Entwined to Eternity;Update on page 74 (3rd Dec) - Page 11

Beautiful Lovely update ... It's interesting to know till WHEN Raghav Will control his feeling ???

Originally posted by: chahat4u

This was such an amazing update. I wanted to read more. The way you described Romi breaking into Rachana's home was fab, and entire description and details of that scene!😃👏 The dream/FB Romi saw of his best friend being separated from him was painful. I guess Rachana only must be that friend of his. Looking forward to read more! Do update soon.❤️

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Sorry dear for late comments. Romi/Raghav is the little boy and Rani is Rachna, right? Hope he gets to know that from the diary. Loved him admiring her sleeping. Couldn't help but laugh when i read that he stood in front of mirror and asked himself whether he smiles when asleep. Smart guy, carried biscuits loaded with sleeping pills for the dog. There's also Maya in ff. Little does she know that Romi already noticed Rachna's eyes and is attracted to her. Hope he protects her instead from those who want to kill her. Abhi is ff mein zyada suspense mat laana. 😉

Originally posted by: foram.

loved the update...

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Awesome too good story... N d poem superb... Continue soon...romi fallin in love hmm...

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Awesome ff! Just read all updates and loving it!

Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Beautiful Lovely update ... It's interesting to know till WHEN Raghav Will control his feeling ???

For the poem, I have to say Waah Waah Waah kya bat hain 😉

Just a request, plz do the next chap longer, if u can lol

Originally posted by: fairylover

Thanks Charu... m glad u r liking the details coz I know I am poor in it and trying to learn from ur FFs. I like the way u describe situations such that we can visualize it.

Yes Rachana is her best friend and in next one or two update I will try to enlighten that part of their life.

Originally posted by: chahat4u

How sweet of you Vish. 😊🤗 You are a fab writer in your own right, so this is a compliment and your humble attitude to give me credit for! 😊 n yes I forgot to add that I simply loved the poem. It was terrific. 😃👏

Originally posted by: fairylover

Thank u Kiara..🤗

NO need to say sorry but i always wait for ur comment.. It feels good to see ur reader taking interest in ur writing and giving detailed feedback. And u know what ur feedback always encourages me to write more. Thank u dear.

Romi isn't a normal guy but a sharp shooter and he very well knows how to tackle the situation so he managed Bruno.

I was planning to include Pookhi instead of Maya but than thought people may dislike Pookhi-Rags partnership so Maya.

And chill... No suspense in this.. It's a plain love story. Ab itni buri b ni hu mai😉

Thank you for such a sweet reply. Glad to know I'm encouraging you somehow. Feeling proud though I know your ff s are great because you are an amazing writer. Thank god you didn't put Pookhi in this . Fed up of her name being dragged everywhere. No suspense, great!!!! Did you think I will not notice that you didn't answer my question about they being childhood friends? Chalo, koi baat nahi. Sach toh ek din samne aayega. 😉