Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec)

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Res

unres unres

wowww.. update was superrbbb dear n was an emotional one too..

I loved d way u created ur story btw rachu n his brother.. it was marvellous one.. I lykd it!

and nw yeahhh ragna on their way..

Edited by vasishna - 10 years ago

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Such an emotional update. Totally loved it Vish. You have shown relation between Rachna and Adi beautifully. The way she brought him up as a parent and how she confronted him when she came to know he's taking drugs is really nice. The scene where he told he will stay away from drugs so that she doesn't have tears in her eyes is overwhelming. Got emotional when read about Adi's suicide attempt and subsequent coma. Poor girl, she suffered so much at a young age. Hope everything gets better for her once ragna starts.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Bro-sis relation was so emotional! 😭 Fabulous update again.😃👏

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: appyK
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This time I'm the stalker😆

I love stalkers like u😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: appyK
Upar waala unresed... Excitement mein do baar res kar diya😆
The flashback was really emotional... Loved the way adi promises his sister about not consuming drugs... When I read that part when Rach gets to know about adi committing suicide I literally had goosebumps all over my skin... Now got the whole plan of killing Rach and all..
Guess so RagNa will start soon..😉
Continue soon..

Thanks Appy for liking it.

Yep I thought to make RagNa meet here only but I was really tired but now I can tell that RagNa will meet in next part for sure.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: vasishna
Res
unres unres
wowww.. update was superrbbb dear n was an emotional one too..
I loved d way u created ur story btw rachu n his brother.. it was marvellous one.. I lykd it!
and nw yeahhh ragna on their way..

Thanks Vaishu for liking it.

I am glad that u liked Adi-Rach relationship. N yep RagNa will surely meet in next part.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: jiya007
wonderful update

Thanks Jiya.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: vartekaa
Nice update

Thank u.😊

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Such an emotional update. Totally loved it Vish. You have shown relation between Rachna and Adi beautifully. The way she brought him up as a parent and how she confronted him when she came to know he's taking drugs is really nice. The scene where he told he will stay away from drugs so that she doesn't have tears in her eyes is overwhelming. Got emotional when read about Adi's suicide attempt and subsequent coma. Poor girl, she suffered so much at a young age. Hope everything gets better for her once ragna starts.

Thank u sweetheart for liking it. ur comments always make me happy.

For Adi Rachana is her everything, he can lose his life but can't break the promise he gave to Rach n the same way Rachu has promised herself to not cry and stay happy for Adi's sake.

I was worried that people might not connect with this Kalpi as on one hand she is so messy that she can't keep her room clean whereas on other side she is mother figure to Adi but m glad till now no one pointed out this inconsistency.

Thank u once again.😊