No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
nice start..plz update next part soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update😊...Pakhi-Kalpi convo is awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for the late reply, but my IF reply was not working😭. Thus replying for both the chapters at once.

Chap 1

Carefree character of Kalpi is too good, different from all the FF's. Love you for this!!.
Really liked the girly talks of Kalpi & Pakhi, true to life.

Even i was laughing while reading Kalpi's dialogue of "stupid idea to calm oneself", but u brought the same expression out of Pakhi which i loved very much.

Loved the concerned character of Prem.

Lastly Kalpi thinking that Raghav was a good kisser and she responding back that too in the first meet😃


Chap 2

Still Raghav is in thoughts of Kalpi only😊.

Did Prem didn't tell Raghav who Candy is?Does Prem know what Raghav is thinking about Kalpi & what happened b/w them?

Waiting for all the answers in your next update i hope.

Fuzz, really you are an amazing and incredible writer..

Please you keep on writing and we are ready to keep on reading!!!





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey,
awesome story you have started. Such a different one from the rest. read all of them in one go.

Unique girls though- Pizza and wine!! hmm. interesting combo. I love my Heineken with crust and Pepperoni 😉

Pakhi knows "Gauri Masi" But she does not know Rags and Sammy! And Prem and Maya are getting engaged?
Nice twists... waiting for all the relations to enfold and take shape. Rags as usual khadoos!

ps- Keep the passion brewing 😉 ohh!! the memory of the Kiss ☺️

Edited by spontaneousmini - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks like I'm late. Sorry Fuzz! Loved the update! Pakhi and Kalpi's camaraderie was nice. Makes you really go back to the good ol university days with your pals, those carefree days , no responsibilities. Wine and pizza sessions... yummy combo! I miss those days! Loved how you portrayed Kalpi in this. She's not the usual sati- savitri type who lives according to society norms. She's bubbly, lively and live life as it comes. Is that why she kissed Raghav back? Or is she attracted to him as well? Loved them making fun of Maya. Her tail indeed... ... lol. The girls sure know how to have fun. When Kalpi said Rags is Prem's friend, Pakhi must not have realised that it's her cousin Raghav. Doesn't she know Sammy? Prem and Maya are getting engaged and for the puja Kalpi needs to go with Pakhi to Raghav's house. Fireworks are bound to happen . For a change Neetu is positive and she's equally fond of Kalpi. Prem also considers Kalpi as her sister and is in a position to even keep her grounded for her behaviour. Loved the scene where Prem receives call from the girls and how he could hear only screaming. They are excited for their brother. Raghav is still brooding over the kiss. He just can't have enough of her. His heart ( or is it body) screams out for her, to taste her. Finally he admits he wants her. Fatal attraction! There's something about this pair that makes everything so sensuous, even a forced kiss which otherwise would have been a great turn off.
Glad to hear that I bring smile to your face. Hope I always manage to do that. Consider it my love for writing these awesome stories ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Kalpi and Pakhi relationship is getting nicer with each update. I hope Pakhi don't do anything to screwed up their relationship. I like how Kalpi was telling Pakhi about her pole dance experience and everything that happen but smartly left out the part for her and Raghav kiss lol
Aww Kalpi and Neetu also share an amazing bond. Love the girls excitement on hearing about Prem engagement puja. Is Raghav obsessed much???
He cant stop thinking about Kalpi and how much he want her 😆 I cant wait for them to meet again. Beautiful update. Angel u doing a wonderful job. I just love the way u write
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
OMG! Be prepared to cry!!
But you said you want to keep it light!!
Now I am confused..
Is Rags going to kidnap Kalpi and torture her?? Sorry for such fertile thoughts but just went through a list of grossly moron, grotesque movies that you will never watch a second time. And my heart is still shivering under my ribs, by just reading the stories.


You want us to 😭 again.. I understand 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

OMG! Be prepared to cry!!

But you said you want to keep it light!!
Now I am confused..
Is Rags going to kidnap Kalpi and torture her?? Sorry for such fertile thoughts but just went through a list of grossly moron, grotesque movies that you will never watch a second time. And my heart is still shivering under my ribs, by just reading the stories.


You want us to 😭 again.. I understand 😭


You won't cry now, but later. Yea I don't know how I am going to continue keeping it light with what I have in mind. Let's see coz as the story develops the plots sometimes change.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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if Kalpi, Paakhi and Prem are so close, how come Kalpi does not know that Raghav is Prems cousin, love the bonding between Kalpi and Paakhi

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