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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved kalpi's bond wit Bruno n granny n kalpi's convo
Loved d way u shwd raghav n kalpi's soul connection
Eager 4 ragna first meeting ...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Umm nice ,is sammy in grey shade? Romi Rani waiting for love story.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so-2 beautiful and emotional! 😃 Bruno & Rachana relation part; and Aditya-Rachana (bro-sis) parts were awesome and super-emotional! I wonder what happened to put Aditya in a coma like this!
I loved sweetness and bubbly nature of Rachana very much; and in particular following lines took my breath away: R : "Not yet but I do not know why I feel someone somewhere is waiting for me.. He will come one day and tell me that I am his life.. He won't look at my face but will look through me.. directly into my eyes... And he will take away pain of my heart.. and will fill it with love.."

It is like so true for every girl, yearning for love, especially someone who has only seen pain. Granny-Rachana convo was cute, loved their interaction & relation.

The last parts where you showed souk-connection of Romi and Rachana was so cute, it already shows the deep bond and true, divine love these two share! I am so looking forward to their coming face to face, and their love story!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too good vish superb ya. This story is goin to turn out fabulous n full of curiosity at the end of every update. Romi -rach bachpan ka pyaar, Bruno n granny bro adi kya baat hai vish full on dhamaal story read Karne millegi.love it.👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Vish, so sorry about Dela. I know exactly how you feel. I lost mine 8 years back and not gotten over it yet. Many told me to adopt one again but I didn't want to go through the same pain once more. Because of Dela you were able to describe Rachna and Bruno's relation beautifully. Poor dog, he couldn't open its eyes due to Romi's sleeping pills. Loved Rachna's perception about marriage. The guy should be able to look directly in the eyes, ease the pain of heart and fill her life with love. Wow, so romantic. Her granny is smart, turning deaf ears when asked about dress selection. 😆 Rachna has hidden all the clothes in bed sheet. Poor granny has to fold it all. Her brother Adi in coma. Hope it will be revealed soon what happened to him. Romi's knew she was close by and controlled his anger.Ragna and their telepathic connection. She's the perfect antidote for him and his anger. Is he going to follow her? To top it all he left their childhood pic in the diary😲


Ahh sweetie... I can understand how u feels about adopting a new dog. My situation is same.. Dad told me too adopt one but I denied saying I won't be able to bear the pain of losing it again though I have already lost two dogs.. First one died by falling from stairs so my aunt gifted me Dela so that I can overcome the loss.

Thanks for liking it.. Romi's intentions were not bad for Bruno so we can forgive him for giving sleeping pills.
Rachana's expectation from his bf is exactly what I wanted in my bf 😆 But sabko sab kuch kaha milta h.. LOL!! Just kidding!!

Granny knows Rachana very well and Rachana is the mess maker 😆

Our RagNa are connected by soul so I have to show it!! Rachana is the one who will change Romi from angry young man to sophisticated one.

No.. he can't follow her.. She already left in auto and he don't know that the totto girl is none other than Rachana. I have not decided anything about the pic yet..

For u : This story is not decided from the start. It's like a serial for me.😉
Thank u for detailed feedback.. i love u for this!! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Superb update

Loved kalpi's bond wit Bruno n granny n kalpi's convo
Loved d way u shwd raghav n kalpi's soul connection
Eager 4 ragna first meeting ...cont soon



Thanks Rani.. the 3 of them(Bruno, Granny n Adi) is Rach's life.

Thank u again for liking RagNa connection.. Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Umm nice ,is sammy in grey shade? Romi Rani waiting for love story.


Thank u.. Yep Romi is in grey shade but not toatally negative. He is with Romi coz of his power but is insecure of Romi-John bond.

Romi Rani aka RagNa love story will start soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

It was so-2 beautiful and emotional! 😃 Bruno & Rachana relation part; and Aditya-Rachana (bro-sis) parts were awesome and super-emotional! I wonder what happened to put Aditya in a coma like this!

I loved sweetness and bubbly nature of Rachana very much; and in particular following lines took my breath away: R : "Not yet but I do not know why I feel someone somewhere is waiting for me.. He will come one day and tell me that I am his life.. He won't look at my face but will look through me.. directly into my eyes... And he will take away pain of my heart.. and will fill it with love.."

It is like so true for every girl, yearning for love, especially someone who has only seen pain. Granny-Rachana convo was cute, loved their interaction & relation.

The last parts where you showed souk-connection of Romi and Rachana was so cute, it already shows the deep bond and true, divine love these two share! I am so looking forward to their coming face to face, and their love story!


Thanks Charu.. Hearing compliments from an amazing writer like u makes me happy.

Will tell Adi and her parents story in next part,.

Thank u for liking this Rachana... She is chirpy girl who knows how to smile in difficult situation. But still she is waiting for someone who can understand the pain behind his smile.. Well while writing this I was remembering the poem of ur blog.. 😊 I can't tell u how much I liked it.

our RagNa are made for each other and that is what I tried to show.. m glad I succeeded in it.. Will let them meet soon... Just need to introduce Adi and Pakhi and the plot of their meeting.

Thanks for detailed feedback.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Too good vish superb ya. This story is goin to turn out fabulous n full of curiosity at the end of every update. Romi -rach bachpan ka pyaar, Bruno n granny bro adi kya baat hai vish full on dhamaal story read Karne millegi.love it.👏👏


Thank u Rubz.. U r a sweetheart.. I am happy u like it and will try my best to fulfill ur expectations.😊

Thanks for the encouragement.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fairylover


Ahh sweetie... I can understand how u feels about adopting a new dog. My situation is same.. Dad told me too adopt one but I denied saying I won't be able to bear the pain of losing it again though I have already lost two dogs.. First one died by falling from stairs so my aunt gifted me Dela so that I can overcome the loss.

Thanks for liking it.. Romi's intentions were not bad for Bruno so we can forgive him for giving sleeping pills.
Rachana's expectation from his bf is exactly what I wanted in my bf 😆 But sabko sab kuch kaha milta h.. LOL!! Just kidding!!

Granny knows Rachana very well and Rachana is the mess maker 😆

Our RagNa are connected by soul so I have to show it!! Rachana is the one who will change Romi from angry young man to sophisticated one.

No.. he can't follow her.. She already left in auto and he don't know that the totto girl is none other than Rachana. I have not decided anything about the pic yet..

For u : This story is not decided from the start. It's like a serial for me.😉
Thank u for detailed feedback.. i love u for this!! 😊

So sad to hear you lost not one but two dogs. Oh dear, fell off the stairs. Poor thing😭. So sorry! I know Romi didn't mean any harm to Bruno. Nice to hear the romantic lines are your own idea of a bf. Hope such a person exists and not a dream.LOL... How can I forget that she left before Romi came. Stupid me 😲 TV serial writers should learn from you how to make an episode story. Take your time dear. Luv you for the sweet and frank reply.🤗

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