Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: shonali164
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Mre punches ka asar lgta h ab tk h.😆

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Loved it. Liked prem and rachu fighting. Prem looks like he loves each. Continue soon

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sonali

@S0nalii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: fairylover

Mre punches ka asar lgta h ab tk h.😆

yup punches ka asar to twiter pe b he 😆
Unres done dear 😳

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

The update was fabulous as usual Vish! Loved it. There was no disconnect. The camaraderie between Rachna and Prem was nice. When Vithal faked anger both of them sat down for dinner like good kids...lol. Vithal was shocked to see Rachna's childhood friend and the guy who's been given the task of killing her are the same. Neetu used to think she and her friend will marry! Later Vithal had showed Rachna all the details about John and his family. Even showed pics of Sammy and Pakhi. Now only Romi is left. Vithal initially didn't want to show her the photo but when she caught his lie he was left with no choice. She was distraught to know that it's her childhood friend. But she doesn't show any emotions for their benefit. It was lovely to see how Prem left her sensing her discomfort and the need to be alone so that she can digest this information. Prem can be a good support for her.

I'm telling you again, you don't write crappy or messy updates. You are an awesome writer 😛

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Res!!!

unresss

heyyllooo vish..

update was beautifull n intrestnggg..

I jus love d bonding btw prem n kalpi in ur both d ff's..

nw kalpi has got to know abt dat pic.. I'm wondering wat ll happen next..

Edited by vasishna - 11 years ago

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Very Interesting update. Waiting for the day when Rachana finds out the killer and her best friend are one and same!

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Arpita

@appyK

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Fabulous update Vish... Prem and Kalpi bond is super awesome.. Loving their adorable friendship... SaKhi are siblings😆 wow... Poor kalpi .. feeling bad as her BOYFRIEND is the one who has been hired to kill her..

Eager to read the next parts..

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: shonali164
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yeah m 3rd
unres
amazing update.
Love premna teasing n fighting. Oh romi is alreay her bf, n rach wl marpy him. Oh kash it hapnd
premna is scare of vithal lolz ache bache.

Glad to see vithal's cncrn for rach feeling wen he cme to knw abt dat pic.
N he is hiding it frm her.
Pakhi ki indirect entry ho gayi finaly.

Oh no atlast rach cme to knw her childhood frnd is criminal not only criminal bt he is going to kill her. So much emotional. Prem undstnding rach is touching. Hope rach wl fine.

P.s. Powerpoin presentation is realy profesional, i felt lyk its live going in frnt of me. 👏 👏
vishu lv d update. 🤗

Congos.. tu finally time pe aa toh gai. M happy u r liking it.

Premna are the obedient kids.. though one is ASP n other is reporter.

Pakhi has to make her entry.. She will have to play pivotal role in Rachana's life.

I am expert in ppts as i have made lots of them in my college n workplace. The only thing i am good at other than writing offcourse..😆

Thank u darling.🤗

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Oh poor Rach! She was so keen to meet her childhood frnd! Now she knows tht he is out to kill her! What will she do? Will she investigate and find out who her frnd is? Will her investigations lead to Romi.
She was just feeling connected to him! What will happen? I am so eager to read all of this!

Ther was no disconnect Vish! The update was fabulous as ever!

Loved Prem n Rach's camaraderie! hmmm so now Prem also has come to knw that the guy is Rach's childhood frnd! Will he be lenient towards this criminal or will be stricter!

Hoping to see more updates regularly! Thanks for such a nice read! Loving the story!

Thanks priya.. I am trying to be regular in the forum but some priors commitments are not letting me do so. Though I have given a slot to my updates but can't write it before completing my target.

M glad u liked it. Rach will deffo try to find about the assassin but not sure whether she will acknowledge his as frn or not.

Prem is ASP though he has not joined yet... his policies to deal with crime is yet to decide so can't exactly comment on that but I think he should hate the crime and not the criminal.