No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 7

Beautiful update angel..

Umm. I think what we need right now is insights into both characters. You have given some to ponder about but not much. How did Kalpi reacted after Raghav kissed her? His attitude towards women doesn't seems right. Its my view.

Originally posted by: sunyy

Wow ... Just wow. What an update. Loving this ff. rags is so desperate for kalpi. But u never mentioned what actually happened after he kissed her. But damn u ended update at wrong spot so desperate to read more of rags. Update soon.

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Raghav and I want Her chants are always the BEST part of Stories..!!!!!


Btw.. angelpureness... Am still greedy one, inspite of having two updates Back to Back...!!! Please update asap..!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏

Everytime u amused me by ur writing.nice update.cntnu soon

Nice update. But don't tempt and leave in half way yaar u just leave me impatience and breaking head situation thinking what going to next.

Angel one doubt when while dancing kalpi had a mask, but when she met Raghav and Sammy that time also she was wearing a mask, pls clear it.

Sorry for the late comment and to my good luck I am able to catch one more FF in time... I loved the starting.. The confident Kalpi who dint gave a second thought before doing a pole dance.. Giving lap dance to Sammy and THE KISS!! Though I hate such type of kisses but when it comes to RagNa, i just love it. I am surprised to know that Kalpi reciprocated. Loved Prem's care for his little sister and Kalpi who is like a sister to him. So maya is her fiancee and it's an arrange marriage but he fell in love with her. Quite interesting. Special mention.. I loved the bond between Pakhi n Kalpi. They are so good to each other... N Neetu is isn't bad.. I like to see such characters. A small glimpse of Kalpi and Neetu conversation showed that Their family relationships are very good. Rags is still thinking about Kalpi and the kiss... But why do i feel that he is going to insult her more coz he has misunderstood her and to be true I din't like the way he said I want her. She isn't an object but i guess it's coz of the MU he had coz of her convo with Sammy and the money she took from Prem.

wow u have started a naw ff I haven't told u that I 'm a big fan of ur writing skills.can u pls update shattered dreams & oyster pls & yes I gotthe frist one thanks & pm me all ur updates pls.

angel wht an update yaar...awesome always awesome...every word sinking inside my mind like blood...write more n more...cz im bein meoldramatic here...update soon dear..n raghav want kalpi...tell me wht should i think about tht...huhu☺️