CELESTIAL LOVE - New ff Chap 8 updtd on pg 27 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Priya, wonderful update. So you bumped off Kamala in the start! Good riddance! She said someone is coming to take her daughter away and also to keep her away from the back yard. Who's coming? 😲 Kalpi is mute? How does she say 'aayi' ( coming) to Pakhi in the prologue. Maybe I misunderstood. Celestial being in the woods! Yakshachi baawdi. ... Indian devil tree. ...and Yakshapala tree... its so creepy! Gives you an eerie feeling. But I loved it! The name of the village suits it, Swapnalok indeed. Kalpi has gone to get the ball. What happens that will change her life forever? Is that where the celestial being sees her? I know you are not gonna answer me. You will say 'keep reading' šŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Priya, wonderful update. So you bumped off Kamala in the start! Good riddance! She said someone is coming to take her daughter away and also to keep her away from the back yard. Who's coming? 😲 Kalpi is mute? How does she say 'aayi' ( coming) to Pakhi in the prologue. Maybe I misunderstood. Celestial being in the woods! Yakshachi baawdi. ... Indian devil tree. ...and Yakshapala tree... its so creepy! Gives you an eerie feeling. But I loved it! The name of the village suits it, Swapnalok indeed. Kalpi has gone to get the ball. What happens that will change her life forever? Is that where the celestial being sees her? I know you are not gonna answer me. You will say 'keep reading' šŸ˜†


Hey Kiara just noticed we both share the same DP! Aww! Oh my you do have many q's!
Well this story is very fictional and as i said mainly for RagNaholics so my main focus will be RagNa. Kamla has no role here! Take it as my way to take revenge from her for stealing the screen presence from her co-actors! LOLšŸ˜†

The Indian Devil tree/ Yaskapala/Shaitaani pedh also known as saptaparna (seven leaves in a whirl) are one and the same. It is also called the blackboard tree as its wood is used to make the blackboards. It is a very common tree in India and its flowers are tiny but in bunches but with a very very strong fragrance that could give you headaches. But these flowers do not last long and are not used for anything. As they fall of the tree very soon. In fact it is true that in India it is considered as an abode for devils and spirits!

Swapnalok is a fictitious village in Ratnagiri that I have created for this ff!
Kalpi will surely make a mistake of entering the forbidden place in the woods and even go near the Yakshapala too! Till then...Ha Ha keep reading!šŸ˜†

Thank you for ur lovely comments and ur summarization of ff's are worth reading! I love them not only on my ff's but on all of them!

Yes this story will give you that eerie feel but then slowly u will get used to this atmosphere in Celestial Love!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_remix


Hey Kiara just noticed we both share the same DP! Aww! Oh my you do have many q's!
Well this story is very fictional and as i said mainly for RagNaholics so my main focus will be RagNa. Kamla has no role here! Take it as my way to take revenge from her for stealing the screen presence from her co-actors! LOLšŸ˜†

The Indian Devil tree/ Yaskapala/Shaitaani pedh also known as saptaparna (seven leaves in a whirl) are one and the same. It is also called the blackboard tree as its wood is used to make the blackboards. It is a very common tree in India and its flowers are tiny but in bunches but with a very very strong fragrance that could give you headaches. But these flowers do not last long and are not used for anything. As they fall of the tree very soon. In fact it is true that in India it is considered as an abode for devils and spirits!

Swapnalok is a fictitious village in Ratnagiri that I have created for this ff!
Kalpi will surely make a mistake of entering the forbidden place in the woods and even go near the Yakshapala too! Till then...Ha Ha keep reading!šŸ˜†

Thank you for ur lovely comments and ur summarization of ff's are worth reading! I love them not only on my ff's but on all of them!

Yes this story will give you that eerie feel but then slowly u will get used to this atmosphere in Celestial Love!

Yeah, just noticed DP now. After all we are hardcore ragnaholics. I was lazy to put a pic but decided to add one last week. You have done your research well. It's a lovely story and with a different theme.
Thank you for loving my comments. I love reading the ffs here. In fact, I love reading anything. Books are my constant companion. Though I don't get time often now with family taking my me - time, I'm the happiest when I'm curled up in my sofa with a novel. It's the first forum I'm joining. It has eaten into my reading time too. Surprisingly, I don't mind. Think of the comments and summarization as a small token of appreciation from my side for you fabulouswriters. Sometimes I think you guys will have a headache reading my boring and lengthy comments šŸ˜‰
Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update cant wait for next update.
Update soon plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome story!
I hope nothing happens to Kalpi and Vithal comes to save his daughter

Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u got me gripped to this story staright away!! pms please!! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful update
I feel sad that kamla pasted away
But I'm happy that Kalpi was save but she is mute šŸ˜•
I like the way you describe Kalpi grandmom house
And all the superstitious things involved...
Oh gosh Kalpi is going to get her ball. I hope nothing bad happen to her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my my.. how can I be so late for such wonderful story..
U won my heart by showing a dead Kamla.šŸ˜† Thank god, now we do not have to hear her Deva again and again.

it's a brilliant start sweetheart... i am already in love with it n don't know how i will wait for the next update. U explained the village so beautifully that i was able to visualize it.
n in 1st update itself u gave the idea that the story is going to follow some miraculous path as Kalpi is born mute but in prologue she replied to Pakhi so m assuming that something will happen which will return her voice..

kamla taking abut some him is like some devil or the magician.. who has warned her that he will take away her daughter.. M really interested to read it. update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: fairylover

Oh my my.. how can I be so late for such wonderful story..

U won my heart by showing a dead Kamla.šŸ˜† Thank god, now we do not have to hear her Deva again and again.

it's a brilliant start sweetheart... i am already in love with it n don't know how i will wait for the next update. U explained the village so beautifully that i was able to visualize it.
n in 1st update itself u gave the idea that the story is going to follow some miraculous path as Kalpi is born mute but in prologue she replied to Pakhi so m assuming that something will happen which will return her voice..

kamla taking abut some him is like some devil or the magician.. who has warned her that he will take away her daughter.. M really interested to read it. update soon.


Thanks Vish for liking it! But it is surely nowhere close in comparison to urs, fuzz and raz's ff's! And there are many more in this list whom I admire for their writing skills. ā­ļø

This is just a lame attempt from my side to cheer my dear RagNaholics, hope I am able to meet the expectations of my readers.😃

See you could not even read my earlier ff completely! but glad u caught this one early!😊
Yes the whole story and its characters are going to be miraculous. Horror, thriller, romance, mystery everything will be found here that is if I am able to get all of it in this one ffšŸ˜†

Chalo try karne mein kya problem hai? Thanks once again for your lovely comments!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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