Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

I love the way RagNa was having their conversation through their eyes lol
That was so cute ;)
Raghav is not the only one falling in love ;)
Raghav trying to used the fake lizard to scared Kalpi was funny lol
I like the way she picked up the lizard and Raghav shocked state was superb
Kalpi prove she is no ordinary girl, she is unique :)
RagNa don't want to let each other go was beautiful
I can't wait for them to get closer and closer
Money is so cute. I like his demand to Raghav lol
Granny reminiscing about her sweet days with her husband was wonderful
Superb update

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow vish nice update!
Loved how you showed that their eyes are conversing! Kalpi already has the hots for Rags and her asking daadi about faling in love was very cute!

Romi already cant keep his eyes off her! LOL the lizard prank fell flat, oh what all could have happened if she got scared! Ha Ha

Romi and Rach feeling connected felt so good to read! And I just loved ur poem!

Just few lines I wanted to write for your Rach from her POV:

Barson se rahi banjar zameen ki tarah
Par baarish ki boondein jo mujhpe padi zara
Ye Ehsaas hua kitni pyaasi thi mein
dhoond rahi thi tujhe, ye mere udaasi se bhare nain
Teri nazron ne jo aaj mujhe is tarah chuaa
Mano ye banjar zameen bhi phoolon ka baagh hua!

Thanks Priya. I am glad u r liking it.

N thanks for liking my poem but the lines u wrote are awesome!! I will definitely use it in one of my update.. May be after kissing scene or confession... It might take time but I will surely use it. I hope i am allowed to do so.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I love the way RagNa was having their conversation through their eyes lol
That was so cute ;)
Raghav is not the only one falling in love ;)
Raghav trying to used the fake lizard to scared Kalpi was funny lol
I like the way she picked up the lizard and Raghav shocked state was superb
Kalpi prove she is no ordinary girl, she is unique :)
RagNa don't want to let each other go was beautiful
I can't wait for them to get closer and closer
Money is so cute. I like his demand to Raghav lol
Granny reminiscing about her sweet days with her husband was wonderful
Superb update

Thanks Natasha... I am glad u r liking the Romi-Rach and there love story.. Deffo Romi is not the only falling in love. Romi and Rach both are unique here.

I will try to show some more romantic scene. N I just hope that I succeeds in it. Thank u once again dear for motivating me by ur feedback.😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: fairylover

Thank u Charu.. M glad u liked it but still I can't beat u in romance...U write super romantic scenes... I am finding it difficult to write.😊

Thank u for liking poem. 😊 That is the most difficult part of update.😊 But ur compliements motivate me to write more.

Will try to update soon.

The way you showed their soul connection was also romantic. 😊 So you do write good, romantic scenes. 👏 Your poems are really lovely, do continue writing. 😃

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Hello guys... I have an exam in oct-Nov so I won't be able to give much time to my updates. I may try to give 1 update per week but not too sure about it. So what do u want from me?? Do u want me to complete the story this in next 4-5 updates so u dnt have to wait or should I continue it with delayed updates... Do lemme know.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

I'd prefer delayed updates. But at the end choice is yours. 😊 All the best for your exams.👍🏼

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

I guess U only know it better...u decide...

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

@Appy : Thank u dear.. hope u will come to read my updates.😊

@Jiya : Thank for accepting whatever I decide.

@Charu... Thanks. I knew that u will ask for delayed update as a good writer like u cn understand that what happens to the story in hurry.😊

@Lolor : 😊 Thank u for accepting my dcsn whole heartedly.

@Zindgidilse : Sorry dnt know ur name... What should I call u?? Thanks for the suggestion.😊

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

If you think that Rami has a long way to go then delayed updates are also qubool to me but if you feel you will not be in tandem with the storyline if you take long breaks then you may end this story soon and ofcourse you can always start with a fresh story!!!