Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#281

😭😭I'm late.. Darn my pizza...

Anyway awesome update.. Aww kalpi and raghav falling for each other.. Monu is so cute RagNa playing staring game😳😆.. Wow they can hear each others heart talk... Raghav asking for peck on cheek thing😳

Wow Chocopie ki entry😃 so is jealousy track on the way??

Continue soon..

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#282

OMG, twist and turns is your specialty. n I love it. 😃👏 Love Vitthal & Kamla here, and you made them Kapoors here! 😆👍🏼

I think I am going to love Prem here, with him being ASP of Mumbai, and Romi also near Rachana, it'd be so interesting. Love has its own ways, and unknowingly Rachana and Romi both have already formed a close bond. i love little Monu, he is so adorable; and also falling in love with Rachu-Romi eye talks!😳 The way you described Rachu's dress was so cute & girlish. 😃⭐️ 😊 n the train scene was also awesome. 😃👏

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Omg don't throw chappals but love prem. Damn girl. Each has it good. Continue soon.

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sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

hussh such a long update. 😊
vishu 🤗
oh lvly eye chating btwn ragna. 😳
romi ka din shubh jayega rach ko dekhake. Romi rach fall for each other. Aww romi too want good bye kiss.

Love to knw kalpi's past. Oh love dis kamla. Oh kamla want rach bcme his DIL nyc. Loving premna bonding.
Vishu u like premna kya? He he

vithal n rach bond is touching. He is taking superb cr of rach. Wow vithal is SP.

Last bt nt least rach is talking to stranger [train passenger] n gving dem happiness.
Amazing update vishu. Superb.

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lailabatrisyia

@lailabatrisyia

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Wow...i actually found it is interesting when u reversed all the characters in this ff...kamla&vittal kapoor...&prem their son..and romi&rach interaction through their eyes&feeling...awesome...update soon...

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Oho Prem is the bodyguard!!! I am sure Romi is not going to be hapy about this.

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Wow Prem is ASP and Raghav gangster, waiting for ur update

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Chin2_n

@Chin2_n

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

So well written vish 👏

Irony is prem is kamala and vittals son 😆

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Outstanding update
Aww Rachu came to say bye to Romi :)
Both falling for each other which I love ;)
Hmm... Prem is kamla son lol
I can't wait to read more