fallen in love with her savior her guardian Raghav! You all will get to know about Raghav very soon!

Thank you darling! Can't wait for Raghav's part. Forgot to congratulate you on the banner. Fabulous one. Congrats to you too Raz, my sweetheart! Awesome job!

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sharanya

@sharanya0011

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

wow beautiful update..

please continue soon

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Wow amazing concept...n yes hume bhi ragnaria hua hai n will wait for ur ragnalicious updates😉

Prologue was jus awesome

Chap1- U beautifully described village cud visualize swapnalok

Sad dat kalpi is mute

Chap 2-Scary update n u described nicely

Kalpi got her voice ...so guess raghav is celestial ...aww 5 yr old kalpi in love

Will b eagerly w8ng to read next update

Beautiful banner

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

Trailblazer

+ 38

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

i m loving the Banner...Raz great job👏

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Sevenstreaks

@Sevenstreaks

Trailblazer

+ 38

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

i m loving this story more in every update😃...but rattle snake part was scary...hope i don get night mare😆...update asap Priya...

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Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

wow...such a nice updatevitthal kalpi convo was so awesome...loving father nd innocent girl loved it...this update was very childish nd full of innocence...I love these type of updates more den others...kalpi innocent talks...her way of talking loved it...plzzz didi,give more innocent scenes of kalpi...it was very scary when snake bit kalpi bt her innocence removed all pain...
I m loving it...continue soon...

Edited by aanchal57 - 10 years ago

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Banner credit goes to Raz - AWriterAtHeart

Teaser:

A 9 year old Kalpi is lying lifeless in a circle made of fire with some people in black chanting in the background. It is 1am in the night of nomoon. Pitch dark all around even the stars were not ready to witness this sacrificial ritual! Kalpi in her mind calling out to Raghav! Please come Raghav! I need you! where are you! I am sorry I hurt you! I promise to listen to you always.

The sorcerer laughs as he gloats on his victory that he has finally managed to capture Kalpi the 150th girl in this family whose sacrifice will bring him powers that will make him invincible!

He looks at her and thinks guardian angel is he? Hmmmph let him come and I shall see who he is!

As for now my dear you have to lose your life to give me that power! For today is the day of the devils and spirits. The day of no moon where even the gods and godesses are deprived of their power. He laughs once more and goes back to his occult rituals!

Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago