No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling

WhiteQueen

@WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

I loved this pakhi and kalpi bonding than actual one😆

continue soon, may be I have to wait for a week for another update😭😆

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: WhiteQueen
I loved this pakhi and kalpi bonding than actual one😆
continue soon, may be I have to wait for a week for another update😭😆

I might surprise you with an update this evening if I have no plans... Have the story for the next couple of chapters in my head so don't have to think and plan it out... Just have to write it.😉

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WhiteQueen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: angelpureness

I might surprise you with an update this evening if I have no plans... Have the story for the next couple of chapters in my head so don't have to think and plan it out... Just have to write it.😉

I love surprises😳😆

my greedy heart is Waiting 4 the next update😉

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Kalpi is so angry lol
But she enjoy the kiss 😛
I like her bonding with Pakhi, it's actually nice
But as always Pakhi has some bad habits lol
Wonderful update

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Damn girl you are a wicked wicked writer!!!!

Just loved the update. Drooling over it and greedy for more!

How do u do this woman? Ha Ha Ha 😆

Loved Kalpi paakhi bond! How cm Raghav being cousin does not know about Kalpi? also he never seen or heard abt her? I mean normally u do tend to know ur cousins frnds and enemies esp if u r close to ur cousins that is! Just a doubt ok?

Wow so Kalpi enjoyed the old man's kiss! Damn he has to be a good kisser else how will she be impressed😆

Happy that Prem grounded paakhi! 10K pounds to spend!!! on shopping wish I had won that bet!!!!😲

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

does Kalpi known that the stuffy old man is a cousin of Prem and Paakhi, awesome update looking forward to reading more

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amykaulizt

@amykaulizt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

awesome angel

you make us want 4 more

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Great update my dear 👏 I just love the way Kalpi portray her anger waiting for more hope soon.

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Loved the camaraderie between Kalpi and Pakhi. Both the girls are living life to the fullest. Pakhi eagerly waiting to hear what happened at the club. Kalpi is angry because of the kiss. She's thinking how dare that guy (Raghav) think she's a girl with no morals just because she danced and flirted with them. At the same time she can't help but think he's a damn good kisser too. Pakhi is impressed with Kalpi's spunk after watching the recording. Seriously, ten thousand pounds for shopping 😲 Oh my!

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