Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Soul mates need no words to express themselves, just like Romi/Rachu ! Lovely. Why Prem ? For competition only and not to kill Romi , please. Proceed, please ,before my curiosity 'bubble' bursts !

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice Update

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
very nice dear

Thank u guys... M glad u r giving time to the story n liking the update.. Ur encouragement means a lot.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: lolor
res...
unres...1 question...it must be difficult for u to imagine & write...sweet & lovable .kamlas char...😲
wonderful update

Thank u dear...

It's not that difficult to imagine and write when u love writing but yep it becomes difficult to recheck and correct ur mistakes as while imagining and writing u tend to make more mistakes. Hope I am improving with time.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: appyK
😭😭I'm late.. Darn my pizza...
Anyway awesome update.. Aww kalpi and raghav falling for each other.. Monu is so cute RagNa playing staring game😳😆.. Wow they can hear each others heart talk... Raghav asking for peck on cheek thing😳
Wow Chocopie ki entry😃 so is jealousy track on the way??
Continue soon..

Pizza mere bina khayegi toh aisa hi hoga😉

Thank u for liking it...

Yep jealousy for Rags but more than jealousy track it's for Rachana's safety as it's quite unrealistic that a reporter is working on such big project without any support. N Prem is here to play the role of her best friend to realize her own feelings..😊

Will try to update soon.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: chahat4u
OMG, twist and turns is your specialty. n I love it. 😃👏 Love Vitthal & Kamla here, and you made them Kapoors here! 😆👍🏼
I think I am going to love Prem here, with him being ASP of Mumbai, and Romi also near Rachana, it'd be so interesting. Love has its own ways, and unknowingly Rachana and Romi both have already formed a close bond. i love little Monu, he is so adorable; and also falling in love with Rachu-Romi eye talks!😳 The way you described Rachu's dress was so cute & girlish. 😃⭐️ 😊 n the train scene was also awesome. 😃👏

Thank u Charu.. i love CID n crime patrol so I like turns, twists n some mysteries.

Okkie.. ur post reminds me that i made a blunder... Rachan is yadav n her parents Kapoor... how is it possible?? So i just changed the line where I said they shared the same surname. Yes Vitthal n Kamla r kapoors.

u will deffo love Prem here. Once again he is going to prove that he is a true friend.

Love had entered silently in their life.. they fell for each other without knowing anything about them Thank u so much once again.

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: sunyy
Omg don't throw chappals but love prem. Damn girl. Each has it good. Continue soon.

No chappals re!! I too love Prem hence he entered in this FF as well. Will try to update soon.😊

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: shonali164
hussh such a long update. 😊
vishu 🤗
oh lvly eye chating btwn ragna. 😳
romi ka din shubh jayega rach ko dekhake. Romi rach fall for each other. Aww romi too want good bye kiss.

Love to knw kalpi's past. Oh love dis kamla. Oh kamla want rach bcme his DIL nyc. Loving premna bonding.
Vishu u like premna kya? He he

vithal n rach bond is touching. He is taking superb cr of rach. Wow vithal is SP.

Last bt nt least rach is talking to stranger [train passenger] n gving dem happiness.
Amazing update vishu. Superb.

Thank u Shona 🤗

M happy u liked the eye convo... Romi ka din toh shubh jayega but not sure about rach.😆 Usne Romi ka face jo ni dekha sabse pehle.

Kamla is a sweetheart over here. Yes i like PremNa a lot.. But not as couple.. i felt cvs ignored Prem's character whereas he had the most chances of growth.. I love the actor as well n apart from this i wanted a handsome hunk as ASP n Pakya won't look like ASP. No offence to the actor.. Out of EMA cast i only had two options.. Sammy/PRem. Sammy is already don's son n hence Prem entered.

Thank u once again for liking it. Vitthal deserved some high post after the oscar winning performance in the show.😆

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: lailabatrisyia
Wow...i actually found it is interesting when u reversed all the characters in this ff...kamla&vittal kapoor...&prem their son..and romi&rach interaction through their eyes&feeling...awesome...update soon...

Thank u dear.. M happy u liked it. I will try to update asap.😊