Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

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awesome update vish.. loved RagNa's eyetalk and Raghav sarcastically saying that he loved kids..😆 Ab bechaare ko roz monu ki sharaarat jhelni padegi😆
And of course beautiful poem.. it totally described Rach's pov and feelings.. loved it..😉


Thank u Appy... m glad u liked it. Romi is a gangster so how can he like kids?? I will try to give some cute scenes between Monu and Romi.😊

Poem... Whippy!! See I am improving a bit.😆 Dekho.. Dekhna kahi jhuthi tareef k chakkar m aur poems na jhelni pad jye.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK


lol yeah..😆
never gonna stop stalking😉


Glad to know that.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragnasangle

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AWESOME UPDATE
Nice poem


Thank u dear.. M glad u liked update and poem.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Good update dear love how Rags developing feeling for Rachana.


Thank u dear.. I was scared while writing their scene but I am glad u liked it.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Loved Rach- Romi eye conversation. They felt they knew each other from before. If only they knew they are childhood buddies and soul mates. Both are surprised as to how they have such strong feelings for the other person whom they barely know. Romi's plan to scare Rach using fake lizard backfired. He also has to keep Monu company from now onwards. He's gonna have a tough time😉. Liked how he bribed the kid into accepting that he did all that scaring but kid is too smart for him. Remote car instead of chocolates. ...😃 Loved how they both wanted to see each other before she left. Granny's love story was cute. Last but not the least I absolutely loved the poem. It exactly portrays Rachna's inner thoughts and emotions.


Kiara... 🤗ur reply always amazes me... How u get so much matter to write on my crappy updates.. U r truly a motivating frn. Thanks buddy.. ur efforts really means a lot to the writers of this forum.

M hppy that u liked the update.Tried to show some soul connection between RagNa by their eye conversation and that last scene.

that Monu part to show that our Romi is not lovely dovely type of hero who plays with kid and flatters the girl.. He is going to have tough time to manage the kid.

Thank u for liking the poem as well...But i said to Appy... Praise me and bear more poems from my side.😃😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna


unres Unres Unres..
first of all u write poems so beautifulyyy dear.. I lykd it!
and abt d update it was superbbb one.. romi n rach's eye conversatn was cute one to read..
and already rach s getting very attracted to romi hehe n praying kanha to stop her in dng dat Lol bt our vish won't stop her in this thng so easily ahaha..
and yeahh romi's n kiddo convo was funny n already monu strtd blackmailing romi cute one..
totally its a wonderful update dear..


Thank u so much Vaishu.. M glad u liked the poem.. That was the toughest part of my update.

No... I won't stop any such things right now... more RagNa scene on the way... As I promised this will be a pure love story unlike my other two Ffs.

M sure u will like Monu more in the future.😊 Thanks once again dear. Love u.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Thank u Appy... m glad u liked it. Romi is a gangster so how can he like kids?? I will try to give some cute scenes between Monu and Romi.😊

Poem... Whippy!! See I am improving a bit.😆 Dekho.. Dekhna kahi jhuthi tareef k chakkar m aur poems na jhelni pad jye.😆


Would love to jhelofy more poems😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Exciting . Romi and Rachana are soulmates, they need no words to understand each other. Lovely updates. Love esp. the little kid , Manu and Rach's dog, Bruno. Looking forward to the continuation.


Thank u dear... M glad u r liking the characters of the story and update. Thank u. Will try to update soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK


Would love to jhelofy more poems😆


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