No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 5

Originally posted by: smileysmile

OMG. Kiss in the first chapter and you stopped right there. You are really vicious. I think effect of EMA ,taking revenge from us. First of all you are not completing your other updates and now another one. Every time you keep us waiting for your updates. You know how to make us dance to your tunes ⭐️.

An interesting read, considering its very different from others. Update soon

Thanks for the PM.😃

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Errr...sorry my bad. Just like stories dat flood ur mind, hindi verses come to me spontaneously.

It was impromptu. Frm nw on will add the translation.

Thanks shweta for d translation! 😊

Sumtimes wen u write verses in english I dont get dat feel dat it wud express my thoughts appprtly. Mabe eng is not my mother tongue. Its natural to be biased as one always feels one can emote or express more thru one's own lingo.

But u donno hindi then which is ur first lang?

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Damn girl you are a wicked wicked writer!!!!

Just loved the update. Drooling over it and greedy for more!

How do u do this woman? Ha Ha Ha 😆

Loved Kalpi paakhi bond! How cm Raghav being cousin does not know about Kalpi? also he never seen or heard abt her? I mean normally u do tend to know ur cousins frnds and enemies esp if u r close to ur cousins that is! Just a doubt ok?

Wow so Kalpi enjoyed the old man's kiss! Damn he has to be a good kisser else how will she be impressed😆

Happy that Prem grounded paakhi! 10K pounds to spend!!! on shopping wish I had won that bet!!!!😲

Originally posted by: Anjinie

does Kalpi known that the stuffy old man is a cousin of Prem and Paakhi, awesome update looking forward to reading more

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Loved the camaraderie between Kalpi and Pakhi. Both the girls are living life to the fullest. Pakhi eagerly waiting to hear what happened at the club. Kalpi is angry because of the kiss. She's thinking how dare that guy (Raghav) think she's a girl with no morals just because she danced and flirted with them. At the same time she can't help but think he's a damn good kisser too. Pakhi is impressed with Kalpi's spunk after watching the recording. Seriously, ten thousand pounds for shopping 😲 Oh my!