No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 6

Fab update!

Fuzz..don' t tell me you're starting one more FFs addiction for me. 😆😛 This one seems super hot from the start!Waiting for Raghav-Kalpi misunderstanding to get cleared. 😊 n yes, loved that kiss a lot. 😉 Liked Kapoors, seems they're positive..hope, hope? 😛 I m in kind of hurry right no, so pardon me please for a shorter comment. 😊 Fab again.⭐️

Wow ... Just wow. What an update. Loving this ff. rags is so desperate for kalpi. But u never mentioned what actually happened after he kissed her. But damn u ended update at wrong spot so desperate to read more of rags. Update soon.

amazing update, cannot stop laughing at Kalpi and Paakhi they are too good, I see Raghav cannot get Kalpi out of him mind, waiting for Prems engagement, so is kalpi going to go to Raghav's house, cannot wait for their reaction when they see each other

I read both the chapters now and it's too good. RagNa started liking each other from day one 😳 Love the way Raghav is thinking about Kalpana and Kalpana is also quite bold and fun loving which is what I love the most. Waiting for the MUs to get cleared soon 😊

loved the update
loved bonding between kalpu and pakhi...
cant wait for rags and kalpis next meeting :p

I read chap 2 directly :P
okay a story wid character having mostly new relationship

This ff seems to b a lil different than your other ones. The other ones r quite intense n shows d pain n loss raghav n kalpi had in their life. But this one i guess its too early to say coz d journey has just started but i think theres no such emotional turmoil. May b it will cum later n reasons may b different but still good to see prem n raghav having a healthy relation rather than standing on d opposite sides.The bonding kalpi shares with pakhi and prem and raghav shares with prem is good. Din get much of raghav in these two chapters so cant say how he is but kalpi is awesome different from all your ff's. The character that i really appreciate in these two chapters is prem. Completely different somewhat descent n sober.

One question y pakhi din tell kalpi about ragz whn she mentioned her name while narrating her experience.

Awesome update!! Raghav is feelling for a girl. Could it possible be Kalpi? Continue soon😊

Again you've done a marvelous job! Hats off to you!!
Now, I see kalpi and Paaki away in some university! They are very close friends! They share everything!!
What can I say!! First impression last! My god! I love rags character!! He's arrogant and is respected by others! Never has he been to a strip club lol! He has never seen such beauty before! Kalpi has cast her spell over him and yet he cannot accept that she is a pole dancer!! Lol! Or so he thinks! I thank Paaki for daring KAlpi to do that pole dance!! I love rags intense feeling he's having for Kalpi although his impression is that she is a pole dancer and he can never see himself with her!! Was he angry at her for doing this dance?! Or did he want to see more of it?! Lol! I loved the way rags held on to her arms! Obviously he did cast his spell on her too!! She closing her eyes at his very touch said something!! Lol only to be judged as a woman that will do anything for money! I love the punishing kiss rags gave to Kalpi!! Obviously he was angry with her!! What a beauty like her is doing in a place like this?! He can't understand what he feels for her and is puzzled by his feelings! How can he with just one meeting feel so strongly about someone?! And a pole dancer too!!
I love the story and the characters!! Can't wait for rags to get to know the real Kalpi and to realize that the pole dance was only a dare!! Boy Im anxious to see how he reacts to the truth!! Clearly first impression is not always a lasting one! Big hug for you for this story!! I love it!! Plz let me know if my opinion is correct!!