No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling

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DiVirgo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

Pureness!! I haven't read chap 14 yet! Waiting on you to complete it! Plz complete!!

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sampa79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

Please complete soon

Eagerly waiting for next update

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laavanya4u

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#653

Our brains is calling you and says when will the love come to us as PART 14.

Will you give us a tinkle !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Kiaraah

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Fuzz, we are waiting ...

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

where are you? I understand you are njoying the break and probably loving it... but we are turning insomniac at night and zoombie during days...

"Sirf tumhari wajah se... ab kya karein?"

🥺

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

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Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Complete angel pls u only put few lines in.

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Kiaraah

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Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#657

Guys, Fuzz is having problems with the Internet and so updating slowly. We will give her sometime.

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#658

oops! i m shattered with the end.

Kalpi's tears n mine have mingled!!

both of us - 😭 😭 are 🥺

will come back later.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
oops! i m shattered with the end.
Kalpi's tears n mine have mingled!!

both of us - 😭 😭 are 🥺

will come back later.

Was the chappy okay... Am not very happy with it... I feel a disconnect... I feel like something is missing.

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Minnie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Was the chappy okay... Am not very happy with it... I feel a disconnect... I feel like something is missing.

Chappy was good. cant deny that to you.

I could feel the emotions and the story did flow naturally.

Gauri's reaction to everything and then questioning Paakhi is sign of a smart, observant lady.

Prem's arrival and hearing everything a shock to all and to me.

The way he reacted with Rags is how any brother would react. It shows how much he genuinely cares for Kalpi. Very touching to witness.

Its after this that everything shocks me to numbness.

Kalpi and Rags are back to their shells. but I think on hindsight, it is expected. These guys have never told each other and have barely accepted themselves how much they mean to each other so the way they reacted to the marriage ques. is obvious.

But yet sooo heart breaking... Rags is disappointed, Kalpi is heart broken once again.

Ohh! her tears, mixed with mine have drenched me.

I think your disconnect is coming from the disappointment you yourself feel for RAGNA!!

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago