Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

As far as I knw.. a complete update would be better than an incumplte one.. cuz I felt dat there ll be a lack of interest while readng d cumplte update aftr readng d incumplte one..it was jus my opinion so its better dat wenevr u update, though it takes a lot of tym, give us a cumplte update.. we ll be waitnggg😃😊

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Aru18

@Aru18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

wonderful update charu

and you not bore with day rutinue..its really good

finallly raghav understand his feelings for kalpi but kalpi still not trust him

looking forword for there lunch..continue soon

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow!!!! Charruuu tu aaa gayiii
Ohhh meri jaaan looo main aaa gayiii

romance ki mallika!!!! Aapka swagat hai!!!!😃

Please complete it naaa it just want to keep reading!!! Till now whatever I have read was just fantastic!!!

What a lovely way to take revenge!!! To get her more and more closer to him!

😆

Aww you answered my question as to how did she react to his popularity all these years! Oh this is awesome! Please complete this soon! I am waiting!

OMG your mom's having an angiography!!!! Hope all's well! Do let me know dear!

LOL, thanks for the warm welcome Priya! 😆

Completed the update!!!! Did you like it?

Glad you liking this method of revenge. 😃😳

Yes, answered your question! 😃❤️

My Mum is better.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: Anjinie
awesome update, loved Sammy and Raghav's bonding, looking forward to Raghav going to Kalpi's house

Thanks dear for liking it.

Originally posted by: sunyy
Loved it. Love how rags wants to stay close to kalpi and kalpi wants to stay away from rags. Am so interested to see how it all plays out!

Thanks, glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sweet1308
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Unrest qat a lovely update totally awesome rag revenge keeping her close n kalpi failing continuously t keep away the feel of rag from her t sweet waiting for rag t meet kalpi at home so lovely update soon

Thanks a lot dear. ❤️ I'll try to update soon.😳

Originally posted by: niru04
Amazing update.complete soon

Thanks and completed!!!

Originally posted by: mariee
Firstly pass my get well soon wishes to ur mom. 😃

Now, speaking abt d update ...it was gr8 !!
I liked the initial rammy convo ...the way Raghav revealed every single thing to him is evident Enuf to tell the amount of trust he has on him.
Kalpi's truly in mess !! Hope she clears it all soon.
Continue soon

MARUSHKAA

Thank for the wishes for my mum dear. 😃

Glad you liked the update. Shall try to update soon.

Originally posted by: lolor
lovely update...
waiting rags at kalpis home...pls complete soon...

Thanks dear and completed the update.

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
waiting 4 cmplete update...thanks..amazing story..😃

Thanks dear and completed it.😳

Originally posted by: diti96
Pl complete the part soon
Thanks for updating it
Iwas waiting
I lovedd it

Thanks dear and completed the update!

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Sammy trying to get info on Raghav about his changed behavior was awesome
I like how distractted Raghav was not realized Sammy questions but blurt out everything lol
Is it revenge??? Like Sammy I don't think so ;)
Raghav is deeply in love with Kalpi, "his happiness"
Aww Kalpi think so much about Raghav even though she tried her best not to 😛
Beautiful update. Waiting for the completion :)

Thanks for loving Rammy scenes. 😃 Yes Raghav does love Kalpi but his ego comes in way to realising it completely..

Thanks for your feedback and completed the update.

Originally posted by: charvi3
Lovely update dear... Complete it soon

Thanks dear and completed the update!

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: appyK
Incomplete yet fabulous update..
Really awesome way of describing RagNa's situation.. Their feelings and emotions are so opposite and confusing.. Like Raghav saying I want to see her become successful and I'll make sure its only because of me.. Its .. Its like tge most weirdest combination giving the most tastiest food.. (Couldn't find anything better to describe it.. Sowwiee😳)
Loving it..

Thanks Arpita. Give any example but as long as you are liking it I don't mind! 🤗 Glad you loved it.

Originally posted by: premap
Fab 'incomplete' update ! Your update was like 'drops of water' to a man in the desert ! Almost all the writers seem to have 'stopped' their updates for time being [exams, workload, family commitments etc ] But you were the only Angel who have saved the 'starving 'souls ! Not only you updated one of my favourite FF but it was simply very romantic with Rags / Kalpi realising their feelings for each other! Thanks.

Thanks so much and loved your comment! it was so sweet! Also it si so good to hear that this is one of your favourite FFs. 😃 Hope you read completed part also. 😳

Originally posted by: redpetal
It's an awesome update. Pls complete it today. I liked your this ff very much and I just want you to give your precious time to this ff little more than your other ff. 😊

Thanks dear, so good to hear that you love this FF. 😃 I'll try to fulfill your request! 😃 ❤️

Originally posted by: ariarai
This is really awesome charu👏

Thanks Aria darling. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice update
Update soon next part

Thank You dear. I'll try to update soon.

Originally posted by: eishe10
Great😉

Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: niru04
Nice update

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
beautiful update dida... Nd raghav is so naughty... Plzz in dono k beech ki missundrstndng dur kero Dida jaldi...

Thank You dear. Years of distance will take sometime to vanish.

Originally posted by: abxetz
Hi charu update bahuth interesting dha.khaas karke raghav air kalpana keep beech ki nok jok.hope ki apki mom is well now.

Thank You dear. Glad you liked the update. Thanks a lot for asking about my mu. Yes she is better now. 😳

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: fairylover
Finally an update...Incomplete though.. but something from Charu's diary... Yippie!! Lemme dance first.. Dhink chika dhink chika!!
Awesome... I wasn't expecting Rags to spill the bean to Sammy but m glad he did... he definitely needs someone to understand his feelings... This Rags surprised me by expecting that he likes her and wants to keep her close... Unlike all other stories... This Rags is the sweet and a perfect gentleman and I guess it's my fav version of Rags among all the FFs of the forum... I admire such person who isn't tough to understand and doesn't complicates the situation.

Kalpi is truly in mess... She is still not ready to accept her feelings for him... She is still trusting him and somewhere in her heart she knows that Rags is innocent but she isn't ready to accept it coz of evidences... I just hope that she believes on his innocence without any proof...

Kamla is a caring mother... I wish she talks to Kalpi about the changes in her life... Right now Kalpi has no one to share her feelings.. even her bf won't understand her so her mother should try to talk to her.. Though it will be tough Kalpi to share such details with her mother.

Awww...Vish such a long comment on an Incomplete Update! Wow! 😃 But did you like the completed part also? 😃😳

It is so sweet to know that this Rags is your fav version 😃 Thanks a lot for liking it. 🤗

If Kalpi changes in a matter of one or two weeks when there has been eight years of separation and older history of self-created myths about their feelings for each other, then it will look odd. I will try to clear their misunderstanding soon and also keep your suggestion in mind. 😃

Yes, Kalpi needs to talkt o Kamla. Right now Kamla is givign Kalpi her space, but Kalpi may confide in her mother later on.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: chahat4u

Awww...Vish such a long comment on an Incomplete Update! Wow! 😃 But did you like the completed part also? 😃😳

It is so sweet to know that this Rags is your fav version 😃 Thanks a lot for liking it. 🤗

If Kalpi changes in a matter of one or two weeks when there has been eight years of separation and older history of self-created myths about their feelings for each other, then it will look odd. I will try to clear their misunderstanding soon and also keep your suggestion in mind. 😃

Yes, Kalpi needs to talkt o Kamla. Right now Kamla is givign Kalpi her space, but Kalpi may confide in her mother later on.

Just now read the complete part... It's awesome babes!! I wonder why u gave that note that u r boring us by giving that day wise description.. I loved that part.. It was quite unique n a mind blowing way of telling the story... It reminds me of some movies or serials where they show flipping pages of calenders along with different fast fwded scenes of leads to show that few months have passed... I always feel that sudden leap in the story breaks the continuity and we can't do anything about it... But u gave an awesome way to show the passing time... Hats off babes.

BTW r u still angry on me?? No comments on my FF... U know I don't feel like updating next part of my FFs without ur comments... I always wait for comments of some people before updating and u r on the top of that list.

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: fairylover

Just now read the complete part... It's awesome babes!! I wonder why u gave that note that u r boring us by giving that day wise description.. I loved that part.. It was quite unique n a mind blowing way of telling the story... It reminds me of some movies or serials where they show flipping pages of calenders along with different fast fwded scenes of leads to show that few months have passed... I always feel that sudden leap in the story breaks the continuity and we can't do anything about it... But u gave an awesome way to show the passing time... Hats off babes.

BTW r u still angry on me?? No comments on my FF... U know I don't feel like updating next part of my FFs without ur comments... I always wait for comments of some people before updating and u r on the top of that list.

VISH!!!! Firstly let me reply to your question. No I am not angry or upset with you! How can I be! I know time has forced me to change a lot but some per cent of old me is still there. I always felt happy and believed in keeping friendships close to me, get angry with my friends, express my unhappiness because I never did that with others! And also bear my friend's tantrums, angers, the beauty of their different nature but I simply hated letting friends go away. This was such a petty matter for me to keep the upsetting feelings so close to me for days! Life has much serious blows, especially by friends.

Besides this is not me to not talk, not post comment or forge lines of communication with anyone, with close ones.

It is just that caught up in too much. I have been very poor in commenting on FFs generally since sometime. With mum's health and other issues; my bro n all here; n pending outlines for FFs, pending updates; and other issues I was a mess. But I am trying to improve. I am sorry, I simply commented on just any FF which caught my eye when I was free. there was no pick and choose. I know I hurt you and sorry for that. I'll try to makeup for it tomorrow or after. Love.

Now for other part, Thanks a lot for loving this way. Coming from you means a lot, because I know you judge stories on serious parameters which is good. Thanks dear. Muah, and love you always. 😃🤗❤️

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#479

WOW WOW WOW UPDATE.

Have u ever read a Rajesh Khanna's Autobiography????//////..

You have written this update,like a professional film novelist . .While writing this,

you were really into the characters totally.That's getting reflected in your crisp style.

Poor Soul,Kalpi. She is a totally lost girl in terms of heart and soul before the super star.

I had really liked that line said by Raghav," When Kalpi was giving him an earful after that Good Morning Kiss,he got bewildered and gave HER one more surprising desert and told her,your body and soul tunes to my touch more finely,hence you too accept it and get used to it".

And the daywise events description was too too awesome. It wasn't boring at all,

It had varied emotions of Raghav towards Kalpi.

Right from snatching away her lunch box and giving his own tiffin having her Mother's favourite

Kulcha to her.If he couldn't have put that note ,taking his mom's name.then she mustn't have

eaten a morsel of food that day.

Second day's was too funny,reminding her ,how he had accurately taken measurements of herlike a

professional tailor.

He is the only person,who can actually make her senses go wary before him despite having an alert mind.He didn't even touch her skin that day but his nearness did everything.

Her dignity and self respect in the society is his prime concern,He had proved that by giving a

life and death situation to that reporter.

THE GREAT RAGHAV SINGHANIA WANTS TO TAKE REVENGE AGAINST HER BY KEEPING

HER REALLY VERY CLOSE TO HIS HEART AND SOUL.AND THE LADY CONCERNED IS TOTALLY LOST BEFORE HER HEART AND SOUL FOR RAGHAV BUT HER MND IS NOT ACCEPTING THE TRUTH.

AND LET'S SEE WHETHER THE SUNDAY LUNCH WILL REVERSE THE SITUATION AND MAKE ONE ATLEAST TO CONFESS THEIR FEELINGS.

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