Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 36

Nice update.prem nd kalpi frndship lovely.wen wil romi knw rachu nd rani are same.waiting update soon

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amazing update vishu,\\sad to see kalpi is getting emotional. but still she is fighting with her fate n ready to be died with her frnds hand for giving ppl justice frm drugs.

here romi is attracted to rach very badly that is total hesitate to even speak about har death or his motive to kjill her.
when he comes to kinw about rach is his rani his childhood frnd then it he cant even iamagine to kill her.

both are talking to moon is so touching like that moon is passing their message to each other.
evn most of tym i talk to moon n i really feel moon pass my msg to respective person.

premna as usual awsm convo. both are understand each other very keenly. both are respecting their frndship n not thinking other than this. premna knw wat kamla want still they are understanding n accepting their frndship hw thay want.

rach finally understand her feeling for romi, she accepted she attracting towards him n i thing thats first step of love.

romi want to call her nut he also nt able to understand to whom he will listen mind or brain. he too stuck in btwn them.
hope he will call her.

as usual u r fabulous vishu.

Lovely update and beautiful thoughts expressed in poetic way it so nice.

Kalpi understanding her feelings for her friend whom she didn't even remember a few days back; and then trying to coming to terms, trying to believe that her once best friend can actually kill her was fabulous. Truly a tough time for her. I am Prem a lot, I guess he is the perfect friend anyone would want, who can wait for two years and remember his friend's wish for her desired gift.

Kalpi trying to understand her long lost friend was nice
I like that she is still concern about him on how he will feel when he come to know who she really is...
Both staring at the moon and questioning it as if they are speaking to each other was awesome. It's like they have a telepathy :)
Prem and Rachu connection is amazing, anyone will be lucky to have a friend like them
Oh gosh! Romi debating on whether to call Rachu or not is kinda funny lol
Especially the battle between his brain and heart lol
Fanstatic update, beautifully written chapter

Originally posted by: vasishna

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yeeyyy finalyyy I'm back to my place yippeee..

firstly u r multi talented vish.. u write poems..ff's n then studies.. work.. dunno hw u ll manage dear..

the poem was beautifully written yaa.. simplyy Superbbb.. good one by u n priya-remix..

and d update was fantastic one.. rach n romi's talks were beautiful.. lyk kalpi thinking whether he can kill his frnd n all and she thinking wen he knows can he protect her was good.. and abt I guess no need to tel abt premna.. they too good as frnds by supporting each other in every way..

abt romi.. hope he finds out d truth abt rani cuz even his drawings matches ryt..

ok nw I'll be waiting fr next update dats it heheh..

Originally posted by: jiya007

Nice Update

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Very emotional Vish! Very nice update!

Glad that Prem n Kalpi share a platonic friendship n nothing more!

Aww Romi not realising that Rani and rachu is the same!!! poor thing!

What will happen to Rani when she comes to know Romi had left the orphanage because she had left him! Sad!

Romi now missing Rachna! So sweet loved the inner fight he has with himself!

I believe you will have to translate the poem in english too as not all ur readers know hindi! Waiting for ur next update.

Will Romi call her and if yes what will they talk or will they just listen to each other's silence again this time! Since here they dont have their eyes to do the talking, how will it be?

Will Rach realise that its Romi who is trying to call her! I think she will find it cute that he did try to contact her! Wow! I am all excited for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: appyK

Sorry iss baar short comment hai iss liye.. Fabulous update.. Loved it .. Just loved the telepathy they both share.. So Romi is soon gonna call her up thanks to his intelligent heart😉 continue soon..

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Awesome update Vish! Mostly about Rachu's pov... She is surprised that her childhood friend wants to kill her. She's looking at his eyes and thinking how he will be able to do that. She's asking herself whether he remembers her and will he recognise her. At the same time Romi also asking similar questions to himself about Rani. Romi is trying to draw Rani's picture and successfully draws her eyes. He even thinks about Rachu though he fails to realise Rani's and Rachu's eyes are the same. He's attracted to her but doesn't want to admit it. But he feels sad that he has to kill her. He wants her to have a long life.

At the same time Prem figures out that Kalpi is attracted to Romi. Rachna wants to call Romi but doesn't have his number. Whereas Romi is sitting with her number in his phone, thinking whether to call or not. Eager to know what future has in store for these lovers.