Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 10

Originally posted by: vasishna

Heyyy vish.. sryy im late..

Update was amazngg yaar..

I lykd d poem a lottt it was beautifull dear..

I'm waiting eagerly wen dey ll meet first n in which situatn n all.

And if I'm nt mistaken.. in some para u wrote john instead of romi I guess.. anyways nyc update dear..

Awesome update

Originally posted by: fairylover

It's ok sweetie.. No need to say sorry.

Thank u for liking it. They will meet soon.. May be in next part.

John is the Don re!! Sammy's father. I meant him only that he already has some other plans for Rach but Romi can't stop himself from going her home.

Originally posted by: vasishna

Lol.. sryyy dear.. I got a bit confused..😕

Waiting fr d nxt part then.. their first meet..😉

Originally posted by: rani214

Awesome update

Beautiful poem...luvd it

Lik d way Maya said dat if he was nt heartless he would have fallen 4 her eyes...haha use kya pata already he is mesmerized by her beauty n eyes

eagerly w8ng 4 der first meeting ...update soon dear

Originally posted by: fairylover

It was my mistake.. I edited it after reading ur comment.. I wrote him just after John's name so u got confuse but than replaced him with Romi to avoid further confusion.. Will try to update soon.

This was such an amazing update. I wanted to read more. The way you described Romi breaking into Rachana's home was fab, and entire description and details of that scene!😃👏 The dream/FB Romi saw of his best friend being separated from him was painful. I guess Rachana only must be that friend of his. Looking forward to read more! Do update soon.❤️

Sorry dear for late comments. Romi/Raghav is the little boy and Rani is Rachna, right? Hope he gets to know that from the diary. Loved him admiring her sleeping. Couldn't help but laugh when i read that he stood in front of mirror and asked himself whether he smiles when asleep. Smart guy, carried biscuits loaded with sleeping pills for the dog. There's also Maya in ff. Little does she know that Romi already noticed Rachna's eyes and is attracted to her. Hope he protects her instead from those who want to kill her. Abhi is ff mein zyada suspense mat laana. 😉

Awesome too good story... N d poem superb... Continue soon...romi fallin in love hmm...

Awesome ff! Just read all updates and loving it!